Travel to the Continent of Cultivation and Befriend Long Aotian

It's a very good article. As a type of two male protagonists cultivating immortals, it's really good. And it's rare to see that there is a lot of content about cultivating immortals and fighting monsters. The fighting is also pretty good. It's worth reading, but there is basically no car text. Let me tell you first. If you need spoilers, you can also ask me through plq. I will reply when I see it [Chigua] The teacher's writing is very good, but there are typos in the middle and later parts. Remember to correct it. The ending is a bit too fast. I hope it can be improved. It is much better than other spoiled wife literature. The male protagonist is also very good, he practices quickly, and he is also very smart. It is eye-catching. I actually fantasized about whether the male protagonist would have some strange identity, but it turned out that he just traveled through time [face covering] This is a bit like a novice novel, but it's really interesting and engaging. It's not heartbreaking to read. It has a very typical feeling of a cultivating immortality and counterattack novel. I'm really surprised. This article actually contains a lot of descriptions of fighting and a lot of settings. It's really good. The connection between settings is really eye-catching. There is basically no car text about the two people. The emotional line is OK. Maybe because this article is really less read, and the teacher finished it a bit hastily. All in all, this is a novel about two male protagonists cultivating immortality that suits my taste. The first novel I came across was a novel about two male protagonists cultivating immortality. Later I came across two male protagonists. I only read this after seeing this type. However, most of the articles on Tomato focus more or less on cars. More or less, Shou is an immortal. In this article, there is really very little description of Shou's appearance. Anyway, I have no impression. It is indeed different from the norm. But the author hopes that it can be improved in future works. And the system settings are really interesting The two male protagonists did have a relationship, but there was basically no detailed description and the emotional line was quite clear [blowing kiss] Although it has flaws, this article is really worth reading.

Five stars for encouragement. The ending is a bit rushed, I hope there will be extras to complete the rest of the story. The plot in the second half is also quite frustrating. I can only call it HE, but because the ending was rushed, it ended suddenly after a long time of frustration, and there was no refreshing feeling.

🍅There are really very few people who can read one chapter without finishing. This is considered a good book. The plot is very good. I am waiting for the extra chapters. I really recommend it. The plot is ups and downs without being procrastinating. I really want to buy more books like this.

Good. The writing style is a bit immature. Come on

It looks good, but not many people see it.

My writing is very good, the logic is clear and interlocking, and it is very beautiful, but there are no extras. ୧(๑•̀ɜ•́๑)૭✧It's great

It looks good. [Smiles] The writing style of this book is okay.

Overall it was pretty good, but the ending felt a bit bland.

It's okay and pretty good. It's a short story upgrade flow. The protagonist has companions. There are just a few chapters with typos. The rest is pretty good.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Does the author have any extras?