Self-Discipline Makes You Free, but It Doesn't Make Your Beauty Free

Very good. The only thing that wasn't handled well was the dual heroines. One of the two heroines is from a high-ranking official's family and the other is a CEO. I don't know if it was not done well at the beginning. After the two were accepted, they were a little incomplete. Later, they may be thinking of being more reasonable, so they became a lover and a main palace. However, this is not as good as having a single heroine from the beginning. The handling is average. The description is very gentle and comfortable to watch. It is not a very middle-class language style, but it is not procrastinating. At the same time, the details of each game are also very rich. The author does not avoid describing the process. The protagonist's progress is very stable, not rapid, and looks relatively reasonable. Personally, I feel that there is no poisonous point that suppresses the combat ability. It is just progressing slowly, making the progress as reasonable as possible. The protagonist is also purely self-disciplined. The overall feeling is that although it is a niche track, it will not be ignored by laymen. It is quite good. My personal feeling is around 9.2.

1. It's very fascinating. I read it in one breath and started to urge for updates. 2. Although there is systematic support, the protagonist is also very self-disciplined and hardworking 3. The plot of the story is relaxed, and you can even drive a car from time to time to adjust it.

The writing is okay, there are not too many bad points, but there is no need to keep emphasizing how beautiful the heroine is. No matter how beautiful the heroine is, she is still a human being. There is no need to make the heroine as beautiful as a fairy. Even if she is that beautiful, there is no need to keep emphasizing it. It's really annoying to keep emphasizing one point. I have read many Tomato novels, and they all have one thing in common, which is to emphasize one point repeatedly. For example, the heroine is very beautiful, but whenever someone sees it in a public place, they emphasize how beautiful the heroine is, and repeatedly emphasize how beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful the heroine is. There is no need to emphasize it once. If you emphasize a point repeatedly, it will really make people annoying. Looking at the novels of Qidian and Zongheng, he did not always emphasize one point. The writing and speaking are okay, not that immature. There are not many poisonous points. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

As an aerobics enthusiast, I quite like this book. Except for plug-ins, the sports data and some sports knowledge collected by the author are quite reliable. I hope it won't be too much to write down, and I look forward to the follow-up.

It's really good-looking. Believe me, it's really good-looking. Whether it's about life or competition, it's all written very realistically. I'd like to call it a passionate article about daily farming, hahaha. Come on, author! Keep up the quality[Like][Like][Like]

It is one of the best sports works I have ever read. Even though I don't know much about long-distance running and mainly focus on football novels, I read it with passion and a strong sense of immersion.

Worth a look. The biggest flaw is that there is a system that adds points but it does not reflect the advantages. If the system does not give points but "physical enhancement potions" with unclear values, the perception should be better. I crash every day and still ride a crappy bike. Is that what the novel says? If you look at the data, there aren't even a few paragraph comments at the end, so they're still underwhelming. Such a pressure method can only lower your own evaluation.

There are very few genre novels in Tomato, which reminded me of "The Athlete" I read many years ago, but the quality is even better. The marathon running part is quite explosive. It's passionate without being too hard, and it's easy to read without being boring. It's very enjoyable. After that, I switched to road cycling and skiing, and the pace became much faster, even a little too fast. If the author could stop and control the pace, and not write it as a purely refreshing article, it might bring this book to a higher level. I feel that the latter part is far less exciting than the previous plot, and I am still a little disappointed. Although this type of novel does not have many new exciting points in the future, I am still a little disappointed to see that the level of the second half of the book has declined.

It's very interesting. It's the first time I read this subject. The writing is better than I expected. To be able to write a book with such a boring theme about running so interestingly, I think the author is very talented.

The author's pace of writing is quite well controlled. After reading it for a while, the writing style is also very good. The characters' IQs are average. But if it is just a niche sport, fewer people will read it. I don't know what the author's outline is, but if there are too many words in a novel with a fast pace in today's life, there will be no motivation to follow it. The time control in the article is also very good. Now there are only two projects in 940,000 words. Is the pace too slow? I have read a lot of novels with millions of words, but most of them I can't finish reading halfway through, and I lose motivation as I continue to pursue them. People feel that the pace can be appropriately accelerated. After all, Hexagon Warriors, the pace of each event can be appropriately accelerated.

It's good-looking. The two female protagonists are very delicately written and have their own merits. The emotional part is written just right and doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. It just feels a bit difficult to handle. Liang's family background is so powerful that he will not allow the male protagonist to be in two different places, especially if he hides it for so long like a master of time management.

It's so good. The protagonist tells everyone that I have a system, I am willing to help others, I can easily become the best in the world, and the system can also make money. I can only say that mortals will eventually die, and temporary enthusiasm and fame are ultimately vanity.

I just watched the latest chapter. The plot is very smooth and the character of the protagonist makes me feel comfortable. Reasonable cheating + hard training, it is very comfortable to watch it in one go. The title of the book is not a piece of cake, and it received five-star reviews.

It's so beautiful. I'm also a runner. Come on, the author. [Sending my heart]. Keep writing. According to this trend, it will be a big hit until the Paris Olympics [laughing]. While the popularity of the Paris Olympics is not over, the author is going to make more updates. [Please give me more updates]

The writing is indeed okay, a little bit toxic, but some of the slap-in-the-face routines are rather stiff, but it's okay, five stars. I can't stand the two heroines, but the book is okay. To use the words from the other side, it's just food. I recommend reading it.

A very good novel, a niche article in a niche subject. If I have to pick one problem, it may be the initial setting. The time setting in the article is too late. It started in 23 years. Now I will have a strong sense of substitution when I look at the 2024 Olympics. After that, the sports theme will be a sense of substitution. If the anchor time is pushed forward 10 years, the reader's impression will be lighter, but the subsequent sense of substitution will be much deeper. There will be more to write and the editing will be more based. It will be more immersive than relying solely on a pen

Very well written. The cheats in this book are not exaggerated, they are all cheats within the scope of normal people. But that's how it looks real. The feeling of easily breaking through the limits of human beings seems very empty. It doesn't have the sense of reality that this book does. I like to read more heroines, but the writing in this book is not sweet enough. I hope the follow-up can be written better. Li Sha doesn't know why a divorce setting was added. I feel it doesn't help the plot at all. It's not fun at all like this. However, I still give this book 5 stars. The other plots are very comfortable to read.

It is a rare sports masterpiece. The character of the protagonist progresses step by step through self-discipline. The narration of the emotional line is not procrastinating or bloody. The advancement process of training and competition is refreshing and smooth. The key is that the protagonist practices these events, which we ordinary people only know but don't know much about. Some professional knowledge also makes everyone feel proud! ! ! It's not enough. I want to challenge middle-distance running, cycling, swimming, and boxing after my middle-distance running is capped! !

It looks pretty good in front, but I don't know if it's my imagination. I feel like fewer and fewer people are watching it recently, especially cross-country skiing and road biking. I feel like it's just so-so. The main reason is that we don't know much about these sports, so naturally we don't know the level of those powerful athletes. In fact, I don't understand long-distance marathon running, but the numerical value is emphasized in the front, so it is very intuitive to know the protagonist's level. I can emphasize what record is broken, and then describe how the original record is. I don't know much about long-distance running in the past, but I think it's pretty good. This is also a factor, because I don't understand these sports, but I can understand numbers.

This is the first time I read an article about sports long-distance running and cycling. Learned a lot about sports. Hormones paired with beautiful women is really a different kind of cool novel. Good reviews

This rating is an understatement. As long as it doesn't fall apart later, the quality of this book will have a place in the Dianniang City category. There's no need to be too anxious for the protagonist to reach the top in one step, the current pace is very good.

The second book reviewed by Tomato, the first one is "Only Making Money, Not Love" (not a diversion, this is my first contact with this book about sports, it is quite novel, I can still understand a lot of sports knowledge, the book is good, cheers for the author!

I finished reading the latest chapter in one go. It's my first time reading a running novel. It's really exciting [Please update]

I have read many novels about sports players before, but those relied on the system to gain reputation points and exchange them for upgraded skill levels to win games. This is the first novel I have seen in which the protagonist gradually trains hard on his own and then adds a little system help to win the game.

It's my first time to come across this kind of exercise training. It looks good. I read it in one go. I hope the author will update it more quickly.

For non-basketball and football sports articles, the author should be a relevant sports practitioner. He has popularized some knowledge about marathons, bicycle races and other related sports. It can be regarded as a niche article among sports articles, but the writing style is not bad, and it has the rhythm and excitement that it should have. It can be regarded as a rare high-quality niche article in Tomato, but it seems to be restricted or something. I can't find it. Damn Tomato! !

The emotional description of this book is very good, and I, a newbie with thousands of hours of experience, read it with gusto. And his kind of sports is not a one-step process, but a step-by-step process. If there are no good books to read, and there are many female protagonists in the drama. If you want to watch ordinary sports drama, you can watch this. And the author also has a lot of understanding of sports.

It's well written and makes me want to try being a runner even though I have never run.

The writing is quite good, but I feel that there is a bit too much marathon content and less daily content. As an online article, it has a small audience. I hope to write more about daily life.

I don't know if there is anyone like me who only likes to watch track and field and not cycling or skiing. There are too few track and field plots in the later period. Overall, it is well written. I hope there will be more about track and field in the later period. At least do one thing well before moving on to another one.