Star Iron Simulation, the Forgotten Past

I really don't know it until I see it, and I'm shocked when I see it. This book is the best of all the fanfics I have ever read. It can be said to be a masterpiece. I sincerely recommend this book. There are several points worthy of praise: 1. The plot is contagious and deeply touching, the plot is coherent and smooth, and the characters are three-dimensional, as if they are alive. 2. The author's writing style is also good, with appropriate wording and exquisite narrative techniques. 3. The author used a few words in the game and boldly imagined to construct the plot of this scene. Although the logic is not rigorous, he has also put in real effort. Finally, I hope the author will not mess up the work, otherwise I will send you the razor blade [smile]

Good book, exquisite writing style. Of all the Bengtie fanfics I've read, this is the only one that made me cry! ! ! ! [Almost crying] Recommended: "Kafka" is best read late at night

After watching it for a long time, I must be too sensitive in my heart. I couldn't stand it anymore in the early stages. I just wanted to see a good ending as soon as possible. Even if they were separated in the end, I also wanted to see them see each other for the last time. Unfortunately, this is probably a sad story, right? The best decision I made at night was to read this book, because it really affected me and was imprinted in my mind. The worst decision was to read it. Its story was not suitable for me... It is a good book, but until the plot I want to read comes out, I should keep it. Come on, don't stop.

It's not bad, the writing is delicate, but the transition after the simulation is not very good, which makes the two simulations disconnected and feels like reading prose. I feel like the author has not written an outline or the outline is not detailed. I have written two books before. I would like to give you some suggestions. 1. While the character design is still out, find some suitable and philosophical wallpapers to perfect the character. 2. If you want to increase reading, you need to create a small climax. For example, if you update ten chapters a day, you need to create the first half of a small climax in these ten chapters. The last chapter of the update will be snapped. If you want to see the follow-up, you can only wait for the next chapter, which is called broken chapter. (Don't break it too much, otherwise I will send you the blade(▼plate▼#)) 3. Regret is "Maybe the destiny only allows us to meet each other, but not to be together forever." And "I have already plunged into a pool of blood with both feet. If I don't move forward in blood, the way back will be equally boring." Regret is called regret because it cannot be undone. There is no need to deliberately pursue a happy ending and affect the progress of the plot (knife, I want a knife) 4. It is best if this book has no heroine, or only one heroine, not multiple heroines (unless you consider yandere) 5. Intersperse some funny plots and jokes in daily life, or sprinkle more sugar to prepare for the knife, just like Beng Beng Beng ✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿) In the end, I originally wanted to give you four stars, but I saw that you were making your debut, so I gave you five stars. I wish you will get better and better at writing books in the future.

The author has a good grasp of the reader's emotions (it makes my stomach hurt when I read it), but the author is not too detailed about the protagonist's emotions. This is mainly based on the fact that the protagonist does not have much emotional description of people other than the heroine (in fact, there are not many people). The author can decide whether to fast or slow based on some plots. (If you are not afraid of being stabbed in the back, it is better to write according to your own mood.) I have read the author's first two books This book is still a big improvement compared to the first two books. I hope the author can stick to it. In the first two books, it can be seen that the author wants to recruit more readers. But in this software, the readers are different. You may be scolded for fast-paced writing, and others will be scolded for slow-paced writing. So don't care too much about other people's opinions. In my personal opinion, author, your writing is considered very good in this software. If you are willing to stick to it, there should not be too few readers. Also, I hope you, the author, can continue writing happily (you'd better give me two more chapters every day, otherwise I'll look for you in the middle of the night) Punish the author to become a cat lady

I think simulation should be like this. I think it is the most beautiful simulation I have seen so far. The protagonist looks like a human being like this. How can other things be written like this? My friend, you are really untainted in the mud. Come on, come on, come on!

Hi hi hi, overall it's pretty good. There are just too many knives, buddy, you wouldn't combine The Lost City of Wild Beasts with MiHoYo, would you? How can a book be so sharp? And the setting of this system makes me feel quite novel, and I can also complain about the protagonist. Pretty good, keep up the good work.

Now that I have read Chapter 48, it is generally good. The character of the protagonist is also quite good and not so... Outrageous. Secondly, the content in the simulation is also written in quite detail, but it is better to compress it. For example, 20 to 30 chapters are enough for a simulation. Too many simulation chapters will not be good for the senses. I will give it a four-star rating now. I will come back and make changes after Xi'er's simulation is completed to see how it goes [Chigua] I don't know if it's a foreshadowing or something. Lao Yang knows the protagonist, and he also said that he can be called the protagonist's father. The protagonist's life experience from the world of Beng 3 is also a mystery. I don't know if it will be revealed in the follow-up [Chigua][Chigua]

I am a fan of the author's old books. From the first book to the current one, the writing style is still as good as ever and the plot is also very interesting, but I always feel that something is weird. The same is true for the first Genshin Impact, but the author's books are really good to read. Come on!

(Personal opinion) The author's introduction describes the differences between Xi'er and Fu Xuan, but in fact every paragraph is quite good. The main reason is that the author has a good grasp of details. It is easy to exaggerate the atmosphere when writing about this kind of subject matter. Some chapters really made me unable to hold my breath. I think the author will definitely achieve better results if he decides on the outline before writing on this subject. The ending at the end of the main text is very hasty, and the extra chapter doesn't explain many details. In the early stage, I thought I wanted to leave this part blank, but in the end, I gave some extras and opened a few short stories in several timelines. It would be so beautiful if I could finish it here.

It's very interesting. It feels like a lot of short stories. Each simulation is experienced personally, which makes me feel that he is suitable for multiple female protagonists. In addition, I will not watch the ending because I have a mental disorder and only watch the single female protagonist [laughing] [laughing]

It's very good. I've finished reading Kamana and Erase Memory. The author's writing skills are good and it makes me feel empathy. However, I still feel that some of the settings are a bit over-the-top. Is it too early for Star Core to be released? [Exploration]

Well, how should I put it? The author's logical thinking is very smooth, it looks very refreshing, very beautiful, very sweet, and not boring at all. I mean, after writing this book, can the author publish a prequel to Ben San? If it could, that would be perfect.

Emm, it looks good, but at first I thought it was all a pity. Xier and the protagonist just have the purest brother-sister relationship, and then they get involved. Is it multiple girls? I'm a little curious about what Kafka will do next.

Ahaha... I was killed by the author with a slow knife. The simulation is false, the protagonist's feelings are real, the love between the paralyzed Kafka and the protagonist is real, the memory is real, and in the end it is false. Ahhhhhhhhh, it's all false... Everything I know is true! Everything is true... My heart was killed by the author. The author writes so well.

Personally, I feel that Fu Xuan and Liu Ying made me cry. You can also read my comments in the book circle. This is my evaluation of the two of them. If the author doesn't want to open a new book, just don't open it. Just like in Fu Xuan: The world is different, and we have no right to control it... The biggest regret is... The protagonist and Fu Xuan, I hope they can meet again... The world is so big, there is always a chance that one of them will meet him/her Finally, here is my personal sentiment: cherish the people around you... Don't wait until you die to cherish... [Cry][cry][cry]

Today, because I walked out with my left foot, I gave it a five-star rating. But because I saw someone 7:0, I wanted to give it four stars. But in the end, I gave it five stars because I thought I walked out with my left foot. [You taste it carefully][You taste it carefully] The Kafka chapter was quite interesting at first. Later, when I got to Xier, I was a little bit poisonous. It even makes people want to give up. When I arrived at Fu Zhong's place, I felt it was very bland, like chicken ribs, tasteless to eat, and a pity to discard. I hope the author can write well and maintain the level of Kafka's chapter. The brothers finally came back, saved 92 pictures and started reading. I hope the author's level can be adjusted back, eh eh eh. The author must work hard! Kids, I'm back! ! ! ! ! ! ! As a huge fan of this book, I wanted to check it out. It after Chapter 92 o @

This novel, what should I say? Although I haven't read the latest chapter yet, it's pretty good to read. There may be a lot of typos and typos, but I would like to remind the author that they will make corrections. In fact, it mainly depends on the follow-up. I really don't understand why the score is so low. Logically speaking, if you say less, it will be more than eight points.

I personally think this is the best-looking movie I've ever seen, and it fits the look of the protagonist in my mind better than the ones I've seen before.

The pace is a little slow, but as a simulation novel, the emotional description is very delicate. The protagonist's simulation experience does not rush by like playing a game like many similar novels, but he is truly involved in it. The description of the character is very distinctive. It creates a different side from the character label in the game. It makes you feel that he is a rich and three-dimensional person. It is a masterpiece among the Star Iron simulation novels.

It's very different from the simulations I read before. More comprehensive and enriched.

Please, author, let Beng San's people chase after me. It's best to have Fu Hua.

Yeah, it's very comfortable. The Honkai Impact Three should be able to catch up with them. Also, please update it quickly. It's a bit too little. Also, if appropriate things happen, we should be able to reasonably intersperse some Honkai Impact Three.

It has a single female protagonist, and the writing is very good, especially the Liu Ying chapter. I didn't understand the Fu Xuan chapter, but the Kafka chapter was just average. The Xier chapter is dull, but for the protagonist, this kind of dull life is what he wants. It's a bit of a pity, but it's also very reasonable and doesn't make people feel like it's a knife for the sake of the knife.

This low score is a bit untrue (wrong) Overall, it's okay. Kafka is the cutest episode (music) Let's just eat ashes on my bookshelf, I've finished reading it anyway (hi [laughing evilly]) See you again by fate [eating melon]

Md, I feel uncomfortable, but I also want to see if I owe [face covering]

It's relatively slow to heat up, I felt a little stomach ache watching it, the writing is good, and there's nothing too bad about it at the moment. Is it single/multiple/no female protagonist? (Personal opinion)

It's pretty good. Why is the rating so low? [Laughing and crying] [almost crying]

It's only the first few chapters and I'm already feeling heartbroken. To be honest, my heart hurts [crying]

An excellent article about stomachache (I felt stomachache after reading it)