HP: Hogwarts Doesn't Believe in Fairy Tales

The Philosopher's Stone article is probably the first climax of this article. It's very well written. Whether it's the two-person cooperation at the beginning, the rescue of teammates in the middle, the spell duel, or the final outcome of the event, the rhythm is well controlled. The relationship between the male and female protagonists who have been longing for each other has finally taken a big step forward, and the little tsundere is so cute🥰 I hope the author writes more, I really want to send it

It's a very good book [full][full]. It doesn't make the protagonist too invincible right from the beginning, nor does it have an unflattering plot. The emotional line is also well written. (I'd like to give the author a few tips. First, don't rush to confirm the relationship. After all, we are only eleven or twelve years old. It's really weird to fall in love at this age, and the ambiguous period is really good... Second, it can depict Sharp's shy scenes, which also has a unique flavor [shy])

It's super, super good-looking (in my opinion). Of course, it's still a bit different from Harry Potter and I'm Legend, but it can definitely be used for killing time. I really like books with a single heroine [Adoration] It would be better if there were more love lines @August is not July

As of Chapter 38, the relationship between the core characters has been determined and the storyline has been unfolded. The male protagonist is calm and steady, with clear goals and clear logic. But he managed to treat others with sincerity and maintained his true nature as a young man. So this contrast has a unique charm. The heroine is strong and reserved, which is reflected in her pursuit of excellence. This is the quality that a truly noble person should have. Very good character. The text control is excellent, and the dialogue design has the style of People's Literature Publishing House. Overall, it is a very orthodox and excellent Harry Potter fanfic. Come on, author.

Although there is no rating yet, this is indeed a good book. The heroine's setting, writing style, and plot are all very good. I give it a five-star rating. (The heroine is the original heroine; both the protagonist and the heroine are from Yingyuan)

It's quite good to watch. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is reasonable and sweet. My aunt laughed when she watched it. And it's not invincible. The male and female protagonists have grown up steadily and their personalities are quite likable. The female protagonist is cool and a bit arrogant, while the male protagonist is calm and humorous. And it's not a nanny style. I don't interact much with Harry and the others. There are quite a lot of original plots. Counting the starting points and Tomatoes, they are among the top ten Hogwarts fans that I like.

Good-looking brothers, I haven't responded to the topic in the early stage, but now the development speed is obviously starting to accelerate. This novel is unsystematic and relatively well-written. The emotional development of the male and female protagonists and the changes in the original characters (Neville's changes) are all very good. This is a HP fanfic with great potential. Now I have started to promote the main plot of this Dark Lord (through prophecy of the third Dark Lord). I am looking forward to this book. I would like to give you a five-star encouragement. Cheers, author💪!

Who is the protagonist? Why is the female protagonist better than the male protagonist in every aspect? The male protagonist is the Dark Lord and the female lead is the White Devil and outdoes the male lead?

The first part of the book was pretty good, especially the 20 or so chapters of Professor McGonagall's MGGA. It made me laugh so hard, and it kept up with current events. However, I hope that in the future, I won't be the "personal" nanny of the trio. It's fine with the main plot, but I really can't stand being the guardian and guide by my side all the time. I'll make it OOC appropriately, just don't be too outrageous and cultivate immortality [face covering] Come on, author.

Yes, come on, author, you must finish it.

I feel like I've read a better HP fanfic, I just hope it won't stop updating.

The writing is very good. Both the protagonist and the heroine are from Takain. The interaction is sweet and genius-like. They are not overly invincible and strong but not overly strong. Moreover, this book is the first fanfic to describe the protagonist's training and combat experience in detail. The following pictures are very detailed about training with Nicolas Flamel. The various secondary creations are also very creative. The characters are very consistent with the original work. The author updates it five times a day and is invincible. The rating of this book should be higher than 8 points [Adoration] [Adoration]

The author's writing is quite good, and the plot is also developing in depth, but there is too little. The prophecy is written in a fog, which makes me uncomfortable. Also, will the heroine be selfish? The sacrifice must be the heroine, not the invisible woman, right?

Original heroine, and well portrayed

What a good book, very comfortable to read Especially the character of the protagonist is very well developed. He is not alone, but has deep connections with other characters. He is a genius, but he does not forcefully pretend to be a bum, and he is not aloof. It can be seen that the author respects the original work very much.

No one has good works? This writing style ranks at least in the top three among the many books I have read.

Um, forgive me for not speaking. People who like Harry Potter can watch it. The plot is rich, the details of the characters are well described, and almost everyone has an online IQ. Highly recommended

A very good book, with an original female protagonist which is rare.

It's really good. Anyway, I read it quite smoothly and didn't follow the original work all the time. It's good to tell your own story

It's a very natural and comfortable reading experience. The author must not stop updating it!

Support. Basically, there are no big poisonous points, and the characters are not very OOC. I hope readers will continue to write. There are original parts. It feels like a very ambitious story.

Very good hp fanfic

I read Grand Army in one go. I like the plot of the book very much. The setting of the protagonist's time travel is a little detailed in the first few chapters of the article. It was not described well and was added later (it may dissuade some readers) (but it does not affect reading)

There is no problem at the moment, if it is a determined single female protagonist. The more words you have, the more attractive it is. After all, no one wants to rush for an update after reading half of it [Chigua]

Very well written, cheers author

Come on, the author is very good-looking

Great Come on, author

It feels good and delicious😋

It looks good, I hope I can finish it.

The writing was okay, I finished reading it in one day