Love: There Is Something Wrong with the Little Loli Given to Me by Fishing

The story is quite good. Although Jiang He's book is ahead in this subject matter, this one also has its own unique flavor. The author's previous book was quite good, and this one will probably not be bad either, and the sugar content should be sufficient.

A very sweet daily love story, which is realistic in fantasy. I have read more than half of the chapters but I don't have a particularly strong desire to open it and read it every day. When I realized this, I was puzzled because I like this book very much. I suddenly realized a few days ago that this book is really realistic based on fantasy. I can't do this well, I'm not considerate enough, I'm not smart enough. For example, in one chapter the heroine asked the protagonist "What kind of girl does your mother like?", I think the first thing I thought of was "I don't know very well, but as long as... (I forget what I was thinking at the time) she will accept it", but the protagonist's answer was "Just be yourself, don't force yourself to change. At worst, we won't live with them, and we will take over when they get old." I am just a goblin who steals the sunshine on the Internet. He is really good and she is perfect, but this can never shine into my reality, so I remain silent.

Haokang, a rare theme in Tomato, is currently 7.1 And has full potential to be 9.2 And above. The author has good writing skills and has researched the social conditions of ancient dynasties. There are currently no poisonous points. Please feel free to read it.

It is a daily sweet story. The setting is similar to My Girlfriend Came from a Thousand Years Ago, but the relationship develops faster. The author still understands the basic knowledge of the Han Dynasty. Overall, it is good.

I love reading it, the writing is very good, and it should get sweeter as you go to the end. It's a bit sweet now, but don't do anything like wearing it back later [face covering]

It had to be you. After reading two chapters, the writing style felt so familiar. When I opened it, I realized it was you. The male protagonist's personality is similar to the previous book, but the female protagonist's personality is a bit different. The author didn't rest on his laurels, which is good. The heroine of this book is independent, precocious, and decisive. There are two plots that left a particularly deep impression on me. One is when the male protagonist tells the story of Sima Xiangru, and the female protagonist directly raises the knife, haha. Second, the male protagonist's parents came, and the female protagonist was too young to introduce her to her parents (the female protagonist is 16, the male protagonist is 23, you are really punished). In the part where the male and female protagonists were discussing on the phone, the female protagonist said that the husband and wife share weal and woe, and it was heartbreaking to be so precocious. Only then did I realize that the female protagonist was only about 16, and I had always ignored the heroine's performance before. All in all, this book is very good to read, especially the handling of emotional lines. The author handles it very delicately and tenderly, which is worth reading carefully.

It took me a few days to catch up until now. It looks very good and I like it very much. There are typos but very few. I read all the way through 197 chapters this time. I estimate that there are no more than 20 typos (maybe less than 15, I am exaggerating a bit. Some words were deliberately written wrong by the author, so I did not count them). I enjoyed reading it very much. Now I am regretting that I forgot to @ the author to change the words. The plot is very coherent, and there are no plot points that are suddenly incomprehensible. There are some minor historical issues that I don't care about here. I saw someone doing popular science in Duan Commentary. If you want to know more, you can read Duan Commentary while reading the article. There is no poisonous point (it is impossible for a single heroine to have any poisonous points in daily novels). The daily writing is very rich. After Yang and Bai established their relationship, I can only say that the part of spreading sugar is a big one ("ಡωಡ") Finally, I am impressed by the author's driving skills. He really drives the car when he owns it [laughs evilly] [like] It's been 26 years since I left. Time flies so fast. The book has been finished a long time ago. It's a very good daily novel. I'll read it again when I have time.

It's really good-looking and doesn't have any headlines. It is overall relaxed and pleasant, with no conflicts such as pretentiousness or slap in the face. It is a very good daily novel, as long as you don't suddenly have a seizure later or have trouble with the novel (it seems that the author's mood is relatively stable at the moment). The relationship progresses smoothly, there is no stomachache to distract from the plot, the relationship comes naturally, and the protagonist does not appear to be too dog-eating. It is a two-way relationship. It's a pity that I can't see any teaching and training at the moment, but it's okay to have some training, so I just hope that the book will be updated soon. Although the subject matter is special, I also hope that there will be no situation where there is no relationship or name as husband and wife before the end. The pace seems to be very slow at present. I am worried about whether it can be updated to their daily life after marriage, and whether it will be discontinued or completed too quickly (this only means that I personally hate daily stories that end just after they get married or just after they become husband and wife. I personally think that life after marriage is the time to truly reap the fruits of the previous daily love). In short, it is not finished yet, and the word count is still small, but it is very comfortable to read. I hope the author will work hard to update it.

It looks good and has a sweet feeling that makes me envious and jealous. I personally like the heroine's design. It has a similar feeling to Man Sui in "The End of the Ming Dynasty: A Thousand Miles to the Hungry", but it is different. The setting is similar to "My Girlfriend Came from a Thousand Years Ago". On a scale of 10, I personally feel it would be 8 points higher.

It took me two days to read the entire book. Overall, it is the best online book I have read in 25 years. It deserves a high rating of 9.4. After reading it early yesterday morning, I felt lost and empty, so I wrote a book review. First of all, as far as the characters are concerned, the author has created a perfect image in my heart The Loli image is vividly written, retaining the naughty and lively nature of children without losing the intellectual maturity of adults. Unlike some popular writings, the written Loli is either like a child, can only act coquettishly and act cute, and looks childish, but it does not look like a cheating sheep. The most important thing is that the character arc of Abai is very obvious, strong, independent and confident. The author did not write her as a doll who fell into the nest of a vassal. Therefore, the image of Abai is very three-dimensional and full. Secondly, let's talk about emotional processing. In a word, it's "as it should be, go smoothly." Whether from a practical logic or an artistic logic, the relationship between the two is "as it should be." There are no flashy emergencies, no heart-breaking incidents caused by misunderstandings. Everything is smooth sailing, plain and sincere. Let's talk about the aesthetic characteristics of this book. Beauty and sublimity coexist, and the writing style is smooth and graceful. It builds a paradise of ideal love, making people instinctively feel love and tenderness, but at the same time, it always abstracts the realistic factors from the ideal. The elements make people reflect on real life, keep a certain "safe distance" from the text, and see the love story that is beautiful in the 🐑🦊, and the sublime is contained in the trivial daily life, showing the infinite power of ordinary life of rice, oil, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea through small things. Finally, there are a few "famous scenes" that I have to mention. I think they are the best in the book and reveal the core of the book. One is after Yang Qing bought shoes for Hu Bai, the small luck between the two of them and the three clerks that night. This scene sets the tone for the book that is ordinary but still retains the essence of life. The other is the finale of Yang Qing Traveling back to the Han Dynasty in an instant to see Hu Bai in the past. This section jumps from reality to dreamland, from the future to the past. The time and space transition re-presents the past 300 chapters of life in front of you like a picture. It seems real and illusory, and it tells you that the character has grown up, the story is over, and the aftertaste is too long. , It was so destructive that I couldn't tell whether it was a dream or reality. When the story ended, "The whole book is finished" was presented loudly and loudly, which brought me back to reality, and then a burst of emptiness came over me. However, although the ending was indeed well written, the author privately thought that he stopped at Yang Qing across the bank to confess his love to Hu Bai for the last second, and finally fell into the water. It feels like it can be removed. On the one hand, the role of the fox father and the presentation of memories left in the past are good. On the other hand, writing it this way can easily cause ambiguity in the "dream ending". Moreover, even if the dance is best, Ah Bai dances. This is also consistent with what Fox Bai said earlier. As for why I chose the above ending, I will give the reasons below. The first is to echo the title of the book. Other suitors are so coy, but Yang Qing is not the same. He boldly tells his love, which is considered avant-garde in the eyes of the Han Dynasty people, and it can also be regarded as the title of "pervert". Secondly, the emotional expression at the end of the story here It is the most full. On the one hand, it expresses one's heart directly and expresses intuitively. On the other hand, it contrasts Yang Qing with others, which can better reflect Yang Qing's particularity and its extraordinary significance to Hu Bai. Finally, "Fox Jiao Jiao! I love you! I want to be with you forever." "Together with you!" Is the best condensation of past plots and emotions. It gives me the feeling that Xiao Hei confessed loudly to Daya on the train at the end of "Sakura Blossoms". All the past came to mind while the train moved forward into the future. This kind of feeling Intuitive emotional expression can best show hope and leave no regrets. Finally, it can avoid the ambiguity of the "dream ending" of diving, so that no matter it is Hu Bai in the past, Hu Bai now, or even the future Hu Bai, there will be no regrets, and they all carry Yang Qing's commitment.

To be honest, the writing of this book is average at the beginning. There are some parts in the plot that are too obvious (to avoid spoilers, so I won't go into details), but the author's character creation ability is really strong. The character of the boss was actually very blunt when he first appeared, and he almost gave up on it. However, later on, the character creation became more and more fleshed out, and he even started to push the main plot, which made people feel very clever. Overall, it's pretty good. The author avoids describing big scenes. The way the unit drama is written is very interesting, but it doesn't feel particularly long. How it ends makes people look forward to it.

The subject matter is novel, a genre that has never been seen before, the development diary of an ignorant girl, interesting and interesting [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Delicious, love it! I just like this kind of everyday writing that is well written and sweet. The rhythm is also very good! There are not so many bad things, the whole main story is really good! Unlike other books that have so many trivial subplots. This book is very enjoyable throughout! The delicacy of daily life and the gradual transformation of identities are also very smooth, and it does not make people feel abrupt. For some reason, I feel happy almost the whole time when I read this book! I like the protagonist's delicate and gentle treatment of Hu Bai, and I like Hu Bai's ladylike temperament and naughty character. I just like this kind of sweet and greasy daily writing! The single female main event is high! Loli race high! Dear gentlemen!ロリーがきだ! ! !

It is considered a masterpiece in this genre. I think the best thing about this book is that the heroine's character is very novel and eye-catching. It breaks away from the traditional delicate heroine style and uses this lively and out-of-the-box naughty style as the heroine's character. In my opinion, it is still very fresh. The author has a good grasp of the "naughty child" character of the heroine. If you are not careful, you can easily become annoying. In my opinion, the author has handled this aspect well [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

God of Gods, very beautiful. This type of novel is quite rare.

Great, reminds me of Xu Qing and Jiang He [Blowing Kiss] I watched before

The writing style is very fresh, a very good daily sweet story, and the characters of the male and female protagonists are quite compatible. This book has become a spice in my life😭 Going to work every day is really numb. Sometimes I don't read much after work. Whenever I feel sad, I just read five or six chapters. It can be cured and it's really sweet to my heart [face covering] It's not the hard-sweet kind of industrial saccharine, but the kind that is natural and comfortable. In summary, I like it so much, please author try to update (◍•ᴗ•◍)

It's a very good author. It's okay if you take your time. It feels like Xiao Hemiao's article. It's very comfortable to write and allows me to read it slowly. Come on!

I caught up with the latest chapter in one go. It's very interesting. The style is very similar to Xu Qing's book. The writing is very delicate. It feels like I'm back to when I was reading Sister Hua's book last year. Maintain the quality of this book and keep writing it to be a god!

I finally finished reading it. The writing is okay, and the previous plot is also very good. However, after the female protagonist takes the college entrance examination, it becomes less good. It completely becomes a plot with the female protagonist, who has been working on her career, and the male protagonist has become a marginal figure. I feel that novels with this theme are more popular because they are mainly male-centric. And later on, the male and female protagonists are completely obsessed with money. They have to haggle to buy a wedding dress and a house. I also didn't like the plot of the heroine selling Hanfu in college. I feel that there is no need to write it in such detail. [Thinking] It will affect the perception.

At first glance, it seemed that only Xiao Chunan could write this kind of sweet daily article, which made me feel dizzy.

At first, I was worried that this kind of subject matter would lead to a lot of quarrels in the comments because it involves real dynasty history, but it seems that there is no such problem at present. The author has put more energy into shaping the image of the heroine. The characteristics of Hu Bai's character are vividly created and look very comfortable.

After reading the whole book, I feel that the text is very delicate, and many parts have a literary flavor, such as the word "" used in the article. This is a word that I have never seen in other online articles, and it often appears only in other literature. Although some of the plots are a bit confusing due to censorship issues, I think the author has done a good job. The full text of the article is available online. It is more of an everyday style, with an urban pastoral style, and is very reassuringly bland. But I just feel that the plot of the article spans a bit too much, and the advancement speed is a bit too fast, which may lead to some holes not being filled. It's just the ending that I don't think I liked very much. I think the relationship between Yu Zili and Zong Zizheng and Aqiao's relationship can be interspersed with the main plot. In short, I feel that I can write more. I think I can write about children getting married and having children like the people from the Tang Dynasty next door. In the process of writing, I can intersperse the emotional lines of other characters and A Bai's business... Well... In short, I hope the author can write more. I still hope that A Bai and Qing Ge will have a perfect ending. I am always not satisfied with this ending. Then speaking of the extra story, I think I can write another plot of one or two chapters to summarize the life of General "Ayan" and Brother Qing after the Han Dynasty. As a loyal reader of this book, I very much hope that the author will write it again. Author, please, please🙏🙏🙏

The plot is reasonable, the narrative is clear, and the emotions are rich, especially the fact that the heroine is really written legitimately by the author, which is really rare. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I'm so sour, sour, sour, sour, sour, sour. I'm so sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet.

It's really beautiful. The author's daily writing is really good, plain but not boring, and the writing style is delicate. It's just that the updates are too slow and not enough to watch. The author's last book is also very interesting. If you are not satisfied with daily writing, you can read it. This is what I read here.

The characters are good, and the two people have very high IQs. Well, the plot is too ordinary, and I don't see any special features. You can read it when you have nothing to do. It's a normal and ordinary daily novel, not poisonous at all, but the writing is too bland. The subject matter is very good, and there are many points to write about. The author can stop writing slowly and too blandly. I jumped when I read it. The author can mention the progress.

It looks good, I hope it won't be the same as what someone named Kong Ma Tianxing wrote [face covering] [OK]

The writing is not bad, the writing style is okay, and there are no bad points. I just feel that the number of readers is not consistent with the actual number. There are obviously more than 100,000 readers, but there are very few paragraph reviews. When the 100th chapter was over, almost no one posted paragraph reviews [Chigua]

It's really good-looking, and it's not a headline-grabbing one. It's indeed very perverted, and the details are handled very well. [Send heartfelt message] I just don't know how to write if I really want Abai to go to school in the future. I will pick up my wife from school every day. And I feel that there is no need for Abai to go to school.

I know a lot about each dynasty. The settings are clever and not obtrusive. The tacit understanding between the male and female protagonists is very reasonable and there are layers of foreshadowing. Some words about the heroine's father and some partial remarks are well written. There are always some simple words that can move me. For example, the sentence about fresh meat buns can buy the heroine in troubled times. The writing is good, and the three views conveyed are very correct, worthy of this rating.