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@ Shedpengpeng The background of the story is very good, but the protagonist is a bit lacking in B-level. You can change the yellow robe at the beginning to the half-broken purple robe. After someone else explained it, I understood the meaning of the purple robe. In order to avoid something like that, I changed to the ordinary Taoist robe. When I reported the number for the first time, there was a bit of B missing. When we meet, you give me your master's Taoist ID. This can be used to give people a WC once. The B grid is very good. Then join the old Taoist secretly to calculate and so on, and then find out that it is a dead person/lifeless person who mistakenly believes that it is a monster or something, and it can be WC once. The psychology needs to be improved. There are still some things where you have to dig holes and don't follow the main plot too deliberately. Brother Xuan is a mystery and you have to slowly uncover it step by step, including why he buried the protagonist at that time. The progress bar is a bit too fast. It's a bit reckless when things happen. This is a chivalrous act. The protagonist is indeed a bit weak and a bit ordinary. There should be some key points in the early stage to save life. The copper coin sword is good, and Taoism is generally about cause and effect. After robbing the tomb, I was scared to death. This cycle is very good. I don't know if cause and effect can be connected later. If you have learned from Seventy-Two, then you can learn from Lan Ke. This book written by the author is very good. As long as it is not too brainless, many people will follow the book.

When I saw Chapter 60, the protagonist didn't even understand what his plug-in was.

Yes, every scene and action has a great fantasy feel. The focus is not on ordinary monsters and upgrades, but on various experiences. The characters, both good and bad, are successfully created and very distinctive.

It feels like storytelling, very light and new! I think this book is ridiculous! ! !

It's okay. He didn't update the Shadow of the Seventy-Two Changes. This one can barely replace it. Although the writing power is obviously lacking, it still looks good. No, you are too short. Four chapters are not as long as one chapter.

With all the poems and poems written, this book can be said to be a tomato ceiling, and it is not inferior to all the famous writers. I will look at it and witness the glorious moment. I read the book reviews and found them to be mixed. Some of them liked the refreshing writing, and some of them felt that the author didn't understand the dojo well enough. But for now, I think it's pretty good and I didn't see any problems. However, some of the book reviews seemed a bit deliberate. I can only say that they were a bit speechless.

This is the fantasy novel in my mind, not those

Objectively speaking, this book has a clear main line, echoes back and forth, has foreshadowing, and can fill in the pits. The story theme is also relatively novel, full of blood, tears, close to life, and understands human nature. It is considered a masterpiece on Tomato!

This money sword looks like the book in the Seventy-two Changes of Disha

It's well written, but a bit short, and the main character is a bit weak right now.

The plot is not bloody, and it is very innovative. Just watch the chapter about the Taoist priest who slays demons and demons.

Yes, after months of raising it, I finally have 100 chapters. Come on, author. The author wrote the protagonist to be too weak, with extremely low combat power, poor sense of presence, and basically no sense of presence. It is understandable that he is weak at the beginning, but if he continues to be weak, he is uninteresting. Reading novels is all about pursuing excitement. Mediocre people are everywhere in life. Is it necessary to read them in novels? At present, this novel is far inferior to Tiangang Disha

It's okay. The writing style in the article is similar to Qingming prose novels. I should refer to the 72 Sha and Yellow Book categories. So far, it's pretty good.

Very well written, I'm optimistic about you

It's not easy to encourage authors to create with five stars

The plot is very attractive, the stories are closely linked, the subject matter is relatively novel, and the writing is also pretty good.

Well written, I hope it becomes popular

Don't stop updating, it's hard to find this type of book, the writing is very good, but the world structure is not clear yet, will there be a female protagonist? Come on

The plot is okay, but not that cool. The thinking is logical and the chapters are loose and relaxed.

Very thoughtful. Readers generally want to see the protagonist show off.

Yes, come on, author

Copper Coin Sword Chapter 26 is out

It looks good, but I don't know why the score is so low.

Come on, author, your book is very personal.

It's okay. Except for the protagonist who is not very smart sometimes, everything else is okay. It's just that the logic of the story is not smooth sometimes.

The overall logic is very strong. Very nice to look at. The writing is also good

It is similar to the writing style of Water Margin, without cheating plot. If you like this type, it should be good

It's a good read, I personally think it's an interesting author, don't give up (›´ω`‹)

The second book is similar to Liaozhai. The previous one featured mortals using the power of gods to overcome obstacles, but it ended hastily and could have included a city god element.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. It pales in comparison to other similar fantasy films.