Zero Zone: the Pioneer Who Lives with Elen

It's a good book, especially the description of the characters is quite accurate. It's not just written randomly by someone with a name. I like it [Ai Lian Bao] Give some suggestions based on personal preferences and experience 1. Combat power and world view. The combat power of Tie and Ling is so different. I really need to write it clearly. At least there is a proper explanation in the novel. Like the "approaching messenger..." I was a little nervous. 2. Don't write about frustration. Tomato fans basically don't recommend writing about frustration, especially when the author's personal design causes the frustration. Anyway, I watched the protagonist being chased and fucked by Yi Hu, especially the setting of the protagonist is very good (a person who is close to the commander in the desperate zone has zero concept), but there is no Ai Lian in these pictures, so it doesn't look interesting. 3. This is just a personal preference. I actually can't figure it out. Why do I see that many of Zero's new books like to add a bunch of stuff and make it nondescript [face covering]. Most people don't have the writing skills. Well, your book is okay. Although from my point of view, the main plot and branch plots are so large, I would rather read the main plot. The interaction between the characters and the characters, rather than the inexplicable enhancement of the body, is not to say that it cannot be written this way, but writing it this way should at least play a sufficient role in attracting readers and making it look good. If the author has not thought about what he wants to do when writing this, it is best to think again. If he has already thought about how to write it, just pretend that I didn't say it. 4. Update more, always less, sooner or later you will abandon the book. Finally, cheers to the author!

OK OK, let's review it too~ First of all, my overall evaluation of this book is very, very, very good! I like the characters of the protagonist very much. The characters of Ailian, Anbi and other characters are also very consistent with my fantasy of these characters. There is a high probability that it will not be OOC, unless it is a mustard soul-piercing author~ (jjxx go to hell [angry]) I like the plot of this book very much, and the progress between Ailian and Ailian is very stable (blind guessing, there will be super sugar within 10 chapters). In short, it is good-looking, durable, and has five stars [like]

I can't give myself five stars for this. [Sinister smile]

It looks great, but the author asks you to speed up your hand speed, or find someone else to help you code. And I also thought of a good way, you find someone to help you code, you read next to you, and you also code along with it.

It doesn't work. Ever since I read the last chapter, I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body every day. I feel unspeakably uncomfortable both physically and mentally. I feel like I'm dying. If there is no updated chapter, it's really just one chapter. Please save me. Author, please update it quickly. Woohoo.

It's okay, no big problem.

It's so beautiful. I hope Elen and the male protagonist can have more sweets.

Author, where is your home? Send you something nice [smile]

Do you know why Lin Yuan doesn't have to spend money to buy things? Because: Lin Yuan Gou (zero yuan purchase)

Squatting down, waiting for this book to become popular, come on [eat melon]

Super beautiful, cheers for the author⊙▽⊙

So pretty! It's so good, and the author's writing style is also pretty good. I've read more than a dozen Juzu Zero fanfics, and this one is at least in the top three.

I don't care, it's just good-looking, and it's the best among all the Zero Zone novels I've read so far.

What's going on? This book is no longer displayed on the author's homepage?

Ka's good writing skills

Not enough, not enough at all [adoration][adoration][adoration]

So far so good

So far it seems that it is still possible, the author would like to cheer you up

So pretty! I'm not good at Chinese, so I can only say it's so damn good-looking! !

I have a question, are tomatoes that are underage and cannot be harvested? What should Elaine do?

It's okay, but I feel it's a bit lacking.

Update quickly. This is not enough. Let's start with 10,000 words.

Author, you are slacking off. Today is just one chapter, it's not enough [crying]

Very good, the plot is logically reasonable, and the protagonist is not brainless. It is considered a masterpiece among JuZero fans, and the plot is not very brainless either.

The emotional line feels a bit rushed, but very healing. Still pretty good [like]

Come on, it's pretty good

Come on, young author(*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

Very sweet, but so short

It's really good

The description of Shark Girl is superb!