One Soul*******

Although I have only read a few chapters so far, I can see a strong hint of rhapsody in them. I think it's okay for you to learn from Rhapsody, but I hope you understand that in the later stages of Rhapsody, it becomes the main male protagonist, which is basically about Tire, and Yuehai can sometimes only serve as a background board. Of course, in the middle and later stages, both are still more useful (I also read it three or four years ago, and I may not remember it clearly. I hope you can correct me. After all, it is a novel of tens of millions of words. [Face covering]) So the first thing the author needs to determine is his own clear direction. I want to write a story with a male protagonist like a rhapsody, and insist on writing a story with one soul and two bodies. Of course, the really enjoyable thing about Rhapsody is because Rhapsody has a lot of cunning and wits in it. I don't know what the author wants to write this book into, whether it is a novel or something else. Of course, I don't rule out the fact that Rhapsody is also a fun novel. The male protagonist is cheating, and the female protagonist is also cheating. Of course you can see this kind of article on Tomato. I think it would be great if the author could keep writing. Come on, author, I hope the novel will be great🔥!

Urgent update, although it is a bit similar to Rhapsody, but the male and female protagonists of Rhapsody are too severely separated.

It looks good. Have you read Rhapsody? Some of the plots are a bit similar, but only a little bit. The relationship between the protagonists' twins is to my liking. It's good to read.

It looks good, but the beginning is quite similar to Rhapsody, and there are too many riddles, and the plot of the Duke is a bit of a joke. The Duke's psychological activities should be described in depth, and the harm and benefits of doing so. The old fox quickly selected the best choice from many strategies, and finally commented on a good book that can be read. It is expected not to be a long novel but a short story of two to three hundred chapters.

It looks good, but I'm a bit of a germaphobe, so in my opinion there are a few minor flaws, but it doesn't matter, it still looks good. Also, don't have an affair with other female characters. This is the first book I've read where I don't want the protagonist to have a harem. Update faster!

I have read Sister Xue's book and this one by the author. They are both very good-looking. The protagonists in Rhapsody are relatively divided. The interaction between the two protagonists in this book is a very bright point. It is very suitable for my taste. Come on, but the sylph gave me a too strong sense of sight [face-covering] [face-covering] Come on, author💪

Nice looking, I like watching it Come on, author＾0＾~

Double body tattoo, loneliness is the existence of another you in the world, a "friend" who completely trusts the other person and will never betray, how enviable it is! Three years later I will also write a book [cool]

It's good, don't stop updating it (although there is no plot where I like the eroticism of men and women)

It's so fucking interesting. Too few people have written about this subject, and even fewer have twin bodies at the beginning. Others either have to write ten or twenty chapters before having twin bodies, or write about doppelgängers and twin bodies. They are no longer the same concept. Don't stop updating [crying][crying]

Hey, that's pretty good. This one-soul and two-body thing is quite difficult to write. I saw other titles that said one-soul and two-body version, but they could only switch between men and women. There is still a lot to like about this book.

I love reading it. There are really too few books about one soul and two bodies, and most of them have no ending. I don't ask for how many words this book can write. I just hope that this book can have a complete story line and an ending.

A straight 5 points. I haven't seen such a good-looking movie in a long time (although there are still some minor problems, but it's not a big problem). My only point is, "die yourself🔒" and the male protagonist should be more cold-blooded, except for himself.

It's really beautiful! ! Why isn't it popular? ! Fire! Fire! The two protagonists give me the feeling that they have nothing but each other. For me, the other person will always be the most important and caring person in my heart no matter what. Moreover, the interaction between the two little ones in the plot is also very good. The female body will be angry with the male body for being treated unfairly and strive for equal treatment. The male body will unconditionally and endlessly tolerate the female body's willfulness and dependence, and accept her contact and coquettishness. , And step in to stop someone when they want to hurt a woman, ah ah, really who can understand, this kind of never dislike each other, regard each other as the most important existence in their hearts, whether it is caring for each other in life, or doing something after separation, the two still show an unexplained tacit understanding. Although the performance in the plot may imply that the two little cats will take different paths in the future, but they really have a good relationship with each other! ! Why isn't such a beautiful book popular? !

I haven't read it, but I'm very interested in this kind of subject. I'll give you a good review first. And I really like the cover... If I guessed wrong or offended, please forgive me. Thank you () I feel that the cover is like feeding the pictures of Shintaro and Fumino (Music Project/Mekakaku City Performer Animation/The Protagonist of Kagero Dazzling Novel and Comic... Part 2, Group Portrait) into the AI-generated AWA, so I was immediately attracted to Awa, and I was very curious if anyone here knows about this Awa (it is the ultimate cold circle!)

I am very optimistic about this book. Good luck to the author.

Do you want to add a setting here (it will be very interesting) as a metaphor. When a person (consciousness) issues an instruction, the CPU (brain) in the computer (body) will operate in different ways due to different structures, which determines the results of the operation. Then the person (consciousness) begins to contradict, choose, and act. To put it simply, it is parallel thinking and character fabrication (self-talk + acting), and then deepening the feelings [shyness] (the process should be written slower, describe as much as you can, in the later stage, it will be boring if it is not perverted enough) Regarding feelings, body and soul have a proportion, so it is also a point that can be written.

The plot is really good, very interesting to watch. Perfectly fits my imagination of one soul and two bodies [shy] cool, finally changed the cover

Putting aside self-interest, is the subject of this book Nantong or Lily? 🧐

The author's writing is okay, not as poisonous as Rhapsody, but the plot is a bit too similar to that one. I hope to innovate in the future and write my own novel.

Great two-part essay that makes my brain spin (Can I change the cover?)

Just one request, no harem, no harem, no harem, say important things three times!

Approval from me [like] (listen to others' advice to eat enough)

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good. There are very few good writers on this subject. In fact, the author must persevere.

Good guy, I feel like you, the author, have watched and played a lot of anime and games. This book is really well written.

How can you sleep at this time? Please update quickly! ! I advise you to update quickly, you don't want me to kneel down and beg you [smile]

I am very optimistic about the author's book and look forward to a happy ending. It should be the same as one of my sacred books. (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

It's so short, it's so short, it's good to read, I love reading it, it's so short, it's so short, the update time is a bit hellish, and each chapter is a bit short.

Yes, I haven't read much about this genre. It's still a Western fantasy, which is relatively new to me. The author also writes well, but there are too few [punch], and I finished it in one go [crying]

It is similar to a novel written by Yin Niang in Troubled Times that I read before. After time travel, one is divided into two, one male and one female, two bodies and one soul, two parts of talent, a male warrior and a female magician [laughter]