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Is there any book about Star Dome Railway? Although it's hard to be stabbed in the back, the plot is still very good. I want to read it! *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*
[Looking for Books That Are Similar to Sending Yourself into the Card Pool! ! ! Specific Themes Are Not Limited]
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Come and Have a Few High-Scoring Hits on Miyou. I'm Already Hungry.
As long as it's from Miyou, it's okay.
Seeking High-Quality Articles from Jue District Zero
The more the better, there is a shortage of books, anything is fine
I Really Want to See a Cute Little Boy. I Just Looked at Those Few over and over Again, but They Weren't Enough.
Shota! I Want Shota! I've Been Controlled by Shota
Experimental Body Brand Xiao Zhengtai😛do You Have It🤩
Absolute Zero? Poke Area Zero! (The Dog's Head Saves Life)
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I want to read a book similar to "Zero My Agent Life".
Absolute Zero! I Want! Absolute Zero!
I'm Looking for a Book from Jue District Zero. Now When I Open the Community, Everyone Has Read the Tag.
Want to watch something similar to "Zero: Virtual Hunt"? I tell you to seal your sword and remove your armor! Book. Not picky about food, just looking for new books
Absolute Zero, No Harem, No Stallion, Dude Is Very Pure
I want to read a book like "Zero Zero: My Survival on Six Point Street". I want to see something more pure.
The Male Protagonist Is Shota, Very Cute and Very Strong
Bengtie, Ompharos, Good Book (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
I would like to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: The Inscription of Salvation Beginning with Omphalos".
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I want to read a book similar to "Genshin Impact Card Pool Characters, I Cry All the Players on the Internet".
Time Travel to Comics, Supernatural Academy, with Forum Elements
If You Want the Protagonist to Become an Autonomous Character, Enter the Card Pool, Man! ! !
I want to read a book similar to "Genshin Impact Card Pool Characters, I Cry All the Players on the Internet". No girls, no girls! ! ! No girls! ! ! ! ! ! ! !





























































































I think this book is really good Although the protagonist is a reborn person, he was a physical and psychological patient in his previous life. The endless physical pain and the psychological pressure brought by others have made his way of thinking and life experience imperfect, making him appear cold and inhumane, but he is very fragile inside. Because the system is a newborn system, sometimes her judgment of the situation is not perfect, and her emotional abilities are not perfect either. Therefore, she has endless curiosity about human society and emotions, which makes her have many questions and sometimes seems noisy. But it is precisely because they have each other that makes this adventure lively and interesting. The complementarity of the two of them constitutes a beautiful daily life. Finally, it's really beautiful. Author, please update as soon as possible!!!!!!!
Personally, I think it's very interesting. Although the author is slow to update as a newbie, he can guarantee that the quality is very good, there is basic logic, and the protagonist has a correct outlook on life. There is no harem or taking advantage of one's body and age. Based on the current plot, you can save it and wait for updates. Ps: Please leave comments to encourage the author~ The author is a very lovely person
It's not the kind of time-travel game where you quickly accept it, the system issues tasks, and the host completes and wins awards. Rather, it is full of warmth and warmth, the characters are described very realistically, and the details are well done. Here, I give it five stars!
Good-looking, needless to say, the three characters of Bai Zhi, Bai Fu, and Bai Yu are uniquely designed. Each one has corresponding characteristics and the bonds associated with it. Watching Bai Fu and Bai Yu grow up step by step, and the difficult exploration and progress of their other half, Bai Zhi, the invincible growth process always makes people linger. Every scar of Bai Yu and Bai Zhi is tempered by the years, and Bai Fu also After transforming from an emotionless artificial intelligence into a real person, the strong friends among them made the three of the Bai family realize that there is no one behind them, and there are already friends behind them who can fight side by side. From utilization to trust, from vigilance to reassurance, watching the three people of the Bai family gradually integrate into the world, they will feel truly happy for the three of them🥹 Finally, happy birthday, Carrot! I wish Luo Luo a smooth sailing and unhindered life in the future, and I wish the results of this book will get better and better. Cheers🍻 (The writing is not good. There may be some inaccuracies or incoherence in this long paragraph. Please forgive me [I'm about to cry])
I really like this book. Two days ago, I wanted to go to Rotten Persimmon to see if there were any fanfics about Zero Zero. When I saw that the rating of this book was 9.2, I clicked on it. I didn't expect that it would hit me so much. I stayed up late to read it and finished it. I really like this daily style, and the writing style of Luobo is really good. Here are the points that attracted me to this book based on my own thoughts: <1>It is systematic but not cool, and the system is not obtrusive. When I read the fanfics of Genshin Impact and Bengtie on Rotten Persimmon, 60 to 70% of the fanfics that had a system were cool. Moreover, their system was very abrupt in the article, which made people laugh. For example, "Complete xx mission, and you will be rewarded with x1 of such-and-such item." When reading novels, it is really easy to get into trouble. The lively and interesting system of Fufu really made me very novel, and there was nothing unexpected about it. I didn't quit immediately after seeing the system, but chose to continue reading (I know that Fufu is not only a system but also a supporting role, but this is how I felt when I first watched it) <2>The style of the article really irritated me. I don't like fans to blindly follow the main line at the beginning (if the original character is not well-developed, I will feel that this character is redundant after entering the main line). However, most of the early chapters of this book are daily chapters, which allows the characters to be better shaped and the growth of the characters is more obvious. I will not feel uncomfortable after entering the main line. <3> Character creation, because most of the early days were about daily stories, so there was a lot of room for character creation. The portrayal of Xiaobai and Fufu was very good in my mind. When I first read it, I didn't expect that Xiaobai would be so upright. Xiaobai's understanding of the system after Fufu transformed is also a paragraph that I like very much. When I read this paragraph, Fufu's image in my mind changed from "a system with personality" to "a character with a soul." The subsequent paragraph describing Xiaobai's psychology also made Xiaobai's character more three-dimensional. When I read the later stage, I can really clearly feel the growth of Xiaobai and Fufu. <4>The characters are not OOC and have no CP. In my eyes, the self-made characters written by Luobo are in line with the personality, and the lack of cp in the introduction also gave me the courage to read on without worrying about inexplicable sweet love. This is what attracts me to this book, and also, please don't stop updating it [crying] [crying] [crying] I really want to see the ending. I finally found a book that matches my brain waves. Don't be like this [crying] [crying] [crying] (The ending shouldn't be be, right? It must be he!!! I don't want to take a knife...)
Not bad, not bad, very sincere, each chapter is relatively long, and the author is also very active in paragraph comments. The plot has a complete worldview and self-consistent logic. The protagonist is finally a sane person with correct views. I like the writing style very much, it's very warm and everyday. But I hope the author doesn't want Dao Baiyu and Fu Fu. Score, score, many books have been eaten by tomatoes.
After reading it, I can keep up with the big army [laughs] Say some good words The writing is indeed very good, and it gives me the feeling that I am doing a mission in "Dead Zone Zero". Dabai, Xiaobai, and the system are all flesh-and-blood. In terms of the emotions between Xiaobai and 145, and the emotions between the protagonist and the Mai Xiao brothers and sisters, Susan from the Public Security Bureau, the author really loves the characters he created. The small theater is also very interesting. Just a few words can give people a warm feeling (the corpse has warmed up [makes faces]). It is not as exciting as the general public's refreshing articles, but it is very comfortable and beautiful to watch [shy] l Come on, radish "Ms. Carrot, you have heard rumors about snake snakes before, I hope you understand what the reader means [laughing evilly] More radish, more radish, more radish, more radish soup..."
The writing is superb! Everything falls into place, and the character of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional! He is just a young boy who is smart and strong, but also shy about his own embarrassments! The appearance of Fufu in human form is also very unexpected. I really love to see this kind of bond between family members! The interactions between neighbors are also very detailed and warm, but in a world full of dangers like Zero Zone, there are also exciting and dangerous journeys! I love it so much! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
(Modified version) The system setting of this novel is different from traditional system novels. The author rationalizes the existence of the system and gives it personality. The system's ability is not overly powerful, but forms a mutually reinforcing and growing relationship with the protagonist. This has surpassed many similar works on the market. From a values perspective, the portrayal of the protagonist is also very positive. He is not self-centered, but understands how others feel and is willing to take responsibility for his mistakes and try his best to make up for them. Throughout the text is his attitude of "respecting every individual", and this humanized portrayal is impressive. Emotional expression is a highlight of this work. If you read it just for the purpose of understanding the plot, you may find the content to be bland and the harvest to be limited. It is recommended that readers try to put themselves into the character's heart, not only paying attention to "what the character did", but also understanding "why the character did it" and the emotional logic behind the behavior. Each character in the book is not a simple emotional symbol, but a flesh-and-blood, three-dimensional and real person. Their growth and emotional changes are traceable, and the development process is delicate and natural. This is a touching story about mutual redemption. The article is rich in details, whether it is the subtle influence of the protagonist's character or the description of life scenes, there is something remarkable about it. However, due to the innocent character of the protagonist, some of the emotional expressions may seem a bit blunt or embarrassing to readers. We hope readers will understand and tolerate this. It is worth mentioning that through the details buried in the article, readers can actually infer the general ending of the story. This arrangement has advantages and disadvantages: the negative aspect is that it will weaken the suspense, reduce the reading motivation of some suspense-driven readers, and may also weaken the emotional impact of the ending; the positive aspect is that clearly knowing the ending direction can relieve the readers' anxiety and allow them to focus more on savoring the story process-paying attention to how and why the events happened and the author's narrative techniques, thus becoming more immersed in this reading journey. @Radish
The character development is super good. I personally don't think I want to see Bai Yu and Fu Fu enter the pool. Although this may gain a lot of players' emotions at once, I personally think it's just like the protagonist can't control himself π_π,
It's a good book and very reasonable. The sudden appearance can be said to be a new character introduced. But it is more reasonable to construct the characters before the plot begins. I hope the author can continue to do so
Good-looking, full of sense of life and fun The naming of System Sauce is a bit weird, but it's okay when you look at the back, but the name has an inexplicable sense of substitution. . (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) In addition, the author is really active. Such a lovely author must leave more comments\(`Δ')/
Let me express my personal opinion. If you disagree, just take it for fun. If you disagree, it will be based on your standards. I just want to give some suggestions to students who are hesitant to read this book (Stacked Armor) The first is the processing of the plot line: I give the logic a 9 (out of 10). Luobo's handling of the logic of the plot is still very good. There is no logical point in the book, and the integration of the protagonist is very natural. One point is deducted because in the middle and late stages of reading, some new settings will be introduced, which are a little bit abrupt, but it does not affect the viewing experience. I give it a 10 for the creativity of the setting. There's nothing much to say about this. Although in terms of level, Luobao is only an LV 2 author, but Luobao gives me the feeling that he has been writing novels for many years. I feel that the creativity is on par with Sanjiu's God of Death (Dog Head). The dual-line growth path of the protagonist and the system is very creative, and it is really interesting to watch. Next is the processing of the emotional line: Characterization 9.5: Needless to say, it is great, and the image is three-dimensional and full. It gives me a feeling that I am not like the protagonist in a novel, but a living person. I have to say that the processing of characterization is awesome to the extreme. I deducted 0.5 Points because I didn't understand the system and the protagonist's experience in the early stage, which may be a little inexplicable (I didn't feel it myself anyway, but I saw a brother mentioned it in the comment area, so I deducted 0.5 Points as appropriate) Emotional line narrative 8.5: The endorsed emotional line narrative mainly relies on the inner monologue and dialogue between the protagonist and the system, interspersed with a little bit of environmental rendering and setting supplements. This is not a problem in itself, but why do I only give it 8.5 Points? Because there are many descriptions of the protagonist's inner struggle, this is beneficial to the portrayal of the protagonist and the system, but it also makes the entire emotional narrative line appear longer, and also lengthens the plot line. Sometimes a chapter may only talk about one or two things and then end. It is a slow pace. Students who like fast pace can consider it carefully (I have no objection to the slow pace myself, but there are many old people's reactions in the comment area, so I added it) Summary: Overall score: 9.25 Quality: a rare product, the finest chaff among fine chaff Features: Slow-paced, everyday style, rich in emotion, full of images. It is a rare book for students who like slow-paced. Addendum: It feels like there is a lot of foreshadowing behind it. If Luobao can write it until the later stage without crashing, then this book can be regarded as the best JuZuZero fan novel (this is purely a personal opinion, if you have different opinions, you are right) Finally, I hope it can help you all, and I wish all the travelers, pioneers, ropemakers, drifters, analysts who read this book review... I can't exchange for three golds in a row [Attention] [Please pay attention] [Blow kiss] After reading it, the overall evaluation is: excellent quality [Masterpiece of Bird Food], update speed... Not good evaluation [learned]... The author has his own life, and it is good to be able to update more than 2,000 words a day [like] (but I still hope to be able to write 10,000 words a day! [Punch]) [Already planted] [Add one to the bookshelf] A good book worth reading again and again
A good horse-drawn novel. Compared with the previous ones, this book develops a series of plots around the psychological problems of the protagonist in the early stage. This kind of treatment is unprecedented in the novels I have seen before. It is a relatively novel experience. Although it is a cool article, since I read this article, I feel that the author's psychological treatment of the protagonist's coming to a different world is very good, at least it is pretty good among all the horse-fighting articles I have read. However, high-quality articles seem to have a common problem, and that is slow update speed (laughs). However, I think the novel took a little too long to deal with the protagonist's issues in the early stages. This article does not count as a vest article in the traditional sense. It also contains the content of self-streaming. So naturally, some readers (or most) read it because it is self-streaming. Naturally, there were a few articles in the early stage that were specifically focused on the forum. However, the ratio between the two parts of the discussion between the game and real players is not particularly even. There are several plot chapters and fewer chapters discussed by players. The above is my humble opinion. When I read it, I was quite pleasantly surprised. I spent a lot of time on the protagonist (psychology) in the early stage, which allowed me to deepen my understanding of the protagonist. So far, the logical processing between the protagonist and Fufu (system) is very good. Previous stories were more or less frustrating (protagonist and system). The relationship between Fufu and Xiaobai makes me a little envious (≧∇≦)/. Why is there no such relationship in the articles I read before? These two people look like two children, but they are not like them in other aspects, a little adult and a real child. These two aspects are described quite well. Author, you can write this kind of article, you are this👍🏻 The person who reads this book without urging you to update it is you👎🏻 Just a joke
This kind of beginning clearly clarifies the personal information of the system and the protagonist. It is rare that it is not a time-travel to death. [Laughing and crying] It also clearly tells the readers the reasons for choosing the world. This gives people a "feeling" that they are not following the trend of writing fan fiction! My personal feeling is full of sincerity [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]
After reading about 150 pictures, I feel that the writing style and character creation in human novels are acceptable. At least so far, I have not seen any vulgar descriptions, and there are no original characters OOC. This may be one of the benefits of female authors. It's my stereotype, because most of the male authors who write about Mi family fandom write really obscene things, with all kinds of obscene meanings. Demining and the protagonist's vest will only start to appear after dozens of pictures. The chapters I have seen have laid a lot of foreshadowing. It is a classic slow-motion novel. The emotional description is very detailed and warm. It makes me feel like I am reading the text of a game. There is not much of a golden finger, it can be regarded as the protagonist and "Fufu" making progress together, working together, and want to go home. There are descriptions of real-life game forums. Such forum descriptions take up about one to two chapters. If you don't like it, you can skip it.
It's been almost two years since I read it, and I finally thought of doing a book review (I was beaten) It's a very good fanfic, Fu Fu is cute and cute, both adults and novices are very good (whisper) (β) I miss the days when I used to take one picture every day (every day at noon I would check the classroom website just to see the updates of Radish) (Hungry, rice) Chef-Ms. Carrot-unparalleled beauty (White Gate!)
Like radish Luo Bao is a very good author. He not only diligently insists on updating every day, but also has beautiful writing style, delicate emotions, and great talent. He can be called the reincarnation of a literary star. Not only that, the logic of Luobo is complete, the world view is reasonable (the places where knives can be produced are also very reasonable), the characters are lifelike, not OOC at all, and Xiaobai and Fufu also have their own characteristics. Working on tomatoes can be considered as digging for gold in manure, worthy of enjoying the Imperial Ancestral Temple!
After reading this book for so long, I personally feel that this book is a very good one written by Juezu Zero fans. First, this book does not involve too much game plot, but rather uses the game plot as a timeline to determine the anchor point, allowing readers to have a clear understanding of time; second, this book adds a lot of self-created content, but the self-created plot does not completely break away from the story background in the game, but instead complements other elements. The blank space in the book makes the story smoother; thirdly, the system in this book no longer only exists as an assistant in the protagonist's mind, but participates in the story together with the protagonist, making the system's personality and characters come alive, and the article is more readable. The system's scenes are well planned, and the protagonist is not made into a supporting role. The only drawback at present is that the update is too slow. I hope the author can update it twice a day.
As you read it, you can tell that this fanfic is not simple. After all, the limit for ordinary fanfics is a few thousand people. This one has even reached nearly 20,000 people. It goes without saying how valuable it is. The plot is also excellent. It can be seen that the author has written it carefully. There is no traditional system time travel story. Instead, the characters of the protagonist and other characters are written in more detail, like a living person, and even the system has become a sister [face covering] The plot is moderately developed, there is no invincibility, all depends on oneself and a little help from the system, non-toxic, there is no particularly embarrassing plot, and Bai Yu is too cute [Send heart]
The plot is logically self-consistent and very interesting. The protagonist has a positive outlook on life. Whether he is the protagonist or the supporting role, the characters are very three-dimensional and have their own thinking and development. The author is also very active, but I am shy and have not commented on it, so the five-star praise proves that this book is really good! ! ! [Adoration]
Well, I don't know what to say, but the whole book gave me a very warm feeling. I have never played this game, but it looks good, I don't feel particularly confused, and it is logical. The protagonist has a very positive outlook on life, a very warm little daily life, and the author is also very lively. I feel warm after reading the whole book.
Zero Zone is a high-quality game that I played for a while and really gave up on due to high saturation and screen flickering. It's a pity. The novel is very well written, and the original branch plots are also very good. It's a medium-to-high-quality fan novel. Instead of completely relying on the plot of the main plot and branch plots of the game, I will think of the plot myself. I will directly kiss the author of the plot.
The writing is natural, fresh and has a unique taste. Even if I don't play JuZero, I am still deeply attracted by this book. At first I thought this book would also be a kind of growth companion for readers, but I suddenly discovered that this book is really excellent. Regarding the system and time travel, the description is rigorous, objective and accurate, giving me a feeling of fantasy materialism! Although I arrived late, I can see that the author is very willing to interact with readers. He is a very active and friendly author! Finally, I wish the score of this book can further increase, and I wish the author further achievements in the process of writing the book!
Super pretty! ! ! Xiaobai and Fufu are super loving and adorable siblings. The interaction between Dabai and other people is so interesting. I laugh every time I watch it. It's so joyful! After reading this article, I feel like I have really seen the world of Zero Zone where the Bai brothers and sisters exist, and I have seen the growth of the three little ones. I like it very much! The concepts revealed by the author in the article are also very good and gave me some inspiration. "Although there is always sadness, life still needs to grow. What I see along the way becomes the nourishment for growth. The care of my relatives and friends is the stem that supports me. I am a small seedling. With the love for The love of the world grows slowly." This is my personal understanding (I'm so embarrassed to write it). Every time I read this article, I am touched by its full vitality. Although it sounds a bit exaggerated, it really makes me regain my original intention to continue working hard in life. I commented after seeing that I had not commented on the article that I liked so much. After I reviewed it, I remembered that I was afraid that the article would be targeted if I didn't review it, and I didn't know whether to increase the score...
It's super good-looking, with great foreshadowing, and a very smooth connection with the plot of Zero Zone. The protagonist's personal charm is also very strong, and the friendship with the original character is also very warm. It's great, I still want to read it, the author will update it soon [sending my heart]
It's a very good book. The author writes it very warmly. I haven't seen such a healing book in a long time. Some ordinary daily things in it can make me feel the beauty from the bottom of my heart. The author's writing style is also very good, and the characters are well created. It is a very good book. Five stars! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It's been so long that it can be changed back to five stars! [Sending Hearts]
The writing style is full of youthfulness, the plot is deeply rooted in people's hearts, and it shows the character's personality characteristics. The overall evaluation is five points. In addition, the author writes a bit too much on a daily basis. I hope that the protagonist's combat power will increase dramatically in the future. Every time he consumes system energy to increase his combat power, he does not feel safe and rational. I want to see the protagonist activate the 'killing aura'! At least someone who is serious enough to kill Nineveh in seconds, Ernie deserves it! >3<
The writing is good, but for an old book that has been updated for more than a year, is it a little too little updated? ? ? I seem to have finished chasing it in less than three days? ! But in terms of quality, it's really good. This kind of slow pace, and the feeling of not breaking down the character, can be maintained more. From the character design, the top-notch vest can actually be added more. There are still too many eyes on the protagonist, and the world consciousness must not be wiped out by the protagonist!
It's really good to read. It's a pleasure to read hundreds of chapters of this slow-paced book, but it's a torture to catch up on updates. I'm stuck on the uncomfortable road every day. Unfortunately, I'm chasing [awkward laugh]