Hp Who Lost the Little Bat? No One Wants It. I Want It.

The plot and everything are super good, but there is a sad part in the middle. But the HE party entered by mistake. BE, BE, BE. But it's not all BE, right? Because Severus was a mortal, he grew old and died, and then time-traveled to Severus's teenage years. Accompanying the attacker came out of that shadow. Finally, it transformed into a dragon shape. And around the grave of Zipher. He used his remaining strength to block the gap in the Eastern Dragon Vein. He and his lover slept in the east forever. Four points is actually not quite appropriate. I think it should be 4.5. Because I personally can't stand a bit of abuse, and I am a staunch HE party.

It's really sweet, there's not even a hint of knives, it's so sweet... Xixi deserves the best, she is very fragrant. I hope Luodan and Sirius can be offline quickly (although I haven't written yet whether Sifu was teased by the foursome when he was there, but I still hope to be offline) (If you don't pay attention to the offspring, I hope you can push it quickly so that lovers can have a good time in the world of two people. Fire tongs Liu Ming (fragrant, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic, aromatic.

The author please update the chapter 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000,

It's very interesting. Although some people may feel that ss is OCC, the character of ss in the text is different from that of the original work. The moment the little ss met Qing, his fate was already different. The beauty is also heavy, even if it is a two-way relationship, there is still fear and uneasiness in falling in love. SS has been accepting everything Qing gives in the fear of being abandoned, while Qing has been panicking that the other party does not love her, suppressing his instinct to give SS everything he can give. Fortunately, after all the hardships, they all recognized their own hearts. It feels like the ending is predictable The gods who grew up in the mortal world gave up their immortality and chose mortal death. All the paranoia of greed, anger, obsession, and hatred eventually turns into a sentence of "I can't bear to love the other person, I can't bear to hurt the other person, I can't bear to leave the other person." How can it not be a happy ending to die in the company of your lover? (After all, Huangquan Road is so dark, why are you willing to let SS walk alone)

First of all, it may be a catch for some people. Si Jiao is very OOC. After all, after watching it, I still can't accept Si Jiao who loves to be coquettish, arrogant, and cry. However, it is also very sad. Only those who are favored will feel confident. It is precisely because of Yao Qing's unwavering love that Si Jiao can freely express his likes and dislikes. It's both sadistic and sweet. Si Jiao must have been more than friends with Lily, and was a little nervous about not being satisfied with her lover. But when he didn't understand love, he had already fallen in love with Yao Qing. It can be said that he loved Yao Qing from the beginning to the end. Harder's ambiguous pull is also very good. The savior and the Death Eater have completely different positions, but the same desire to protect each other. There is no whitewashing of the Predators, bullying is bullying. Just because the Sect himself is very strong cannot erase their evil deeds. Sirius has not gotten over the shadow in his heart for a long time. Dumbledore, to be honest, this character is very uncomfortable. He can sacrifice a few people for most people, including himself, but when he treats the character I love as a pawn and mercilessly squeezes out all the value, I will hate it with itch. Clearing mines will give birth to children.

Huh, author-chan's smiling face, even a "humble" Fukai Hyou like me wants to always protect www. Bullying author-chan, it's absolutely. Yes, God SAMA, please allow me to protect author-chan for the rest of my life★

Finished watching it, it's very interesting. But I don't know why, I always feel empty inside after reading it. It's obviously a wonderful result, but I feel very sad. I seem to be reminded of Severus in the original novel. He is lonely, aloof, and unsociable. But in this novel, it seems that Severus has a truly beautiful life, has friends, a lover, and even some of his small wishes will eventually come true. I don't know why, but it seems that every time I read a novel, I don't want the protagonist to die, as if this way they are still living in a world that I can't touch or feel. I will comfort myself that they are happy now. But I would have an ending like the author's: It turns out that their lives go so fast. A kind of emotion. I also know that they will eventually die, but if they don't die in the novel, I seem to be able to deceive myself. Anyway, there is a lot of emotion and melancholy. I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good. In my opinion, it is already very good! Could the author please drop a few of their side stories? I'm really looking forward to it 😊 Finally, I wish the author good health, all the best, and lots of money in the coming year! ! ! I want to play the second game, but I don't want to face the ending. It's so uncomfortable. Uuuuuuuuu(┯_┯)

It's well written, but I don't like the part where the protagonist apologizes to the black man who insulted the yellow race. I can't stand it anymore, but keep it up

Let me give you a warning first. This book is very similar to Snape, the ultimate mother, and also gives birth to children. Read the tonic of this book. But the food written by the author looks really delicious T^T The little paper bat is also so cute, really cute

It's a very good pet novel and a sweet novel. It's different from the other novel I've read by Professor Long He, but it's both great. This is probably the cutest professor article I have ever read. The professor who is pampered is so happy.

Ahhhhh, it looks good, hehe, the arrogant Draco, so cute [adoration][adoration][adoration], I really like the protagonist and professor portrayed by the author, I really like it, can you give Draco a little more plot? Damn, I really, really like this book

The content is good, and the setting is relatively novel. Some details on the emotional line of the article are not very to my liking. The protagonist is not very abusive, and the abuse is a bit far-fetched (lack of communication, and everyone feels self-care and self-love). The abuse of Hade CP really tortured me, and Xiaolong is so miserable. I hope Xiaolong will always be pampered. The ending is also satisfactory, there is no immortality, and the last god gave up immortality and chose to follow his love. Overall, it is a very good story.

Maybe the Severus in me would be very happy if he was pampered like this, because his life was so miserable.

Such a good book must be rated 9.9 For me. No, it must be 10 points. The character creation is very three-dimensional, and there is no forced sugar distribution, it is very natural.

It's very interesting. It's very different from some of the stories I've read before. This story has a two-way feel. Although there are some minor abuses in the middle, it's very good. And every story is told carefully and carefully. Every CP is well told. It's not the kind of CP that gives a beginning and then ends directly. It still talks about the process of their falling in love. I think this is very good. I like this book very much. I have read many novels about Snape and I think this one is better. [Love][love]

I like this very much. Yao is really good to Xifu and feels sorry for Xifu. I hope to clarify some things soon. Happy life. Come on, I like this very much [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Good looking, recommended, keep going＾0＾~

Looks good! Very nice! I just love the love story between the Eastern little dragon and the Western little bat! Look at them all! The writing is great and the emotions are delicate! [Adoration]

It's very beautiful, very good, very good. Although some parts are very inconsistent with Severus's setting, I like his happy ending. Good luck, author.

It's a very interesting book. The protagonist has always been firmly in love with Professor Snape. The other CPs are also sweet and loving. Although everyone has a good and perfect ending, it just feels like Professor Snape here is no longer Professor Severus Snape. . . If you like to read Professor Snape's sweet stories (slightly edited), you can come here

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Every time I see the main actor's hair getting a little grayer, I can't help but hope he's not too kind. I particularly like Sifu's happy life. Apart from the inexplicable aspect of giving birth, the secondary CPs are fine. I like them all, especially Hader (I don't understand why I wrote about giving birth so early before the end).

Snape is a proud baby. There are a few little bullies behind, but fortunately there are no knives. I really want more interactions between Yao and the young Snape!

Delicious, love to eat more! ! Thank you teacher! It smells really good! ! ! ! (Take a big mouthful) Watch it all night, highly recommended.

Really super beautiful, really super loving, big, you, are my god [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

The knife is just beautiful. Every pair of CPs are sweet, raising the banner for Yao and Xifu's love!

This book is really interesting. I hope the author will publish more HP books and I will definitely support it! The writing is really good, it's so sweet, I really like this sense of redemption. Sev is really loved!

Yao Qing Xifu wants to be together forever [blowing kiss] Awesome ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ written in big letters by the author

Nice! You really doted on Si Jiao very well!

There is happiness and pain. It is his luck and his to meet him, but what do you want my Phoenix to do [crying]