Mingyuan Tianzun

Not bad, but why do we need to recognize a daughter later [Petrochemical]

I'm sure this is not an AI text. Can this one with the protagonist's name being "old and young" be an AI text?

The beginning is very grand and directly mentions the prehistoric era. This is really unexpected. Some people think that it is just a normal cultivation of immortality and jump directly to the prehistoric era. In addition, the main plot is after the journey to the west. There are very few stories about the journey to the west and the story behind the journey to the west.

After reading this book, I feel that the author is also well-read and can be regarded as a high-quality product in the same genre of cultivating immortals, heavens, and academies. The setting of the Five Immortals is similar to my previous thoughts.

Although this book is new, the author's rich literary heritage is displayed between the lines. It would be better if the author could integrate and summarize the realm of the book. It is best to create a map of the mysterious world so that readers can have a reference.

In the novel about cultivating immortals in the wizard's battle mode, the concept of the way of heaven suppressing the way of earth is also very reasonable. Those who like academic style can also adapt well. The monks are still very student-like and energetic. Some articles about cultivating immortals are boring starting from the beginning of foundation building. This book is very satisfying.

The writing is still very good. It's not too brainless and it's not about being a dog licker or about women. It's about the Tao. The content is pretty good. It doesn't make you invincible from the start, nor can anyone bully you. It doesn't hide anything either.

Very well written^ω^ The further you go, the more you abandon the original and focus on the last. If you don't write about this world, you have been writing in various small worlds and secret realms. Occasionally, you can write two to make a transition. But if you keep writing, once you come out of this world and enter that secret realm again, it is just like writing a running account. I hope the author can revise it! If there are improvements, please remember to kick me. The last five stars will be changed to four stars. I hope the author can make some improvements.

As a 15-year-old bookworm, the setting and subject matter of this book are really novel. The combination of Western gods and the immortals of Yuanzi in the prehistoric town really touched my heart. However, the author's writing style and logic really need to be tempered. I feel that the author has never written about Eastern immortality. There should not be too many vernacular words. A book with a big world view must have a sense of distance, and the gap between students and teachers must be reflected. In short, this book is really a pity to abandon, but it is easy to get into trouble after reading it for a while. Just a little suggestion, nothing else! Writing style is very important, come on, author!

The plot may be a little boring during the period from foundation building to Yuanshen, but it becomes more and more interesting after Yuanshen. I hope it won't end so soon, or that there will be a sequel after it is completed [crying][crying][crying]

The writing is very high, and the different world of cultivation, from high school to university to postgraduate entrance examination, is equivalent to the foundation building stage, Tao body stage, and soul stage. After graduating from graduate school, you will become an immortal. I look forward to the story of the queen who became an immortal.

Shen Di Wen + Xiu Xian, the combination is very good. Based on the prehistoric system, the Earth Immortal system is adopted + Zhen Yuanzi's Qiankun in the sleeves is changed to Shen Di world development. It is a rare Shen Di classic novel. It is well worth reading. It has been completed and is full of content. Reasons for evaluation: Reasonable logic, smooth writing, novel settings, and creativity

It's so good. I really like this kind of orthodox fairy tale. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch, author, come on, it's really great.

It's well written, very innovative, eye-catching, and very impressive.

It's pretty good. Although the title of the book is very traditional about cultivating immortals, the content is really eye-catching and interesting. It's similar to the wizarding civilization but with advanced technological civilization of cultivating immortals.

Very beautiful, an innovative combination of Western mythology and Eastern mythology, clear preparation, and very well written

Very good, the world view is huge and exciting

The overall structure of the book gives people a refreshing feeling, there is no poisonous point, and the plot is reasonable. It can definitely be regarded as a high-quality novel on Tomato.

It was more interesting in the early stage. Before becoming an immortal, the pacing was slow, and all the plots were okay. After becoming an immortal, the pacing suddenly became faster, and the viewing experience was slightly worse. But overall, it ended relatively quickly, without too many overlapping worlds, so I was still very satisfied. It was quite good as a novel to relieve boredom.

The world view is complete, the cultivation system is reasonable, the IQ is online, and it looks quite comfortable.

Not cliche, with its own innovation, very beautiful

Among the many modern social system immortality novels, it is one of the few that has a certain immortal flavor. The protagonist system is relatively popular. The daily average is about 5k, with occasional updates, which is quite satisfactory. High quality grain The fly in the ointment is that the pace is extremely slow. It's great that the author can update steadily, but it's not uncommon for eunuchs to be interrupted. The bigger the world view, the harder it is to fill in the holes dug. Personally, I really like this kind of slow-paced book, but everyone must have their own preferences. This is for reference only.

I personally feel that this book deserves to be called a masterpiece. I can see from it that the book goes from hesitating at the beginning to establishing an ideal, from longing to striving to catch up step by step, from envy step by step to being down-to-earth to the high-spirited young man after achieving his ideal. Mo Wenxian can represent most people, just like when he was in junior high school, he was young and ignorant, curious about the world but had no strength. Like when I saw the world clearly in high school, I was confused and hopeless, but in the end I established my confidence and ideals and rushed to the top. My life was originally intended to be like the protagonist in the book, but I couldn't do anything about it. I wish you all peace and joy in the years to come. Remember to always have fun with your family and like-minded friends. A life like this can be considered perfect. Up to now, more than half of the world view of this novel has been developed. It can be said that the entire world of the prehistoric world is also very well created. Not to mention that there are many distant universes and many disordered and orderly ninth-order existences. I really feel that this book should not be rated this way. It is really worthy of being the first-class in the fast-food tomato. There may be many shortcomings, but it is normal for a book to have shortcomings, so it is indeed the first-class tomato in my heart.

It's pretty cool. Why doesn't anyone see the new system?

It looks great, why is it rated so low?

Traditional Cultivation of Immortals➕Lords➕Plane War, a very innovative book, the protagonist is well-cast, I hope there will be no female protagonist, please support the author

It's pretty, but it's a little short and needs to be raised.

It's a new system that I've seen

This is my first five-star review. I think this book is very good.

It's okay. I've never seen this kind of subject before, but it's still worth watching.