HP: Controlling Cause and Effect, Rebellious Voldemort

It's super good-looking, because the heroine's character is very consistent with my concept, so I felt a little bit involved when watching it. Anyway, my impression is very good. Then I felt that the plot was also very good. The heroine's abilities were not overly exaggerated, and the control was very good. It didn't feel like she was particularly strong in the early stages, only to be overly exaggerated in the later stages. I really like it. I read Chapter 146 in one go yesterday. Also, I really like the character Xiao Duo, so this book is really written to suit my needs. Such a beautiful book, author, you must work hard! ٩( 'ω' )و

The writing is quite good, but there are a lot of emotional scenes with Nott, which makes me feel a bit abrupt, and the plot has ups and downs. It is quite acceptable to be a mindless novel. After all, Nott is a fan-created character written by the author. I feel that the emotional scenes are a bit redundant. I feel that the author may not be good at writing this kind of love dialogue and interaction. There are not many descriptions. It feels like falling in love with each other is a bit redundant and inexplicable. Although the explanation is that he fell in love with the heroine directly during observation, but overall it still seems a bit. . . However, the heroine's mind is very good in the fight scenes. The heroine and Harry are well portrayed. The brother-sister relationship is very beautiful. When I read the original work, I felt sorry for Harry. Love is the greatest magic. The heroine's early strategy and determination are still good for this kind of brainless little novel. It's very acceptable, but I feel that some of the descriptions in the article are a bit lacking. They are basically about the heroine's revenge. There is not much about the two brothers and sisters when they were young. A lot of content has been rushed through. When Harry was chased by a dog and stayed in a tree for an afternoon. When you are being chased by other children, when you are wiping tears in the small stairwell after doing housework for a day, when you are in the secret room incident, when you are framed in the Triwizard Tournament, would you want your mother to support you? It is also very touching to see the two brothers and sisters recognize each other. Finally Harry is really the perfect savior, a born Auror, a complete saint, a wizard among wizards, all wizards fall for him, and all witches are obsessed with him. His father-in-law said that he is the heavenly father who forgives all the troubles in the world and kills all the storms that come. His mother-in-law said that he is the Virgin who protects and cares for everyone's sorrow and looks at all despair with compassion. Harry Potter said hello, is there anything I can do for you?

The writing is very good, the heroine is focused on her career, but there is still an emotional line. I almost didn't finish reading the first part because the first paragraph is too long. I suggest the author make it shorter and it will be better when you read the second part [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Sending Hearts]

The heroine is very rational and has a strong mind and heart. The part about "taking out your heart and lungs" is really exciting... The scene is also described vividly and meticulously... It's very imaginative and the logic is rigorous' (it's just one word anyway - good)

It's 1:12 in the morning, and I've read Chapter 72 so far. As an old bookworm, I can read this article for so long. First of all, there is definitely no problem with the writing style and logic. As a fanfic, the author's control of the plot and shaping of the characters are also very good. I hope the author will work hard to update~₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

I feel that the rating is a bit low, at least around 8 o'clock. Whether it is the emotional line, the friendship line, the family line, or the plot, it is quite coherent, and the writing is very good. It is great. How should I put it, it lacks a little innovation, but it is also very good.

Damn it, this can be said to be the best book I have ever read that depicts the battle process in detail. Although it is still being serialized (yes, I just caught up with the latest and I can't stop it), there is no doubt that this is a book that not only contains individual heroism, but the group portraits in it are also vividly described. The characters we know are given new destinies and choices, and they also vividly make new decisions that are worthy of their conscience. Overall, it's very enjoyable, but it's also heart-wrenching, sad, and touching. There are few authors who have written about Voldemort's terror and madness so vividly. When you look at it, you can really feel how terrifying the dark wizard who has swept the century is, and how unyielding the protagonist and everyone is, and how many psychological struggles and hardships they have gone through, and finally choose to protect and fight. There is no obvious plot here, nor is there any special golden finger. You can see how every ordinary and extraordinary people muster up the courage and raise the magic wand to protect ourselves and the ones we love. Don't cry for the one you love, just because you never left. This is what I consider to be the number one battle group and struggle category!

The plot of the career line is excellent and smooth, and the emotional line is not obtrusive or overpowering. I like the heroine's character very much, and there are no weird points. I really like career-oriented heroines!!

Very well written. Either he is the god of salvation for those who are very bookish.

It's very interesting, and the growth line of the heroine is particularly well written. She is secretly looking for ways to change her destiny, and she seizes every opportunity just to take back everything that belongs to her. However, the heroine's emotional line is a bit immature, and the two people's affection for each other is a bit inexplicable, but this is not a big problem for me. Overall, it is a good HP story in 🍅

Archive It looked good, but after the stabbing ended, I felt like there was nothing interesting to watch. At that time, I was scratching my head and lungs all day long to stab Voldemort [laughs], but after the climax, I felt nothing at all. I hope the author can make the subsequent plot more ups and downs or more interesting.

The writing is very good, the characters are vivid, and the author is very praised [sending heartfelt wishes]

It looks good, but the character of the protagonist needs to be more fleshed out. The plot between the protagonist and his brother is well written.

It's quite pretty! Come on! (≧∇≦)/!

The heroine has a smart mind

It's so beautiful. Kudos to the author.

The writing is very good, and I read it all in one go. The war scenes are very specific but not in a way that makes people feel hopeless and helpless, and every danger is saved. I hope more people can read the author's books! Looking forward to writing more delicious meals from you!

Very interesting (✪▽✪) The plot is full of ups and downs, rich in emotions, and very touching! I just hope the author will write more ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

I can't get enough of it~~ It's so exciting, I look forward to the follow-up (☆ ▽ ☆)

It looks good [Adored], but I want to ask, is this book without CP, gl or bg [exploration]

I can't do it anymore. Take a good look. Does the teacher have any CP?

Three-dimensional characters [Blowing Kiss] Interesting plot

Is it okay? You can take a look.

The plot is relatively complete.

It looks good. It looks so good.

It looks great. Why is the rating so low? I missed it later.

The views of this book are unique and profound. It gave me a new understanding of some common things and enriched my way of thinking. Very nice. Just too little.

I like it so much💕 It would be nice if it could be updated faster... The plot is a little different from the original... There are some things about the characters that are OOC: For example, Theodore's potion scores are actually very good... (Rowling mentioned it on the official website...) But the advantage is that the plot is relatively novel, but there are many private settings, which can easily affect the viewing experience. The heroine is assigned to the Snake House (although it is not considered voluntary?), But it can reflect the weighing of pros and cons that is unique to Slytherin in her. She is not the kind of snake house with a lion heart. I highly praise [shy] such sober heroines are rare (>^ω^<) It's a good read😊The overall plot is a bit too fast, and the festivals sometimes mentioned in the main plot don't fit well with the novel... I suggest you think twice about pursuing plot compatibility. But this article is also very good☺️Except for these shortcomings, the plot is not too bad and is almost the same as the original work. There is nothing very OOC in the rest of the book (maybe it's because I have a higher tolerance?) If I read the book by myself, I must give it five stars! 🥰🥰🥰

This book is very good, but I feel sorry for the heroine [I almost cry]

This book is really the most powerful and terrifying book about Voldemort that I have read so far. The protagonist keeps fighting with Voldemort, it's super cool👀