I Help Qing Lengxueshen Cover His Vest

I wrote this book review after reading the entire novel. In my opinion, the main plot of this novel is good. There is no problem that the plot is confusing and difficult to understand. However, there are still a few points that I would like to give my suggestions: 1. The two protagonists in the book are well portrayed. Fang Cian's character is nothing, mainly Lin Zhuo, who is set as a contrast. I think he can write a little more about his cold side in school to highlight the contrast. In the later stage, I felt that his and Fang Cian's personalities are too similar. I think it can be slightly different. For example, Lin Zhuo comforts Fang Cian, maybe giving Fang Cian a hug, and listening to Fang Cian's complaints, this kind of silent comfort method. 2. The author's writing style is still very good, and the descriptions are also very detailed, but I think it is best to use less of these writing styles in the words spoken by the characters, which will appear very wordy and a little uncomfortable. I suggest that the words spoken by the characters should be more everyday, and not make them lofty in order to set off the outstanding ones. 3. The description at the beginning can be more detailed, otherwise it will be difficult for readers to understand. When introducing several brothers later, you can only introduce the characters that will be needed in the subsequent plot, such as Pei Huan, whose lawyer team will be used later, so write it in detail. Too many character introductions will be confusing and the article will be easily abandoned. That's probably it, it just represents my own thoughts, please don't delete it if you don't like it.