Inventor from Another World, a Female Imp Wants to Kidnap Me

How to say it? The writing is pretty good, but some parts may not be to my liking. Maybe the author can publish it on a different platform. For me, the Japanese light flavor is too strong. Whether it is the plot design or the writing style, it has a Japanese and Western fantasy style, but maybe it is also for this reason. There are many poisonous points: for example, the protagonist is obviously very awesome, but he is forced to suppress his strength, and the protagonist's strength cannot rise, which is against the sky; and the dragon lady is a bit incomprehensible. , Old-fashioned misunderstandings (I really want to say it here, isn't the protagonist very smart? He couldn't even guess the identity of the dragon lady earlier, and it looked very retarded, and it was very awkward before he recognized it. If the plot was changed to the male protagonist recognizing it, then this can be said to be some strange play, but he didn't recognize it, and it would be very uncomfortable to watch), suppression. . . At present, this book feels promising, but I can't stand it. . . Maybe it's just because I don't have an appetite. The author's writing is quite good. Come on

The theme is okay, and the part about stir-cracking the little ghost is satisfactory. However, it looks good so far. I just feel that the overall rhythm is too fast. There are too many words in the previous part to reflect the arrogance of the villain and the arrogant little ghost. The article mainly describes the protagonist. This kind of redundant text will become anti-customer-oriented, which will make the effect of suppressing first and then promoting become too much, making the cool points burst and recycle. The effect of weakening will make people feel that it is not satisfying enough. Including the protagonist being defeated and not being reversed within one chapter will weaken the special element of the protagonist. If it is not enough, fewer people will read it. I hope the author has time to try to change the previous article to reduce the description of the villain and add more descriptions of the state of the female imp after the protagonist stirs up the female imp. At the same time, I wish the author's novels will get better and better [Sending Hearts]

Chapter 16 is about Se Se, and it has to be you [laughing evilly]

The story is okay, but the pacing in the middle of the story is too slow and indulgent. Although I know she will definitely become the heroine in the future, it really brings down the rating. Fortunately, the plot at the end saves it, so I give it 8 points.

The plot is okay, but don't spend too much time on the supporting characters. For example, A clearly wants to kill the protagonist B. B has been frustrated for several chapters, and just thought he was satisfied, in the next chapter you say how miserable A is. At present, it is confirmed that it is the harem, a younger sister, a female imp princess, the emperor's giant r attendant, and a little dragon girl. The younger sister may be the main palace. It is not ruled out that the female imp and the little dragon girl steal the house. After all, the female imp is the first one to hit the base [laughter]

Super invincible. . The top western fantasy hero novel. It emphasizes love and justice. Although it is a harem, the emotional lines of each heroine are well described. It's so good to watch, and it can also help you think about the brainstorming between the hero and the villain. The foreshadowing laid is also quite good. So pretty. It can be regarded as the second best-looking western fantasy novel I have read so far [cool]. Why is the rating so low? The writing is really very beautiful. If you ask me, it would be around 9.5 Points. I read it in one sitting. There are very few novels that I can finish reading in one sitting [Like][Like][Like] Shennong, who didn't know why after watching it for thirty or forty minutes, started to comment. Let me tell you, at first it seemed like a revenge novel, but later on it turned out to be all kinds of conspiracies and the people behind it started playing tricks on their brains. He didn't pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger. The male protagonist in the first half is indeed not strong in terms of physical strength, but he just barely has the world's most powerful prop master and most talented magician written on his face. And the hard power was quickly strengthened. It's really not the kind of mindless and cool article, it's written quite logically. No matter how good a novel is, you should read it yourself and don't leave a stereotype based on other people's words. It's really pretty, and I didn't find anything bad about it. Although it has multiple female protagonists, the emotions are portrayed well. I really hope everyone will check it out and read a few more chapters. It's been a long time since I've read a novel like this in one sitting. I don't want a good novel to be covered in dust [crying]. Moreover, if you sort by the latest comments, most of them have just been read and have given good reviews. And those who gave it very low marks, most of them watched it for thirty or forty minutes and gave him a bad definition very early. [Top post]

This work only lacks an opportunity It is a Japanese light novel that is not fully Chineseized. You will see the male protagonist Asashi who is not very powerful but is a theoretical genius, as well as the supporting characters who generally have low intelligence. Watch the male protagonist play with these fools with normal intelligence. His sister is caught, and then he sings and dances all the way to save her sister, as well as the Riddler and the yandere who cannot speak human words. For those who are used to reading Chinese online novels, it is a unique torturing experience. (After all, there are many plot designs in it that are contrary to mainstream concepts. For example, the male protagonist does not pay much attention to his own strength, so the early plot is about people who have not been able to save before, and now they have to find strength to save them.) The most difficult thing to accept is that the author, in order to be able to freely write the plot, has a very vague setting of the male protagonist's combat power. It's the kind of thing where the author makes him strong if he wants him to be strong, and makes him weak if he wants him to be weak.

It's a pretty good book. The protagonist has a "despicable" and "sinister" personality and is good at planning. I quite like it. The emotional line is okay, just so-so. It's just that the plot feels a bit strange. According to the previous development, shouldn't the male protagonist develop his strength like crazy? Why is it still lv2 at the end? Looking at it from the front, I felt like I wanted to kill him immediately. My sister is still in dire straits over there, but in the second volume, the elderly care office meeting begins, and all kinds of girls are recruited? It's okay to read a different world romance light novel, but other things are not so good.

I have only read fifty chapters, so I will say one thing. I will not comment on the chapters that I have not read. I will just say that the quality of the first fifty chapters is definitely the best among Western fantasy novels. There are not many people commenting now, so the rating is not high. In my mind, I have at least a 9.1-9.4 Rating. However, it seems that the ratings of harem works on this website are generally not high. I predict that the future ratings will be stable around 9.1. I have read all the latest chapters so far. Although the writing in the later plots is not as polished as the previous plots due to the daily update of 3 chapters, it still does not have a bad habit of crazy word count. One plot is basically finished in one or two chapters and then moves on to the next plot. And it can be seen that the author has made a very detailed outline before writing the book. Whether the plot has logic and whether a detailed outline has been made can often be seen after writing a book. Rating: 9.4 Points for the first 100 chapters, 9.1-9.2 Points for the last 170 chapters

Please... Please... Please, I... I still want to read, give me one more chapter... Just one, I can't help it. Half a chapter... Even half a chapter is fine. Please give me more... Please give me a chapter.

Personally, I think the first chapter foreshadows the whole story, the second adventurer chapter and the third dragon city chapter are better. The independent chapter is more like preparation for the end of the final reconstruction chapter. It's pretty good, but Cassius is still single in the end. The memory of Lao Xia's twin ponytails is still fresh. Two sisters of ten years occupy the first half of Mice's life. They start with the goddess of life and end with the "goddess of life". It can be regarded as having a beginning and an end.

Thank you to the author, it's very interesting. There is no poison in it, and the language is quite interesting and astringent. A few thoughts: The story of Wangcheng in the first part created a very depressing atmosphere, but in the end, the emotional release of Teacher Shar and the Hongru female brat who let go easily was not very satisfying. Moreover, the first part feels very disconnected from the subsequent adventure stories, and it does not improve the later ones.

The writing may not be good, but the details are well done. Slowing down the pace is a style. Don't be confused by the chaos. This type of novel was actually very popular in the past, but the recent rise of fast-food novels has led to a decrease in popularity and a smaller audience. But no matter what, I love reading this kind of thing, haha, keep going [Thinking]

According to a book review, the beginning was indeed too "suppressive", and Dragon Island started to control the rhythm much better. To be honest, from the end of the first volume to the chapter before the decisive battle, there has been "no news" about the large-scale group buff magic at the beginning. I thought I was going to eat the book [face covering]

This book, um... The advantage is that there are very few poisonous points (it may also be that I read the book without thinking and can't remember the small poisonous points). The disadvantage is that the writing style is mediocre. In the later period, I felt that I had no desire to read it (probably my problem). However, the Dragon Island chapter is indeed very interesting. Overall, it is a middle-grade book. You can go and read it. By the way, the speed of this book should not be too fast.

The writing is very good and the plot is also good. When will I win Sylvia and get 5 stars? [Smile] Looking at the two of them, I really feel afraid to wait until the finale to win her (Sylvia also has a lot of emotional scenes along the way. I hope it won't be too late to win her after the hero's house has been stolen).

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that it's popularity shouldn't be so low on Tomato. I skipped through the last chapter, and it ended very comfortably. When will the author start a new book, or did he write it in a different place?

It's watchable, but it's a little uncomfortable. It's more of an early Western fantasy style and it's not very enjoyable. The level of lightning protection is average.

The book is a good book, but it's a bit uncomfortable to read, or it's not that exciting and I can't stand it. I moistened it first

I almost missed it. The male protagonist is really "up" when it's time to "up". I must support it fiercely, but I'm afraid it will be gone if I keep score. The author will update it soon.

Big boost for the author, so far it's okay, I want to see the scene where the protagonist meets his sister soon [I learned it] It's so beautiful and the author is awesome! It must be continued! Please! [Cry][cry][cry]

It's just too short, and there are too few plots for the female protagonists in the later stages. Like Nora and Petra, their emotional lines have a beginning and no end, and they become tool people later on. The whole book revolves too closely around the main plot of the thousand-year gamble and the invasion of demons, and there is still a lack of plot between the protagonist and the heroines. Although it seems that the plot seems to be pushed forward like a deadline, the rhythm is maintained quite well, unlike some novels where the rhythm suddenly collapses at the end. I am still looking forward to whether the author will publish a new book in the future.

A very good book, the whole text is non-toxic (except for the part with the dragon girl which is a bit strange, but definitely not poisonous). The best thing is that the protagonist is not a supervisor, which is very satisfying.

It looks good, I love reading it, it's not much better than a brainless day, just publish it directly on another platform [laughter]

The plot, characters, and writing style are all very good. It feels like watching a Western fantasy series. The world view is complete and the plot has ups and downs. Stay up late watching it, it's so cool [like]

The rating is a bit low, but the Dragon Island chapter is really good.

4 Stars is an appreciation for those who persevere [face covering] Compared with most, at least you managed to write more than 400 chapters and kept updating. Compared with writing, at least you managed to stick to the completion.

After reading it, I feel that it is okay and quite satisfactory. I can read it to pass the time. If I really want to give a critical review, it is that the writing, plot, and emotions are all of average quality. However, the story can be told completely, and the logic of the plot is not seriously thought out. It is already good enough to be readable (it is much better than other bad eunuchs and later bad books, isn't it?) I hope the author will continue to work hard in the next book.

It's an old-fashioned two-dimensional western fantasy, if you like it.

It's pretty good. I don't recommend it to those who want to read a refreshing novel. Some parts of it feel bad, but I can endure it and read it. Overall, it's okay. After all, it's the author's first time writing a book, and the ending is not bad. Those who couldn't stand it after about 30 minutes still read too much Shuangwen. The protagonist of this book is still okay, but it feels too weak at times. This may be the reason why I often read Shuangwen before.