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Be brave, we can't get involved in the path of Immortal Lord. I give you a five-star negative review (only two updates a day, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this)

There are quite a lot of secret realms in the original work, including the Qiankun Crystal Wall that can be put together by collecting all of them, the Yuan Realm that makes up the realm, the Whispering Forest, and the Book Mountain.

The original text says that he has just come to the Gu world. He is kind, he is upright, he is innocent, and he repays evil with kindness. I think the protagonist was written according to this sentence in the early stage, but I also want to add one more point. He is a bit whimsical and wants to support Fang Yuan, but it doesn't matter if he changes it later. According to this setting of Yan Bingdan Qingti, it should be better in the future. Come on, author, write more, and stick to it.

In the early stage, I was bound to the original work and failed to exert my own abilities. In the later stage, I can still write well. I can grow faster and become an immortal faster so that I can better reflect my personal thinking. Write according to my own ideas and don't care about what other people say. I only need to be able to achieve the six successes of the original work. I hope you will write more smoothly as you write and be able to complete the book hahaha. Be careful of the Ten-Turn Forbidden Internet Gu.

Well written, the beginning of a legend

If an ordinary person has traveled through it and has only read the book, although he has a human emperor flag in his heart, he cannot make lofty ambitions as soon as he comes, and he wants to do everything in the world. The Gu world is not just a time traveler. In the beginning, he thought of supporting Fang Yuan, which was acceptable, but after realizing Fang Yuan's methods later, he hoped not to do this. The author did make changes and explained it perfectly. It is worth continuing to read.

Among Gu fanfics, it should be able to reach an score of 8 or above. The change in the description of the protagonist's personality is also more in line with common sense. There are certain changes. It seems to me that it was influenced by God's will in the beginning. I hope the author will write it well. Later, he will just write decisively and decisively, and the devil will go to the end.

At first, I was still thinking how cool it would be if Channel was an auxiliary. It turned out that there was such a thing as divine writing, but I really didn't expect it. Then there is the alchemy method and the residual Gu recipe. Okay, okay. According to this idea, why not write another tea ceremony? Green tea is tea too! Hahaha

I haven't read Gu Immortal, but the author's introduction is very detailed and most of the writing is good. However, the transformation of the characters is a bit too deliberate and stiff.

The beginning is the same as Gu, a dull start, but it gets better in the later stages. The overall writing is good, the context is clear, and the character creation is also very successful. I hope the protagonist's growth can have ups and downs, so that it can be more exciting. At first, I also thought the setting of the guardian was a bit poisonous, but then I realized after reading it, it turned out that the protagonist had this idea when he first came to the Gu world. He saw Fang Yuan's power and gave up the idea. What the author wants to express is probably to write that the protagonist, as a reader, is far away from Fang Yuan's life, so when he first sees Fang Yuan, he will naturally assume the feeling of reading and stand in Fang Yuan's position. When he slowly came into contact with and integrated into this world, he saw the reality clearly and understood that this was not just a book, but also a place where he lived. His actions would lead to his own death and attract Fang Yuan's poisonous hands. Fang Yuan would not hold anything against him, so he realized that it was a stupid decision to be Fang Yuan's protector, so his thoughts changed.

In fact, your Hua Lu does not have to be limited to refining elixirs. You can practice many things, such as combining two ten-awareness bodies into one elixir or combining Dao marks. The protagonist is an alchemy furnace, but due to material problems, the firepower and quantity of alchemy in a single furnace are small. Can the protagonist be exposed to thunder from the sky or roasted by ground fire to increase the productivity of the alchemy furnace? In fact, there is another way to surpass the Nine-turn Venerable. You can obtain five Gu with different elements, refine them into spiritual roots, and raise your cultivation level. You don't have to use Gu to improve your attack methods. The Gu is used to improve yourself and become an Immortal Queen's Immortal Aperture, making the world in the Immortal Aperture easier. Once the Earth Treasure of the Birth Genius has been cultivated, you don't need to care about lifespan, and you no longer need the longevity Gu to extend it. You don't need to rely on the Gu to sense the avenue of heaven and earth, but you can sense the avenue yourself. The disadvantage is that if the fate Gu does not agree, you may often suffer more lightning strikes and natural disasters. The disadvantage is that when you are still a mortal, thunder often strikes you. In the Nascent Soul stage, you have a way to rebirth in a way that is not easy to waste your qualifications.

I would like to give you a suggestion: save the Peiyuan Pill until the fifth peak and use it to become the Ten Ultimate Body. This is a special blessing. If there is no female protagonist, you can ask Fang Yuan to turn Chen Bo into a female protagonist There are a lot of typos The author's iron-blooded plot. Fang Yuan is a Ten Ultimate Body, but according to the judgment of the clan leader, isn't the protagonist also a Ten Ultimate Body? He just has to break through the fourth rank. Here's another suggestion: don't write too much about the bad things Fang Yuan did, or be careful about getting banned.

The characters are very successfully created, they are all flesh and blood, and the plot is also very exciting, especially the atmosphere in the play. Overall, this book gave me a good feeling, and I recommend reading it.

It's easy to tell, and the divine killing moves in it are cleverly designed. In this way, offensive, defensive, healing, movement, etc. Are no longer a problem. As for alchemy, I hope to get more elixirs to directly support the max, and include Ruan Dan in the bag. What about powerful elixirs and kidney deficiency elixirs? I think we can have them. It's well written.

It's so good-looking, it's really so good-looking, the character of the protagonist is so to my liking, the plot is also very rigorous, and the IQ is very online (except for the idea of ​​​​supporting Fangyuan in the early stage) Author, keep up the good work! Although I can only come back once a week now, I will read it every time [Learned]

Well written! Come on, author

Very good, worth a look

Interesting, hope not to be banned

The author listened to the advice very much. I think he later changed his idea of ​​funding Fang Yuan and wanting to become Fang Yuan's protector. It is a very reasonable explanation that the protagonist changed from reading books, traveling through books, to integrating into the Gu world.

The writing is very delicate, not a novice's writing

Alchemy, it's very new among Gu fans, the setting is good, and there are divine killing moves in it. The author's ideas are very good. I hope to continue writing smoothly. Come on, come on

Fangyuan Yuan is pretty good at hiding it. It's true that the master's first move is so impressive. It's amazing, old man! The journey to the Gu world is indeed wonderful. The body is the alchemy furnace, and the heart is the place where the elixir is condensed. I really think about Tailiu very well [send my heart] [send my heart]

It is a very interesting novel. The soul travels to the Gu world and becomes a mortal. He wants to die and does not want to be a cow horse for the rest of his life. He is indeed unwilling to be mediocre. An adventure in a dream opened his mind, and he got an opportunity and started practicing. He is going to embark on a wonderful road. The author's description is wonderful and belongs to the best!

The world of Gu is also so exciting. The protagonist has an unexpected opportunity and refuses to be mediocre. He makes good use of his opportunities and continues to grow. The other characters are also very detailed. I felt nervous and exciting while watching it.

If you want to survive in the world, you have to become stronger and learn to fight! Qualification is really important, but you still have to work hard. It's very addictive if you look at it! It's an excellent novel in Tomato 🍅! [Note][Note]

A very interesting Gu fanfic. The original text contains very few Dan Dao and is well-founded. The writing style is smooth and full of truth. This is an excellent fanfic. By the way, does the author know how to write ancestral biographies? I'm afraid it's gone and I'll change it to four stars [face covering]

Super super super beautiful\(//∇//)\

It feels like there's a lot of potential

When Chen Bo has opportunities, qualifications, and a special physique, he definitely no longer wants to be an ordinary person. Looking at his cultivation and walking a wonderful path for himself, there must be some hard work and dedication in the process.

Haokang loves to watch, be careful of the Ten Turns Forbidden Network Gu