Dragon Clan************

Everything else is fine except for some inexplicable awkwardness in the dialogue and the fact that Eri's personality has changed a lot. I can't even recognize the core of this character. I can't understand the relationship between the protagonist and Eri. It's just that the protagonist is a bit too doting. In fact, this is fine, after all, her life is a tragedy and she really needs love to indulge her.

It's okay, there's not much of a problem overall, just a few typos. Is the author Hui Liyi the male protagonist's sister or the female protagonist?

Very well written But I want to know, after all the hard work the protagonist has done, will Eri Yi still fall in love with Lu Mingfei again?

It's pretty good, but can you change the name? This name is a bit...

Does the author have a knife? @I am the outdoor king

Brother, have you become Jiangnan? Why do you delay updating like him?

I finished reading it again, [crying] [crying] [crying] I still want to read it, it looks like a semi-invincible novel. Come on, author, keep an eye on you! ! ! ! ! ! !

I want to see Eri and Minamoto! The writing is very good, I plan to keep following it, and the character of the male protagonist is also very good, so that's it

It looks good and makes up for the pain Jiangnan gave me.

A very good book, the author must work hard!

Good news, but I'm curious if Eriyi got together in the end.

Good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short good short

Come on, author! Like it very much

It's pretty good, come on

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Haokan feels pretty good

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

It's to my liking. Good luck to the author.

The author wants to see it when he comes back

There is no knife in the whole game [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Just a little less

It's very beautiful. The author should update it quickly. I beg you, don't force me to kneel down.

A must-read for those who like Dragon Clan and have a hard time over Erashi

Come on! Good looking, love watching, don't be a eunuch

Looking forward to the author becoming popular

Cool, hey hey hey hey hey

It's okay, there are no poisonous spots at the moment

Good magazine, love magazine, like magazine

Come on author, I like it very much

Great, thank you to the author

Little monster! Little monster!