Honkai Impact: Yaya Always Wants to Dominate Me!

It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like the people I accepted were too casual. Both Miyuki and Xiaomo were a bit baffled, with no story or content at all. I just accepted them because I felt sorry for them. Everything else is pretty good I don't object to the author adding new characters. I just hope that the characters of the Bull Fang Team can at least have their own stories. They don't join the team inexplicably, act with everyone for no reason, and end inexplicably. After reading it, I feel that it doesn't matter whether there is this person or not. It does not reflect the sense of participation and necessity. It doesn't feel very appropriate to let a character paddle when she has no backstory and is not popular. Finally, I hope to control the number of protagonists in the group, not too many, otherwise it will look very confusing later on. Five star support

It's very interesting. Thank you to the author for writing the scene in my fantasy of two ducks meeting each other. I look forward to sharing the same frame with three ducks. Hope to go to Beng 2. I hope to give the Herrscher of Corrosion the core. Not only will it be more true that Law is the best match, but the power of Corrosion should not be fully reflected in the play. They should all be idealistic and should be able to replace the Herrscher of this era, so that the tragedy of Ling and Paradise can be avoided.

What shocked me the most was the armory of the central police station in the second world. Military Barrett sniper rifle. Military rifle. There are no submachine guns at all, and there are also marksman rifles. The highest configuration of the police station only has some rifles and precision marksman rifles, which is already a high configuration. Let's have a little logic. But the writing is still good Someone is taking the police station This is the first time I saw an anti-materiel sniper rifle in the police station. Just six The author writes a little more carefully. I don't know where they got their bullets. Also, the police station does not have too many bullets. If you can find at most 500 bullets in the police station, it is considered too much. The rest are all blank ammunition. For training purposes. There should be, I don't know if there is.

The writing is quite good. Does the protagonist have any CP? As a daily reminder, if you write about Lily's harem on Tomato, you will be blocked. There is no chance (I'm afraid the author won't tell me)

See chapter 12 now Why do you inexplicably pay special attention to that Xiaomo, and seem to want to take her to other worlds?

Very nice! There are very few books written about the Silver Wolf.

There's not much to say. I feel like the author brought those two women in for a reason. Maybe it was to make the team feel more like a family. I am an author myself and I know how difficult it is to write this thing. Anyway, I don't think these two women can be considered passers-by, but Xiaomo is indeed a bit baffled, and the other one is okay. But his plot is still good and interesting, and there are too few people writing this kind of fan fiction.

Why are there only 10 book reviews? The writing is obviously very good.

Quick, quick, I want to see the Wolf Rabbit cp [Adoration] [Adoration]

Haokan, when can I get more stickers?

Very good, behind the brown teeth is actually the lower part

You can jump directly to the first picture, the writing is quite good.

Very nice structure, very vivid character descriptions and wonderful story

The author's book is very promising, and the quality will be better [blowing kiss]

I want to see all the ducks and ducks come together [eat melon] come on come on

It looks good, but the name "Golden Wolf" really doesn't sound good. Might as well be called "Space-Time Wolf", "Cang Moon Wolf", "Silver Moon Wolf", "Nebula Wolf", "Star Moon Wolf", "Firefly Wolf" and "Sirius"

Good-looking, good-looking, love to watch

Very nice, but there are not enough chapters for the author. Can you update it more? Students will definitely give gifts in the future

I like Silver Wolf, Silver Wolf and Hare Rabbit Tie Tie, the author will try more. I want to see the author write Beng San and Beng Tie in big letters

Nice book, very good

It's already very good (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ)

Duck duck is a treasure, suck duck duck

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [blowing kiss]

Come on, cats, meow, waiting for you (*'▽'*)♪

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This book is so beautiful!

The two passer-by characters in the team really feel a bit redundant.

The interesting thing is when to go to Xian Wenpeng

My author is gone, but it was quite good before

It's just that the combat power in the second world is a bit low.