The Game of the World, the Game of the World

It feels like I read a novel many years ago. The writing style is acceptable, but the details of emotion and characterization are still a bit poor. For example, the character of Yue Qingling is not very three-dimensional at present. Maybe I only saw half of it. I don't know what the follow-up will be. And although it is not a cool expression, the current mainstream trend still focuses on the interaction between the male and female protagonists and some normal cool points. Come on.

I don't really like this little mushroom that keeps clinging to the protagonist as soon as it comes out [face covering] I felt good about this book at the beginning and had the desire to continue reading. However, as soon as the little mushroom came out, I felt something strange. It kept clinging to the protagonist. Gu Yueying had to save the little mushroom when she was injured. Later, I wanted to contact her. The little mushroom was still unwilling. It was only after the protagonist persuaded and explained that she got used to it and was willing to get close to Gu Yueying. Later, the protagonist wanted to go back to the sect and entrust the little mushroom to Gu Yueying and her husband, so she cried and chased her and insisted on him. The protagonist had no choice but to stay for now. Then Zhou Da, a man in black from Dashang, came to the protagonist when Gu Yueying, his subordinate, was getting married. The protagonist was still puzzled, and then asked Xiao Mushroom if he came to her because of it. She nodded and acquiesced. After reading this, I felt that this little mushroom had discovered the strength of the protagonist, so he deliberately relied on the protagonist so that he could survive. It seemed that the protagonist later accepted her as his apprentice, and she seemed to stick to her every time there was a mission. The protagonist seems to have saved his father later. She told her father that her mother was burned to death and that she was a bad father and abandoned her. Moreover, after saving her father, she still seemed unwilling to be close to her father or to the protagonist. At this point, you can see that the character of Xiao Mushroom was written with some scheming. If she didn't cry at the beginning and she couldn't speak, how could she win the sympathy and pity of the protagonist. It felt like she was only willing to be close to the protagonist in order to protect herself. The protagonist discovers that little mushroom has a special physique and asks her father to take her to the protagonist's grandma. The little mushroom starts to depend on her again. The protagonist finally agrees to persuade her that she will go home after graduation. When she leaves, she says bad daddy, please go slowly. She is really a dear daughter. She just wants you to go to his grandmother's place to protect her better. Can you go slowly and let your father leave you again? After I got here, I skipped watching and then the protagonist came home. This little mushroom was complaining to the protagonist's grandma about how early her father asked her to practice martial arts. She said that her father was a bad father. After practicing martial arts, she still asked if the master would be back soon. It was really that her biological father had never brought her up. I don't care about it, don't ask. The main reason is that if you don't practice martial arts well, you will ask your master to help you avenge your revenge. Your talent is already good, shouldn't you work harder to practice, not to mention helping the master in the future? At least revenge is no problem. Once a teacher, always a father, it is true, but the role of this little mushroom is very awkward. Otherwise, let the father be the master, and the master be the father. I even feel that if the author hadn't been holding the pen, this little mushroom would have jumped out and become the protagonist. Originally, I felt that this book was indeed good, but it felt a bit strange to mention mushrooms at the beginning of the book. I just started writing about the protagonist fighting monsters and upgrading. After Gu Yueying rescued Xiao Mushroom, he also used the Secret Pavilion to help Xiao Mushroom find his family and just mention it in one stroke. There is no need to write her father as Chen Wen, she can be taken under her command through other means in the future. Haha, after writing so much, it is my own opinion after all. If you don't like it, it doesn't mean that others don't like it. As the saying goes, it is difficult to agree with others. Opinions are opinions. Five-star reviews are indispensable. Come on, author, I hope it will be better in the future.

Overall feeling good. It's just that the protagonist's combat power is a bit weak, or maybe the protagonist is intellectual [face covering] I guessed that the relationship between men and women would break down later, but I didn't expect that after getting married, the male protagonist still didn't show all his cards to the female protagonist. I don't think the female protagonist is stupid and sweet. The male protagonist can directly reveal his cards. In real life, couples will have secrets. It's better to write a novel that is more beautiful [laughing]

Is it so difficult for you to write a review? Then I can only do it myself [laughing and crying]

I really like Lin Yilou's temperament. He is not like other fantasy male protagonists who look down on the world, but he always has a sense of strategizing. Thank you very much, very nice. Although it ended very suddenly, I was still very reluctant to let go, but since the author has something to do with his family, there is nothing he can do about it, so I would like to give you five stars and wish the author all the best [already planted]

It feels pretty good, but in terms of characters, I think I like Shang Wang Wudong better, and I don't understand that the protagonist and the heroine have to lie about everything they say. The heroine is already so good to the hero [Thinking], overall it's quite good-looking.

It's really good-looking, the male protagonist has a personality, the court and the rivers and lakes, the cultivators, the demon clan, the human clan, all kinds of grievances are intertwined, and the addition of intrigues, colleagues, personal friends, love and hatred makes the story ups and downs and unexpected.

Don't have a car? I just finished reading that one, and I just started it after taking a break!

The writing is very good, but the protagonist who has accumulated a lot of experience is not suitable for me in the fast food culture, so I will definitely do it next time.

It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's a female author, and her emotions are too delicate, like a published book

Really well written

What a pity it collapsed! Yaozu was pretty good before! It's a bit too anxious to open the Monster Tribe dungeon. If it had been written around the Three Dynasties and supplemented by the Monster Tribe events, it might have been more attractive! Come on, there are many ups and downs in life, it doesn't matter if you look back after you have passed them!

It's understandable and logical. My score is a bit low now. Let's improve it to five stars first. Will comment later.

Tomato is always like this: good-looking books have low ratings, and bad books always have 9.5 Or 9.6 Ratings.

The writing is very in line with my taste. Good luck to the author [like it]. I have read a lot of fantasy novels. Sometimes I like to read simpler ones with sweeter emotional lines.

It's very beautiful. I watched it without realizing it. It's very comfortable to watch.

At present, the characters are clearly explained, and the plot does not have too many poisonous points at the moment. Let's take a look at the emotional plot at the end. In terms of the front alone, it is a masterpiece worth reading [I learned it].

Author, how do I feel about reading (Devil's Law)? Beginners get worse starting from Chapter 109

Good-looking, not cliche, a bit like Yanyulou Not bad, come on

Writing well so far

A good book, worth reading

It's still good. The only thing that feels a little bad is the female protagonist. I feel that it would be better if the female protagonist had fewer roles.

It looks good. The protagonist has brains, a city, and power. The plot is not out of control so far. I've read too many cool articles in the comment section.

The early stage was a little rough, but the back part is really nice and has a sense of instant vision of Yanyu Tower. The author has coded a lot to add points [please update]

If the writing is to my liking, just follow your own pace. The style of writing is very good, so here's a little reminder!

It's really good. It's bland and interesting. It's not easy to find an acceptable book. This book is somewhat similar to Yanyulou in terms of the protagonist's ability. However, I personally feel that it is much more comfortable than Yanyulou and others. Yan Yu Lou is too brainless and deliberate, and even pretends to be a slap in the face. This book is mediocre and comfortable. I hope it doesn't collapse later.

I feel like I haven't read it for a long time. I used to read it on other platforms, but now I mostly read it on Tomato. I think this book can definitely be considered good on Tomato.

I like this kind of book similar to Yanyulou

Mesmerizing to watch

Not bad, it feels a bit like there was a Lingjian Mountain in the past