A Name Passed Down Through the Ages

At first I thought it was a novel of the same type as Lord of the Abyss, but now it seems like it's in the vein of Meowker's Creed. Not bad, there is a successor to the virtual online game. Some people say that like Soul of Burning Steel, the tone of this book is too relaxed, and it can only be said to be worlds apart from Burning Steel. Personally, I feel like a classic virtual online game like Miao Ke Creed. A genre that was almost extinct in its starting point can actually be seen in Tomato

It's pretty good, it doesn't look too draggy, and the plot has some epic flavor. If the author can write the ultimate expression well, it may not be a good novel. There is another shortcoming that is not a shortcoming, that is, the distinction between games and reality; my personal hope is to enhance the sense of immersion in the game, and hope that the author can write a true legend.

Well, it is well written at the beginning, very attractive to a considerable portion of the audience, and it lays out a good background. However, the author's lack of writing skills and imagination make this novel obviously incapable of succeeding. The length can only be supplemented by a large amount of skill descriptions, but there is a lack of description of characters and scenes, or the author has too much foreshadowing, making the plot more and more boring and the combat power more and more degrading. And this is unqualified in a novel Finally, in this novel genre, new writing means good writing, and this will require a lot of settings. This is also my advice to the author. Originally I wanted to give you 2 hearts, but I added 1 heart to you based on the theme. I hope you can keep up your efforts and write better novels [I learned] [I learned]

Full marks. The combination of Soul of Burning Steel and the pseudo-DND system is very well done. The combat description and plot context are also enjoyable to watch.

Come on, author!

It's really awesome, buddy. I came here to read it because the author gave me a thumbs up. The descriptions of various statistics, skills, and moves are very good. Only those who have actually written it know how difficult it is to write, and they will even be criticized by readers. But the reason why this book is not popular is probably because the title and introduction do not attract readers. The author can change the name through book testing, which may change his destiny.

As of now, it's okay. The author should go and promote the book. Western fantasy/game/magic/epic world view/rebirth/a decisive protagonist in killing.

Fighting is fun! The background is similar to "Soul of Burning Steel". The protagonist is an old player who opens a new account and kills all the way. The main line is to save the world, and also travels to surrounding planes. It is very exciting.

At first, I read the book several times without clicking it because of its title. After reading it, I realized that this book is really good. The setting of the magic-modified DND is clear, the combat is well written, and the skills are also very detailed. It can be regarded as a fairy tale, but it is a bit short.

Each chapter is basically 4,000 words [shocked][shocked][shocked]