Zerg: Female, Can You Spare My Life?

The writing is very delicate, and Yahelin is a history doomed to tragedy. However, I feel that the author has overly deified Ya, detailing Ya's suffering and greatness, but briefly describing Ya's political actions. This may also be related to the fact that the perspective of this article is mainly Lin. Lin keeps interjecting the story of his two male fathers. Can the author consider making a special extra chapter (please). The personalities of the two people have become relatively clear. Both sides have their own concerns and are unwilling to explain, which is unnecessary. I currently believe that this forced match is doomed to end in vain. Lin knows the direction of history, but is not willing to fill the world line with self-sacrifice. Ya may have feelings for Lin in a long-term relationship, but small feelings are not worth great love. He will not give up on the affirmative movement, and he will be as great as in history. The problem is that if history is not changed, Lin Heya's ending is destined to be tragic. If history is changed, first of all, this is not what Lin's current character will do. Secondly, these two insects are not essentially people of the same world, and their three views will inevitably diverge. This book is not a romanticism, and the illusory mutually inclusive and self-consistent happy ending will most likely not be achieved. Since it is destined to be inconsistent, then where should Lin go? Let it go and do nothing, or risk everything to change it, or wait and see what happens and intervene appropriately. In short, there is a lot of suspense and a lot of blanks left. The author's writing skills are good, and the plot background is complete and logical. However, since it is just the beginning, it is not very long, so I give it four stars.

Although I can understand the different thoughts between the two insects, and I don't deny that Abelius is a hero, I feel that it is very unfair to Lin Moguang. He just came to this era by accident, and it seems that his only use is for Abelius to move the blood pack.

He? I really can't imagine how to he. Lin Moguang can't redeem himself in this era. I personally think

Your Excellency has great swordsmanship. The warm, clear water seems to accommodate the aliens who intrude into his territory, but the lines are clearly defined, and even if they meet briefly, they can easily turn around and pass away. The two of them are like diagonal lines, destined to be lonely and only intersect for a moment.

It tastes sour and refreshing. Neither of them has ever had a sincere exchange of feelings, and neither of them dares to do so. Both sides are mistreating each other. So far, Gong has been very clear-headed in facing the end of his own death, hoping to give Shou greater help. Both of them are too bitter, let's be a little sweeter emotionally [crying]

I just discovered now that authors can send themselves book reviews. Objective evaluation, marriage first, then love, then love. May be you have to have a little bit of patience. But I think the book is good-looking (I can't say it's not good-looking). Originally, the first book in Tomatoes was to satisfy my own preferences, so I wrote the emotional line slowly, but I'm sure I will keep writing. ʕ·ᴥ·ʔ

I read the book I saw yesterday and read the current content twice today. Lin came to this world and met Ya. In my opinion, he seemed to be fulfilling his mission: a man who was full of death. After meeting the heroes who fought for liberation and human rights a thousand years ago, his mission after understanding his role in it, a sense of mission that he had accomplished the greatest cause of the Zerg, a destiny and mission for which his own pheromones, his own body's weirdness, and everything he had were born for. For Lin, who has adapted to equal rights, Ya is the light that opened up all this. Therefore, driven by the sense of mission, he was in a lower position, with admiration in his heart. He dragged up the bright moon in his heart, and with the body of inanimate thoughts, he achieved eternal glory. For Ya, maybe Lin will be his ray of light. Strange light, a strange light, a light that needs to be used tentatively, approached and trusted. A light that supports his great ideals. This article really struck a chord with me. If there had been such a person thousands of years ago, he might have been willing to sacrifice his life to lift the sun. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

So pretty! ! ! Self-destructive male insect x beautiful, strong and miserable female insect, set me to eat like crazy! Abelius, you must force Lin Moguang hard! Keep him from thinking too much! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh setting setting I like it very much! ! Author, I want to express my love for you [sending my heart] [love] [love]

A visitor from a well-established world broke into a thousand years later. A sharp sword from the Dark Age of Yacris pierced the decadent system that had lasted for more than seven hundred years. In this orderly and orderly world, with clear rules for superiors and inferiors, the indomitable souls were established. They were the founders of the new order and the sparks that lit up in this era that was about to exit. Through them, earth-shaking changes would be initiated in the future. Lin Moguang was a lonely soul thousands of years later. His respect for the hero and his understanding of history made Yaklis the only thing he was familiar with in this other world. And because of the forced matching of the light brain, they lived together in panic, and then they talked about their concerns and treated each other with respect. It's not really emotionally abusive, it's just that Lin Moguang doesn't care about life or death and just wants to find his father's figure to soothe the hesitation of traveling through another world or the grief of losing his father. Yackles lost his most important wings because of the male worm. His weak body did not affect his perseverance. He and his comrades, a group of sparkling young people, injected new vitality into this stagnant water, and then the freedom that countless lives longed for. Emotions are not everything for both parties, and then there is the exploitation of all life in the dark ages, which makes everyone more or less tragic. Just as it says in the article Abelius, you are the cause of my death and I am your turning point ——Lin Moguang

The setting is very good The narrative pace is a bit slow and seems too tiring [no malice, no accusation]

After reading it, I didn't want to leave a long review, but the characters and plot of this book were particularly to my liking, so I couldn't help but say a few words, please don't worry about the author's wife. [About the worldview] This book has a very detailed introduction to the worldview, and the logic is relatively self-consistent, but it is very tiring to read. The entire worldline is scattered here and there, scattered in the corners of each plot. It seems that the worldview originally conceived by the author was not fully explained. When writing a certain plot, he found that some information was missing and temporarily added it to the plot. [About emotional lines and characters] I really like this kind of slow-burning emotional line. The author describes this area very carefully, and the progression of emotions is also logical. The two male protagonists are well established and very charming. It is the best thing to fall in love without knowing it. Here I want to complain about the general logic of some Zerg novels. The two male protagonists fell in love with each other inexplicably, and because of this inexplicable love, trust across races? [About the writing style] The writing style of the article is still very good. The description of the environment, the characters' habits and their mentality are all just right. However, in the more complex episodes, the timeline becomes super messy, and the transition of each plot is not obvious. It is often only after watching three or five episodes that I realize that the location and scene have been changed, which greatly affects the reading experience. Also, the explanation of who is speaking in the dialogue is a bit confusing, and sometimes it is not clear who is speaking. But later on, this part gradually became clear, and I could clearly feel the author's progress. Anyway, the author will update it soon.

There are a lot of typos, but I really like the content and theme of the story! The flaws do not hide the good points. There are only a few stories about our ancestors, but those who read them are quite melancholy. History is always full of turbulence, tragedy, cruelty, and warmth. Here's my best wishes to the destined couple, be sure to have a good, good, good, good time!!! Looking forward to your stories, stay tuned and read slowly

There was a lot of foreshadowing in the front, and the protagonist looked very frustrated, but I saw a twist later, and I saw the possibility of he. Mo Guang looked strong, cold and fragile at first, but in fact he was just a child, a love-starved baby in his twenties, with no scheming or ambition, he just hoped that someone would hold him, and that someone would care about him. In fact, Abel is not that invincible. He can also be impressed, hesitant and care. In fact, he has many things, but of course he has also lost many things... No matter what, only unreserved love can arouse love. We Mo Guangbao can finally get the most sincere love from a leader who is covered with bruises. (In the early stage, I felt that Mo was a bit licking, but I should not say that the "licking" succeeded and I was really happy...)

It's quite beautiful. The sense of fate between them is too strong. Everything is just right and everything fits together so well. One makes the dawn never fall, and the other illuminates him with light. Over the course of thousands of years, I am only for you. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I jumped to watch it. I have been emphasizing how miserable the male monarch is and how powerful the female monarch is, and he is regarded as a god (in this world view, the female monarch is really powerful in doing these things), but how do I think the male monarch is even worse? He didn't get good results in his previous life. He went back to the past and was forcibly bound. His relatives said they wanted to kill him. Well, the love rival provokes the male to take advantage of her. Later, the female monarch's relatives give advice and threats, which is inexplicable. (They all care about where they were when they suffered.) If you can't tell that he is not good to the female, you can't persuade him. Is it not dangerous to simply reveal the male monarch's feelings towards the female monarch in this way? Aren't you afraid of retaliation from behind? Although the author didn't write it like this, there is a sentence in it that is very good for bullying. He has no insects behind him. (I hope Lin is free and unrestrained and not restrained) I just want to kowtow to CP, and for the first time I feel good about being (a self-destructive insect, only females prefer him, so must he die in 17 years)

"Zerg: Female Lord, can you spare my life?" " Is really a work that makes people shine. It is neither deliberately sadistic nor forcedly sweet, but it shows a delicate warmth in the plainness, which is particularly in line with the aesthetics of contemporary young people. The story is set in a Zerg world where females are inferior to males and males are superior to males. The protagonist Lin Moguang travels through thousands of years and becomes a tool man in history who "sends experience packages". But as the plot progresses, the relationship between him and Abelius gradually heats up. Although Abelius is a sickly and beautiful woman, she is tough and gentle, which makes people feel sorry for her. Lin Moguang also went from the initial helplessness to the later reluctance and then to the deep attraction. This kind of emotional line advances very slowly, but it makes people more and more interested in it. There is a line in the book that impressed me deeply: "I hope you feel more comfortable." This sentence instantly touched my heart and made people feel the pure and sincere emotion between them. This kind of delicate emotional description is not deliberately sensational, but makes people feel warmth and strength. Overall, the narrative pace of this book is unhurried and has no rigid routines, but it shows a real touch in the plainness. If you like Zerg themes and want to see an emotional story that is not exaggerated, this book is definitely worth a try.

To be honest, it was a bit difficult to read. The opening chapter kept emphasizing Ya's nobility as a savior. The dialogue between the characters was very ancient, hahaha, and it was quite interesting. However, I always felt that the ancient style did not go well with the interstellar Zerg, so it seemed a bit scratchy, and the plot was a bit delayed. After reading the following, I felt that the author should be a good writer. There is still a lot of room for growth in writing online novels. He is a potential stock. I look forward to the author's great growth [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This is the first time I want to write a long review, but I don't know if people will see it ( It's finally tied. I was really surprised to find this book on the recommendation. I fell in love with this book from the introduction. It's very good for me. The writing style of the author is really good. It expresses the feeling that I wanted to write before. I really like the way the story is written, the plot and the shaping of the characters (although sometimes I am confused after reading ten lines at a glance and have to read it again. I must keep updating it. Don't interrupt it. I will always follow it. ٩( *´`* )۶♬*゜ (I'm really curious about how the plot will go if Lin Moguang dies. You should also pay attention to your health and have a good rest. The update time in the past few days has been very late. Have a happy life and be happy every day!

This book really hopes that they will not be together

It looks good, the writing is very good, the characterization is also very good, the emotional development of the two protagonists is also very reasonable, and the emotions are very delicate I don't know how long it's been since I've seen such a normal emotional line. Everyone has their own position and will not be easily shaken by their feelings. They are never the only ones in their world.

I think I've seen this name before, it's a very popular name. (Let me explain, uh, I don't know how to say it. What I actually want to say is that it will become popular sooner or later because the writing is very good. Then I want to say it, but I don't know how to say it tactfully, and then, forget it, it's just that the capital writing is very good and it will definitely become popular. Then I want to change the way of saying it, and the weirder it gets, the more I say it, and I hit it several times, so that's it) [Making faces] [Making faces] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses] [Blowing kisses]

The author's writing style is okay, but the plot is a bit delayed, and some content is too repetitive, which makes it a little wordy (whisper), but the world view is very nice, it complements the entire Zerg setting, and the main cp is very interesting (the sense of fate is very nice, and I personally feel that the dialogue words are a bit awkward) Great work, author~

It's very good. This Zerg worldview has been very completely completed by the author, and the logic is very reasonable. It can be seen that the author has worked hard on the concept. The laws of the Zerg have also changed with the times, and are very close to reality. It breaks away from the common Zerg literature that shows affection, is fictitious about the times, and has illogical laws. Moreover, the conflicts and relationships between the male protagonists are very subtle, the emotions are very delicate, and the descriptions are very careful. It can be seen that the protagonist is confused and chaotic but with a little longing. Ya is struggling and wandering in the darkness of being injured, but he is strong and vital. The two redeemed each other, which was very touching! ! [Cry]

Is the he in this book a double-death he or a deputy cp he...

Why do I feel like there is a high probability of a tragedy? No [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The author's writing is very good. I feel like I have to use my brain to read this [face covering] [face covering] I hope the ending can be he and give Xiaoguang a good ending [almost crying] [almost crying] Xiaoguang is really pitiful [almost crying] [almost crying] This is one of the few novels that I can finish reading [love] [love]

The outstanding point is that it is atypical and novel. 1 It is not a conventional time travel. Before the time travel, Shou was married to the time travel shell for various reasons (not too accurate. I really don't know how to say it). I was abused. Then I went through time and changed and fell in love. 2. There is no system for some bullshit rescue/strategy, etc. Then you complete the task and go home/reward or something like that (like catching people with a carrot. I have almost never seen this kind of article about people who go back, so they all stay) 3 Finally, it's not a human being who traveled through time (although it's cool, but it's too common and a bit tiring) and then saves the upper/middle/lower generals. 4 I'm looking forward to how this almost be-like ending will be solved (this is a rather explosive point if it's handled well) (it's not out yet) 5. The emotional line is not very industrial and saccharine, and there are traces of development to follow. 6. A novel and unique affirmative action route (finally it is not a purely forceful reform. Simply developing an inhibitor or the like does not fundamentally solve the problem. This is transitional. It took many generations of hard work to completely complete) (I found that the unique ability of the male worm was cultivated and education was also focused on). I agree with this point of focusing on the most fundamental aspect of education. The not so good thing is 1. The progress is a bit slow and the book is being serialized. 2 Maybe you are not used to having dual perspectives interspersed in the novel? I have no problem accepting good 3. The development of the plot is a bit slow (I'm not familiar with the detailing method and the writing is very detailed), but it's acceptable for a new author. 4 I feel a little lonely🙁 because I came here through time and don't have many acquaintances. For many people, they don't care about him and hope to arrange some friendship 5. The part about the two fathers was very confusing because their names didn't appear much at first and they were replaced by hair color. Hope it can be changed

My heart was filled with panic, and I felt that it would be very cruel, although he. I desperately want to watch it as long as I know the follow-up, but why is this Dead Eye so disappointing? Hurry, hurry up!!! [I'm about to cry] Watch Dead Eye quickly!!

It feels very real, although there are many words repeated over and over again in different forms, but isn't this the norm for lonely people? Because I have no one to rely on, no relatives or friends, I can only think about the same things over and over again...

It's very interesting, but the author's updates are unstable, so I'm scared. If nothing else happens, I'll wait until the update is finished before reading it. Teacher, I will always be waiting for your [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] Come on!