I Died Wrongfully After Saving Someone, and Became the Source of the Supernatural

It's okay, but it's a bit unrealistic to control the weird. Mysterious Resurrection can control weirdness because weirdness doesn't kill people indiscriminately. And the weirdness in this book was created with the first purpose of eradicating human beings. How can it be controlled? Even if it is controlled, the speed of recovery will be far faster than that of Mysterious Resurrection.

It doesn't look good and doesn't feel like the protagonist of a revenge novel at all. The first few pictures at the beginning are quite nice. But you gave the protagonist such a powerful power from the beginning, which resulted in your subsequent revenge writing not being very good. It doesn't reflect the feeling of the protagonist as a powerful boss at all. He was still hesitant to deal with the enemy. He didn't see anything behind him, only Su. You have such powerful abilities, you don't need to negotiate with others at all. I prefer to cut through the mess with a quick knife. If you're going to write a revenge novel, don't give the protagonist that much energy at the beginning. The beginning is pretty good, and I think the introduction is pretty good too. It's just that I feel like you failed in writing later. I wanted to give it one star, but I heard points would be deducted for two stars.

1. Suppress the combat power. 2. The source cannot control the weirdness. It can be controlled to deal with the source. 3. Water is always whining, so you can't stop being verbose and pushy. Do you want to be decisive? 4. Killing people in a city directly is not possible. You have to broadcast the announcement to kill one by one. 5. As soon as Weirdness came out, someone actually had weird means.

I can only say that it is okay, but the main character, the villain boss, is a bit weak in writing. He has to do everything by himself and has too many conversations with people. In the early stage, revenge can be written like this, but later on, it can be promoted to become a group portrait with more supporting roles. The main character only promotes development after foraging, while the author's main character is like a god, getting stronger day by day! Because the protagonist can completely lose his humanity. As time progresses and the protagonist becomes stronger, the human mind will gradually decrease and only divinity will remain. The revenge on humans has begun to turn into watching a movie. Kill some and save some, and want to watch longer to pass the boring time. The subsequent plot is more of a battlefield between humans and ghosts. In this plot, humans and ghosts have been fighting for almost one or two hundred years, and an alien civilization has invaded, pushing the protagonist to invade all the worlds...

It looks good, but I don't like to see those who cooperate with the country. Every time they cooperate with the country, they are inferior. It seems that if they don't cooperate with the country, their skills are useless. I get angry when I look at them.

My evaluation only has two words: The people who died in Renji md30 were the Pig's Foot family and two or three NPCs.

It gives people a feeling of muscle weakness. On the surface it was an enjoyable read, but in fact it was quite frustrating. What's more, the male protagonist has no feelings anymore, and there are cheats. Shouldn't there be a killing spree? I don't understand why you caught so many little ones and left them there to be punished.

The art of water, I hope you will also encounter this kind of injustice, look at you are still so watery

How should I put it, I've been watching it for so long. It feels like the players that Wu Jun came from another world are the protagonists, and most of the plots are about them. Lin Tian (the protagonist in the introduction) basically has no plot.

Many settings are incomplete... Why not capture and torture all the perpetrators at once? Why should Su Min be spared? It was said that the world would be dragged into eternal darkness in three days. However, two days passed and three days later, the influence exerted by the strange master was actually able to be exorcised by a reborn person. It is obvious that not even an F-level weird can be killed in the future, but the influence of the strange master was eliminated. It collapsed too fast. I seriously doubt that the comment was bought.