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The writing idea is quite novel, but the character of the protagonist is really unpleasant. He is simply a good person. He is willing to share his things with anyone he meets. He has no defensiveness at all and always thinks too much about human nature.

Personally, I feel that this is the best fanfic I have ever read. At least it is not top-notch right out of the gate, and it does not have a system that is more acceptable. Although I can't say I like the protagonist's personality, I don't dislike it too much either.

The author writes so well, I must continue writing. I like this kind of fairy tale atmosphere with a sense of farming the best. I hope that I can maintain my original intention and not deviate from the original atmosphere.

Very interesting, the main character likes to meddle in other people's business, it's a nanny story. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's gone, it's a pity [laughs awkwardly]

Is it by the author. . Already? Why don't you write?

The writing is very thoughtful and new, and it ranks high among all Douluo fanfics.

It's quite good, a very novel idea. The golden finger is himself, which is also rare in Douluo novels.

Nice! ! So where does the author plan to reopen now?

I knew I couldn't bear it for long [laughing and crying]

It's pretty good, but there are too few. Also, in addition to the original characters, it's better to come up with some characters that you draw yourself. It feels better. Fan fiction doesn't have to follow the protagonist's path, and there are some tomatoes with your style, but not many.

Come on, is the author doing voice input? I feel like there are a lot of language errors in the front

It's a very good book. The author's writing style is very good and his imagination is wide open. Can there be no heroine?

It's very novel. It's not overwhelming right from the start. It's worth watching.

Very good, but not expected. I really like this book about the vitality of blue silver grass.

The author's writing is so beautiful. If you ran away, which app did you use and restarted?

Has the author read Wen Jungui's book? I feel like the author is the same as him and has written his own style in Douluo fandom, which is super nice.

It looks good, but I don't know where the author went and restarted it.

Even if you absorb the soul ring, you can also use the corpse to temper the martial soul. It's too poisonous.

Will you accept Ah Yin, author

Nice! Please keep up the good work💪

Come on, the author is great

Not bad, keep up the good work [Like]

Very nice, fascinating content

The plot is compact and very good

I've always had a question about where Changchun Jue came from.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

I took a look at a few pictures, and except for the soul-fixing method, which is a bit hard to accept, everything else is good.

Come on! I have new ideas and can do more, but I'm afraid it won't last long [I learned it]

It's really great. It's one of the better Douluo fanfics I've read.