Slow Wear************

If you read this book, I can only say that it is really a slow journey. It's not possible to travel slowly. There are too many things the author wants to write about. I think it's quite interesting. At least I'll comment after watching the first world. But maybe I'm not proficient enough? It may also be because although Slow Travel is also composed of many small worlds, the length of each world is still limited. For many things that the author wants to write, can it be touched on a little bit? I can feel it and have ideas, but many things develop a bit inexplicably. I didn't see some foreshadowing, or there were too few foreshadowings, but it doesn't affect the viewing. If it is really limited by the length, my suggestion is that the author should open an extra chapter and write in some things that have not been mentioned, or you can write a small drama or a small introduction at the end of each picture to deepen the image of the character. Since you want to write about so many things and people other than the original story, then find a way to make them have roots. Otherwise, I think some of them are a bit empty. You can write about the protagonist's feelings, or past events, or his father's affairs, or his mother's affairs, or Song Cheng in a small theater. Don't you think it's interesting? For that one named He, that one has been waiting for the lost child to come home, I think there can be a small theater? The author can think about it. If there are no roots, I personally will think about it. What's the point of adding these? It's better to write more emotional stories between the two protagonists. And the team leader of the national technical department named Hou or something like that, can you write about the situation when he encountered oxygen oxide, and his psychological changes?

I don't like the second world. I feel it's too unfair to Song Chengting who has memories. The fear of being shown is too obvious. After all, I have had feelings for a lifetime. Even if I don't remember, I can't just endure it just because Song has previous memories! …

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