Elf: Three Sheep Knives, Strange Power of One Hundred Thousand Punches Per Second

It is recommended to reduce the number of women in the scenes, which will greatly affect the perception. It would be fine without women. Come on, author.

It's just that saving the policewoman is a bit poisonous. Many people usually run away at this time, but I can bear it, and then the next elf will collect a three-titan Kirby.

After reading Chapter 10, I feel that the subject matter is okay, that is, the setting of the racial value. I read the comments and said that the author used the racial value of physical strength x10. Those who are familiar with the Pokémon settings will find it very uncomfortable. I feel that changing the racial value to the ability value should be much better? [Thinking][covering face]

The protagonist seems to want to make progress a little too much

Brother, I can watch it, but can the female boss change it? It's really uncomfortable.

It's very well written. Brother author, please don't stop updating. Please.

The idea is good and the subject matter is good. That's what I think personally. I've read a book about Hex's Pokémon before. Come on, follow your own pace. Don't be anxious. Take your time. Just keep updating. Keep your own pace.

It's an excellent elf article, but the understanding of equipment configuration is a little different. I hope the author can stick to it.

Not bad, not bad. Other fan fictions are just like children's cartoons, a harmonious world where no one or the elves care about. This one still looks good

It feels okay, but this racial value makes me a little bit difficult to break down.

Damn, the author must have given up on this book, but it has been so long [smile]

In my opinion, in the Pokémon world view, physical strength is equal to blood volume. So I suggest giving a vampire knife,

It's all you can read in the Pokémon literature. It's a recommendation from a bookworm of eight years. Usually I'm too lazy to write a review because I'm so addicted.

Still pretty good

Well written, keep it up!

Let's cheat, one team is invincible

Feel good about myself

This speed is also unique in Elfwen.

I've finished reading it, but it's too little. Author, please do more.

It's pretty good, and the author writes it very well.

Wow, the author is great

It's okay, just a little bit toxic.

Not bad, just a little short.

Don't be a pigeon

The subject matter is also quite novel. It's the author. Are you really [asterisk] and don't update?

It looks good, but I didn't expect it to be last year's [face covering]

Give you a five-star praise [exploration][exploration][exploration][exploration]

Like it, love to read it, come on the author [exploration]

It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject, it's really nice

The content is very novel. It is innovative for Tomato. Come on, author.