Why did Captain Ace save the day again? How could he not concentrate on the fight?
The Pirate Adventures is developed with Ace as the main plot. Ace joins the white group with auxiliary plug-in travel notes, and the goal is to survive the war on top.
Reader comments
It looks good, but a little short. The ending is the same as my elementary school composition. It's not a mockery, it's just really similar, haha. The characters, especially the protagonist, are okay. I hope the author can improve his skills a little bit, come on, Oli.
The subject matter is good, but the ending is very sudden. Why not continue writing? @_＠
It looks good, but a little short. The ending is the same as my elementary school composition. It's not a mockery, it's just really similar, haha. The characters, especially the protagonist, are okay. I hope the author can improve his skills a little bit, come on, Oli.
The subject matter is good, but the ending is very sudden. Why not continue writing? @_＠
It's a good adaptation of a short story