盗墓祭祀之开局拦下小哥

It's not a nanny story about following the protagonist as a nanny, nor is it the kind of story where someone with a little bit of ability can forcibly insert themselves into the main plot. There are suspicions, pulls, and ambiguities, but the writing is actually pretty good. You can use it appropriately in daily life, and the interaction with the system is actually quite fun. It doesn't matter as long as it doesn't take up a lot of space. It also helps to enrich the character. If the protagonist in the whole story has no daily tasks to do, he will wait for the protagonist to follow him into another tomb after going to one tomb. That's no different from alternative nanny writing. There are eight out of ten Tomato Tomb Raiders and Nanny books. . I'm tired of watching it. The restoration of the characters in this book is not to say how good it is. But at least it looks comfortable. Come on.

I like it very much and the setting is very interesting! The main character is a bit silly and cute! He is powerful, and what he wants has no conflict of interest with the original protagonist group. Even if he can play with the protagonist group on the side, he can also live well by himself! I like this kind of thing, it's not like I can't live without the protagonist group! He has a mysterious past, unknown origins, good skills, powerful strength, and good looks! As an NPC who came to the world of tomb robbers, his body is also different from that of a normal person. You can already expect the pleasant fake knife and the imagined scene later. I like this kind of beauty, strong and miserable, miserable or disguised. Whether it is a powerful mysterious guest or a miserable little pitiful one, it is a delicious thing! ! !

The writing is nice and the protagonist talks to the system quite cutely. However, I felt that the whole book did not highlight the protagonist's ability. I didn't write about the protagonist's paper-tying ability. I hope it can be added later.

Give a long review ~ four stars to prevent the book from crashing. I've read a lot of fan fiction, and it's a mix of good and bad, and this book is one of the best-written ones I've ever read. From my personal point of view (for reference only) I am a hardcore person, and I read fandoms mainly for the cp. In terms of the atmosphere alone, this book has already won a lot of articles. The emotional line is not awkward and blunt. It is a slow and steady process from purposeful approach to uncontrollable concern. Although the chapter is not long, the author has a good grasp of this point, and there is no sudden emotional development. The one who has the most contact with the protagonist in the article is Heixiazi. I think the character's emotions are pretty good (although the two are still in a trial and error situation at the moment). At present, there is nothing surprising in this aspect. Please keep this pace ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱. Then there's the setting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of setting. It's quite novel. From the infinite flow to the world of stolen pens, I tried my best to polish it so that it's not a noob and it's not exactly Long Aotian. A little bit of growth flow will not make people feel anxious because of the long growth path of the protagonist. The relationship between the protagonist and the system is very loving, and it warms the heart of everyone watching it. But chatting between two people might feel awkward. And I think after all, the protagonist's predecessor was Mugenliu, and he must have seen a lot of things, but he was too optimistic in the article? I think proper construction of the dark side will make it more three-dimensional. I looked through the comments and found that someone said that we should focus more on the plot? In fact, this fanfic is more of an entertainment nature, and after all, I don't want to read the original text again when I read it. In addition, the plot points are described very well every time. I think this is not a big problem. Moreover, the plot of this fanfic is mainly about crows seeking a living, and their bodies are getting better and better through accumulated experience. This is actually the progress of the main plot. But it does feel a little delayed sometimes? Keep up the good work, because I'm looking forward to the next plot~ Finally, baby, you must take supplements and stop reading. I am exhausted.

It's pretty good to watch, but I'm not that group-favorite. In fact, I really want to see the protagonist pretending to be cool. There are a lot of scenes with the blind man, so I'm going to blame the blind man and the protagonist. I'm curious, isn't the protagonist the owner of a paper-making shop? So why isn't there that kind of derivative skill?

It's quite interesting, and there are basically no areas that hit my mark. It's not a nanny story, it's not a story about systematic human trafficking and host abuse, and it's not a love at first sight (love at first sight) story.

The teacher's writing is very good. Both Xiaoji and the baby Crow Crow are very cute. The interaction between one person and one person makes me feel soft. I really like that the protagonist does not follow the protagonist group all the time, but has his own things to do, and the teacher updates very frequently. I originally wanted to wait until the tie is tied before writing a review, but it is so good that I can't help but post it first. Come on, teacher, and look forward to the follow-up development [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Baby, you are a good fighter. I like to see the interaction between the protagonist and the system. I hope the author will give you a lot of support [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Looks good!😍Speaking of which, can the protagonist return to Infinite Flow and get some colleagues? I'm very curious about the types of colleagues, and the time in the grass basin, are they the fragments of the protagonist's colleagues? When will the protagonist change the bones? (There are a lot of questions, let's go back to the review time) The logic is clear, the structure is complete, the content is very attractive, and it makes people curious. Well... Blind is very emotional and his expressions are on point. I will give him extra money (performance fee) and hope that the two centenarians can get along well with the protagonist. The writing is very good and the little sacrifice is also very cute. I am very curious about what the purple snake looks like. It should be very beautiful, right? Should the founder of the paper shop have a follow-up relationship with the crow? I'm very curious. Ahem, let's go back to the review time. Hmm... The content is vivid and vivid, the characters are three-dimensional, rich and full, Xiannian is really... He can't be OOC no matter what he does [face covering] [laughing evilly]

Although some of the words are not fluent, the plot and writing style are still very good and attractive, and the protagonist's character is not too interesting. You can try it in the book world [laughs]

Even if I don't give it five stars, I understand. Just don't cheat. There are too few that suit your appetite, and they are not abusive. I was moved to tears. It is so difficult to find someone who is not abusive. The writing is online and can be edited. Madam, will you finish this book? I just found out that I have read two of your books and collected one, but they are all in a row. Load. Middle. The other few books don't matter, just take them as exercises. This one is good, you have to finish it. The worst thing about reading novels is that you will feel flustered. I like it so much, come on, wife, I want to stock up, but I can't help but watch it [shy]

What can I say, I found it interesting at the beginning. The first few units went their own way, occasionally overlapped with the main plot, and were full of new ideas. However, when I arrived at the latest unit of the Zhangjia Ancient Building in Yunnan, I felt a little dragged out. It was quite boring to follow the protagonist group and run around. There were many chapters, and I felt that there was no progress. It was just a waste of people's love for the characters. To be honest, the author, your writing style is definitely not as good as that of the third uncle, so you should use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses, focus on the pace and characteristics of the crow, and do not overlap with the pig's feet. Don't follow the original plot line. Otherwise, why don't I read the original work? Readers who read the fanfic of stolen pens must have read a lot of the original work and the fanfic. Looking at those plots, the slow progress is very boring. I feel that there are not many updates these days. I should pay attention to this issue. This is also the reason why many fanfics cannot be written later.

This book by the author is really one of the very few tomb robber fanfics that made me achieve cp. Moreover, the protagonist has his own things to do and does not revolve around the protagonist. The most important thing is that the plot of the protagonist hoarding goods really made me feel super satisfied. Crow Crow really takes good care of himself, he's super cute, I love him so much

I abandoned the article for a while because the copy was too long and the process was a bit slow, but I picked it up later. To put it simply, the shortcomings of the plot are the ones mentioned earlier. The character of the protagonist is quite good, gentle and playful (bushi). In short, he is very cute, and the Snake system to coax each other is also very cute! The love line didn't just come up and fall in love madly for no reason, but it was laid out for a long time. Unfortunately, our boss Ying hasn't figured it out yet, kkk is very budding, and boss Ying is a long-haired beauty! ! ! Long live the long-haired beauty, I really like it🥰🥰🥰 Let me add that this is not a group favorite and mutual trust from the beginning, but the other party did not make excessive attempts, and it is not a nanny story. Most of the time, Crow Crow follows the system tasks and to replenish food😋

It's very interesting. It has a brand new plot of tomb robbing. It no longer follows the same old story. The author's writing style is very good.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh watching [please update], the relationship between Crow Crow and Xiao Tong is also very cute, they are two cute babies, Crow Crow's characters are also very rich, and they have a lot of interactions with other people! ! !

The plot is very good! There are many original works by the author, which is not embarrassing and very logical! In the early stage, I felt that the sentences were a bit unclear and I was a little tired watching it. The more I followed, the better it became. I am looking forward to the update every day! Crow Crow is beautiful and strong, and I am very curious about how others will make Crow Crow wake up later [laughing]

The plot and characters are good, and there is an original plot. The author's writing skills are still immature, but the overall reading experience is still acceptable.

It's very dull, but it has the motivation to keep following it. I hope it can be more thrilling and exciting later [Thoughts] I'm almost halfway through watching it and I still don't know who I'm cooperating with.

Watch me show off. Such a beautiful article was born to be eaten up by me. It's a very, very, very, very good-looking article, and I've been following it for several years. . .

It's really super good-looking. It's related to the main storyline, but it also has its own setting and plot. I can't find any meal replacements... It's painful and fun to wait for the update every day... It's really super good-looking, and Crow Crow is super cute.

It's a bit colloquial and has a lot of typos, but the plot is okay and you can watch it. Why are there so many typos? It's really hard to listen to the book˃ ˄ ˂̥̥

The setting of this book is quite novel, but there is one thing that some readers may not be able to stand. There are a lot of typos, and sometimes there are even missing words. The typos are all words with similar pronunciations, and I can see in the comment area that the author has made many corrections.

The writing level of this book is commendable. Both the use of language and the control of content have reached an extremely high level. In the process of reading, readers can feel the author's intention and wisdom, which makes them benefit a lot.

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking. This rating should be, it just came out not long ago, so it is a bit low. As long as it lasts longer, it will be at least 8 points.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhinghtehhhhhhh trouble submission whereyyating. Xiaoji is so cute~ I should kiss the boss~

The structure is clear, the subject matter is fresh, and you won't stick to the protagonist group as a babysitter. The protagonist's character is also very good. Group favorite, prefer daily slow pace The protagonist of the underworld and his underworld snacks, bushi

！ ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The author's writing is so innovative! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Crow baby, you are just a fragrant and soft little cake 🍰🍰🍰🍰, so delicious ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh right righttelltelltellavihhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ! ! ! (If you don't like it, don't spray it. Your parents will be healthy and your family will be happy)

It's great, it's interesting, and the story is great Distinctive character traits

It looks really good so far! The interactions between the protagonist and other people are very interesting and OOC-free, and the setting is also very interesting. I look forward to the follow-up plot!