Fall! Are You Weird, or Am I Weird?

It looks good. I really like the way the protagonist looks very skinny but is actually very reliable at critical moments. And even though he is currently weaker than the other protagonist, he is not in a passive state. He has a feeling of not giving in to others. It is the kind of feeling that I can't beat you now, but it doesn't mean that I won't beat you. If you want to control It is absolutely impossible to control my rhythm (weakness ≠ being completely passive, but many people will use the situation where the protagonist is passive to explain that the protagonist is weak and the opponent is weak, and I don't like that feeling). The author's update time does not seem to be very stable. I don't know if I have forgotten it. It seemed to be updated in the morning (morning)

Except for being a little immature in some places, this straight man's taste is so exciting to me. As long as it's not fragrant, soft, and sticky, I love it.

Wow, it's very beautiful, Bai Bai is crazy, I love it to death. I'm talking about whether there can be a second part. I'm going to write about the fusion of the follow-up worlds [I'm about to cry]. Madam, I have a friend who really wants to read it. Or maybe eat more extras [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

The character setting really touched me. Shou is the kind of salty but strong (growth type) sometimes a little crazy. Who knows, the setting of crazy beauty struck me the most. Attacking suspects is weird, and their strength is beyond words. They are a little perverted (currently only facing each other) and the way the two get along is also very interesting. They like to fight each other and even want to dissect each other.

Nice! Especially the protagonist Jing Bai, he is super handsome, not afraid of anything, he is very brave, the system is also very cute, he can always make a few laughs, I almost go crazy laughing, the author is also very good, updates on time, please take more rest! Don't be tired [send your heart][send your heart][send your heart][send your heart]

It must be the CP of Bai Zhanji [Adoration], both characters are very touching.

It looks good. I like the character of the protagonist very much. He seems to have no regard for the life and death of others, hehe. If the guess is correct, Ji Xi did not run away. It's... That... How should I say... Um... Uh... Words... Number of words! ! There are too few ladies! ! ! Come on, come on, come on, come on, the author is great, never give up the book! ! ! Don't run away! ! !

Look at my Gagale, this character's personality is so similar to a husky, cool and funny [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][shy][shy][shy] I chased it, saved it on the bookshelf and read it slowly [full][full][full][full][full]

The writing style in the early stage is relatively short and like a short article, but later on it will be more descriptive as it progresses, which is just right. The emotional line is okay. I want to read those chapters that haven't passed the review [crying] [crying] It's a pity that the main character is not my type, but it's acceptable. (Because it doesn't describe how handsome or beautiful the protagonists are, it gave me a very normal impression of a bisexual man.) Poor body shape. Personally, I felt that the plot was a bit too fast towards the end, as if it was finished in a hurry. This plot can probably be written in the future [laughing], but I am very happy now. (After all, it is an upgrade stream) If you don't want to watch a particularly long double-boy upgrade stream and you're not too picky about double-boys, you can take a look. [Laughing out loud]

I've finished reading it, and it's good to watch. Although there are a few extra chapters, it's just right for me. I just don't know whether Jin Shuang CP and Lin Lan CP will be completed. I seriously doubt that the author forgot about this pair when finishing it. However, I personally think that as a group portrait novel (really?), This book is quite successful (p s: I was actually not optimistic about Dan Qing CP from the beginning. I felt that it would be difficult for Qing Geng to give love after what he went through. He was probably taking advantage of Dan. I think the best thing is that they didn't succeed in the end. Qing Geng didn't like Dan's feelings, but whether they were sincere or not? It can be seen from the fact that he thinks Dan is a monster that he is still afraid of Dan. Fear will not be eliminated easily. He will not respond to Dan's love just because he loves him. He has taken over the job of raising children from Xiaobai. In the future, Dan may find him and be moved by him, although the possibility is not Big, maybe Dan found it but didn't dare to get close. He was finally cured by the little dragon, and the wounds in his heart were healed in the process of raising the little dragon. This is not necessarily true. The old knight left room for imagination very well, making people feel disappointed but also feeling that this is the way it should be, which brings a perfect ending to the story)

Strange plot! I really like the unrestrained black thorns. I didn't expect that the turning point of love was a skirt. In fact, it is mainly the contribution of the devil. Maybe a dragon's tooth or something, a token of love? The straightforward Xi is so cute. You should say what you want [currently in development]

Very, very good. I originally thought I wouldn't take advantage of this, but I have to admit that this is very well written. I found it very good after reading it [shy][shy][shy] This little nose of the system is also quite fun, hehe, not bad, not bad👍🏻

Good looking, a bit lacking, not enough emotional lines

The fighter in the double male lead male channel. The other bi-male stories I've read on male videos simply can't compare to this one. [Cry][cry][cry] It's really not an exaggeration. Among the books I have read about male porn and bisexuals, this one is indeed a few levels higher than the others. Ahhhh, you've spoiled my stomach. I can't read any books now. I've been thinking about your book ʚ( º º )ɞ

Super invincible and good-looking, I like the appearance of salty fish, but I'm lucky to be strong on the inside. Bai Bai has a very funny personality, a little bit subversive. In fact, I'm lazy and don't want to work, but the update is too slow and it's not enough to watch.

There are a lot of problems, the writing is not strong enough, there are a lot of typos and sentences, and there are some problems in the plot, but I still like it, maybe because I don't pay much attention to details, and growth stories are my favorite, hahahaha, so I am personally quite satisfied One of the few novels that I can read in one go, and the plot is tight, so I like it better

If you want to read a cool novel, don't read it. Well… the character of the protagonist is not that positive and progressive… Well… it's not like pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It's probably a mix of eating and waiting to die, but it's not quite accurate. It just feels like an outsider sees the mud and can't hold up the wall, but I think it's okay. If you don't mind this, it's best not to read it.

Woohoo, it's so beautiful. I've always been interested in it. I stayed up late to finish it. It's so delicious. Please forgive my lack of language. [Love] [I'm about to cry] [Love] The subject matter is very new. Most of the subjects I watch are without cp. , The writing is very good, a lot of fun [exploration][blowing kiss] [Love] Places where lightning protection may be needed [Love] 1. There are fewer scenes in the early stage. 2. It's a double male protagonist, it's not a novel without CP, don't eat it by mistake (some people don't read the label)

Two male protagonists, you are really in love with each other, you are really in love with each other, you can't be too in love with each other.

I like it very much, but why is it so short? . . . . . ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎აThe character of the protagonist is okay, and the text also has a bit of a sandbox atmosphere, but can there be more extras? ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

It's very interesting. When I first read this book, I thought the plot was a bit inconsistent, but when I read it later, both the emotional and plot lines were quite good. There is a charm of blank space. The emotions he describes are very normal for two men, and the characters do not appear to be feminine. The characters are very distinct, and the only shortcoming may be that there is a jump and jump in the plot connection.

If you can write, write more. If you like it, you will read it in one go. It would be better if you could write more. The character of the protagonist is interesting, does it feel like a bloody love story? The main thing is that he speaks very frankly and doesn't treat people as outsiders [laughs evilly]

The plot is twists and turns, the characters are so cute, I love the S-level weirdness and the white CP! ! ! ! !

It's beautiful. I really like this setting. It's so cool. I hope the author will update more. I can't get enough of it.

The author's writing style contains rich imagination and unique creativity. Every scene and every character is lifelike, making people feel like they are in a brand new world, full of desire to explore. Looking forward to the next story🤭

It's okay, it's pretty good, but I haven't finished it yet. I'll continue to review it after I finish it. I like the character of the protagonist very much. Ji Bai is also very easy to beat. But when it comes to the part where the protagonist is killed by an explosion, what should I say? Personally, I don't like Qing Geng very much. I don't think I hate him as a person. I just think the interaction between him and the protagonist is a bit ambiguous? And it was these two people who were hit by that system. There was a slight disconnect, because I don't really like watching heartthrobs and the like. I don't really like having a second male lead as the emotional promoter between the male protagonists. It would be okay if Qing Geng had a matching CP behind him. Then to other aspects. Well, I really like the character of the protagonist. The plot is also well written, but I feel like the writing by the people on the dragon team is a bit weak. It's a bit like the protagonist's upgrade stream in male videos, which is quite interesting.

It's good-looking, very interesting, and very hilarious at the beginning. But I feel that the development speed in the later stage is too fast, and it ends all at once. It feels like the plot has been cut in half, and it can be written more. It's a pity that many people and the protagonist's CP are very annoying, but he and the official partner are not out of place.

It's really a great martial arts fan, and I just love literature. In fact, I'm picky about reading books now. I can't finish half of many books. This one is a bit short for me. The plots are quite good. I like the emotional line more. I always feel that I haven't eaten enough. The main CP really pokes my xp, and the deputy CP's painting can be said to be The hook is that there are not many extras. The secondary CP is a beauty x a stubborn nerd monster. The main CP is the kind of couple who resists the road. The ending is a bit hasty but not a big problem. The ending of the secondary CP is open-ended. I think it is good, but I didn't get to see their real ending. In the end, everyone will be happy.

Thank you to the author for allowing me to read such a perfect novel when I was out of prison. It fully satisfied all my fantasies about novels. I loved it.

The character and image of the protagonist are all in line with my taste. They are really good-looking and the author's writing style is also good [like]