The Thousand-Year Journey of Becoming a Dragon Lady

It's pretty good. For a new author, it should be a new author, because some of the plots in it are too blunt, but it's already very good. Also, could the author not make the protagonist smoke? I don't care if the main character smokes, but the body he uses is that of the female protagonist, so um, forget it, I just hope the main character won't be allowed to smoke, please. Also, cheers for the author, the writing is very good, please update it soon. (Ps: Although I know that this kind of book is usually easy to be interrupted or unfinished, I still hope that the author can finish it in his lifetime.)

(I'm sorry, I'm speaking purely for myself) I've read Chapter 10 of the plot now, and I feel pretty good about it. However, during the reading process, the author did not reflect the sense of gradual progression (that is, it does not make the readers feel abrupt). After the protagonist sees the surprise given by them, at this time, I think the detailed description should be a little more emphasis. Also, the current image of the protagonist has not been completely established (the protagonist's character is described from the front and side), and I have a feeling that the protagonist's personality seems to be a bit conflicted (not much, it does not affect the viewing). This is probably the feeling now (I don't know whether it is a brain or not ╮(￣▽￣)╭). To sum up, the audience of this book is not that large after all. The subject of "possession" will make some people feel uncomfortable (me), but this article does not describe the matter too much and gives a rational reason, which makes it easier for people to accept. Anyway [thinking] I think it is okay. Finally, novel themes tend to have better effects and make people feel brighter, but if the subject is too new, it will make people feel blind. I hope the author has a good grasp of the situation, and the description of emotions should be more profound and emotional, to mobilize the readers' emotions (I am not a book writer, so the author has experienced this myself), the plot should be foreshadowing, and the story should be vivid. All in all, I think this book has a good future.´•ﻌ•`. I wish the author good health and good luck!

No one is rating it, right? I'll make up the numbers myself. I found the problem. I should have voted for fantasy, but I voted for traditional fantasy. The audience is wrong, so the traffic is very poor. This book may not be updated frequently in the future. Please give it a rating. I will be very happy if this book can get a 9.0 Rating. After all, it is the first book.

I think it's quite interesting and can be read. It has some shortcomings, but after all, it's a new author, so it's okay. In fact, there are some poisonous points. If it were not for this type of novel, it would not be considered poisonous. But this is the type of novel you are writing, because the protagonist is not using his body, so the author can first understand what should not be written in this type of novel. Finally, I wish the author to write better and better, just keep updating.

This is the most interesting book I have seen since I came to Tomato. The character description is very distinctive, and to a large extent it gets rid of the shortcomings of "flat characters". The plot is lively and interesting, and it is well worth reading.

Author, don't cry, I'll give you a five-star review [laughing evilly] Generally speaking, the writing is very interesting, but some aspects need more careful consideration. The plot may need more foreshadowing to make it look better. I will review the rest next time [please update]

Although the main line looks heavier, the daily posts are cute and relaxing. I want to post them too.

Personally, I think the first twenty or thirty chapters are quite interesting, but the later chapters may start to look weak because of the construction of the overall world view. I hope the author can continue to update, and I give you five stars (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ (In addition, I feel that the author's writing style is more suitable for writing about daily life. Can you write more daily chapters?)

Very good book

Not bad, keep up the good work

Come on, author. The new cover is also very nice.

Great author, great article. The last time I saw the tranquil writing style was in Tomato.

The author's writing is very good and very beautiful

Not bad, quality is okay

It's beautiful, I like this theme

The writing is very good and the world view is interesting

It feels like a light novel, which is pretty good

A very warm and relaxing article, good luck to the author!

I really think it's good, it looks very comfortable

Very calm writing style, quite interesting

It's well written, but I don't really like the main plot, which is quite heavy. I quite like [blowing kisses] on a daily basis

Good looking and realistic

Onegai, Vadasi

Although the plot is a little scattered and the sentences are a bit inconsistent, the overall plot is still good. In other words, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on, author [laughter]

The book is very good, I like it very much, keep going

Awesome, really good-looking

Personally I feel pretty good

Very good and to my taste

I feel like it was pretty good in the early stages, but I don't know how it will be in the later stages.