Gu: Oh No, I've Become an Alchemy Furnace

Be brave, we can't get involved in the path of Immortal Lord. I give you a five-star negative review (only two updates a day, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this)

There are quite a lot of secret realms in the original work, including the Qiankun Crystal Wall that can be put together by collecting all of them, the Yuan Realm that makes up the realm, the Whispering Forest, and the Book Mountain.

In the early stage, I was bound to the original work and failed to exert my own abilities. In the later stage, I can still write well. I can grow faster and become an immortal faster so that I can better reflect my personal thinking. Write according to my own ideas and don't care about what other people say. I only need to be able to achieve the six successes of the original work. I hope you will write more smoothly as you write and be able to complete the book hahaha. Be careful of the Ten-Turn Forbidden Internet Gu.

The original text says that he has just come to the Gu world. He is kind, he is upright, he is innocent, and he repays evil with kindness. I think the protagonist was written according to this sentence in the early stage, but I also want to add one more point. He is a bit whimsical and wants to support Fang Yuan, but it doesn't matter if he changes it later. According to this setting of Yan Bingdan Qingti, it should be better in the future. Come on, author, write more, and stick to it.

If an ordinary person has traveled through it and has only read the book, although he has a human emperor flag in his heart, he cannot make lofty ambitions as soon as he comes, and he wants to do everything in the world. The Gu world is not just a time traveler. In the beginning, he thought of supporting Fang Yuan, which was acceptable, but after realizing Fang Yuan's methods later, he hoped not to do this. The author did make changes and explained it perfectly. It is worth continuing to read.

Well written, the beginning of a legend

Among Gu fanfics, it should be able to reach an score of 8 or above. The change in the description of the protagonist's personality is also more in line with common sense. There are certain changes. It seems to me that it was influenced by God's will in the beginning. I hope the author will write it well. Later, he will just write decisively and decisively, and the devil will go to the end.

At first, I was still thinking how cool it would be if Channel was an auxiliary. It turned out that there was such a thing as divine writing, but I really didn't expect it. Then there is the alchemy method and the residual Gu recipe. Okay, okay. According to this idea, why not write another tea ceremony? Green tea is tea too! Hahaha

I haven't read Gu Immortal, but the author's introduction is very detailed and most of the writing is good. However, the transformation of the characters is a bit too deliberate and stiff.

The beginning is the same as Gu, a dull start, but it gets better in the later stages. The overall writing is good, the context is clear, and the character creation is also very successful. I hope the protagonist's growth can have ups and downs, so that it can be more exciting. At first, I also thought the setting of the guardian was a bit poisonous, but then I realized after reading it, it turned out that the protagonist had this idea when he first came to the Gu world. He saw Fang Yuan's power and gave up the idea. What the author wants to express is probably to write that the protagonist, as a reader, is far away from Fang Yuan's life, so when he first sees Fang Yuan, he will naturally assume the feeling of reading and stand in Fang Yuan's position. When he slowly came into contact with and integrated into this world, he saw the reality clearly and understood that this was not just a book, but also a place where he lived. His actions would lead to his own death and attract Fang Yuan's poisonous hands. Fang Yuan would not hold anything against him, so he realized that it was a stupid decision to be Fang Yuan's protector, so his thoughts changed.