Comprehensive Comic: Fat House Also Has Dreams

The biggest bacterium among bacteria: Hello "Author Bacteria"! The following are my personal suggestions for this book (in my personal opinion). I think the protagonist can lose weight after dozens of chapters, and the emotional foundation is almost laid. It's time to write a sweet harem love! It's almost 300 chapters and there is no relevant information about weight loss success. I'm going to raise books for my children.

Fortunately, I can continue to listen to it. When it comes to Jiaxi, who is the ancestor of the protagonist? If such a character is not killed in one shot, why would he take it home? If such a character does not change, it will cause a lot of trouble in the future, and the protagonist will be wiped out, or the protagonist will be misunderstood by the female protagonists in the variety show as a lolicon. This is my opinion. Don't worry about it.

The character interactions are good, and that's about it. The pace of the plot is too slow, and most people should be able to feel it. There are two days on the weekend, one plot a day, and a plot of more than ten chapters. The multiplayer plot can reach twenty or thirty chapters, and I have to write it every weekend. Based on the above, more problems have arisen, and the main attraction of losing weight has been seriously weakened. It has existed in the form of a fat house for more than 300 chapters, basically discarding this attraction. The female character is not attracted by any charisma at all. In other words, the protagonist, a pig man, has no charisma at all. It all depends on system skills and the identity created by copywriting. Since each character's plot is slightly longer, some characters don't appear much. Yukino hasn't appeared in seventy or eighty chapters. So someone asked, Yukino already has a lot of plots. Is there any character who is more reliable than him? Some brothers, some. Chika Fujiwara who has over 100 chapters, the former prison king Eri, and our prison boss Kaki, are they too much to even mention? Brothers who want to eat meat may die in this life. The author has been suppressed by Shen He's divine power all year round, and he has set up the protagonist who wants to open a harem. He will not touch it unless everyone's favorability is increased. So brothers, you're in luck, you can see the fat house who can't be replaced at all use the power of the system to conquer your favorite anime characters😄 Still a mess, I really thank the author, Akaashi has flavor.

Overall, the writing is good. I like the story of the protagonist starting from being fat and getting better step by step. One point was deducted because there were characters from the demon world that were very inconsistent with the daily drama, and it was a drama that I had not watched, which affected the perception. Personally, I suggest that the author should write more characters from popular dramas. I don't know how you would feel when you see characters from dramas you haven't watched appear in fanfics. Anyway, I will skip them... Personally, I think that the presence of characters that readers don't know about in the novel greatly affects the sense of immersion for fans. This is why most authors like to write about popular characters.

The interaction between the protagonist, Eiri and her daughter, and Yukinoshita are well written. It's a pity that I don't know Kahi. I haven't watched Kahi much since Kahi appeared. Moreover, the corruption system at the beginning is completely offline. It's a pity.

It is not impetuous and is very warm in daily life. Everyone's personality is well described. It is also one of the most brilliant books among all the comics I have read. It has jokes and can play jokes. Every interesting story is not too abrupt [please update] The front looks good, don't keep up to date, the back is full of rubbish [angry]

It's pretty good. The male protagonist is fat and has a low head, which makes it easy to remember. To be honest, those movies where the male protagonist is handsome as hell are unimpressive and stereotyped, but this one doesn't. The daily writing is also very good, the system is downplayed and not too watery [Like]

The real gold dug out of the pile of tomato shit is that the author has good control over the personality of each character, and the writing and control of daily rhythm are also very good. It doesn't have the kind of invincibility of the protagonist right from the beginning, but it writes the warm and daily life of a variety comic that I want to watch. The encounters with various heroines are not so abrupt, and the writing is very reasonable. This is really a big plus. Also, it took me so long to think of rating it. And the last thing I want to say: Author, how do you manage to sleep at your age? How did you manage to sleep! ? Get up quickly and give me an update! I want to read a new chapter, I want to read a new chapter! If you don't watch it anymore, you will really feel like there are ants crawling all over your body!

The only shortcoming is that except for the description of the protagonist's slight weight loss at the beginning, there is no description at all later. There is no requirement for the protagonist to lose weight. No matter how handsome he is, he can be comparable to those male protagonists, but he must at least lose weight.

It's a very interesting comic. The protagonist's story is not that exaggerated. The shortcoming is that it's too short, and there are often some contents that I haven't read. For example, you can tell me the names of those comics. I want to watch it.

This book is really good. At least it's a Tomato fanfic. It's the only book I started reading when it had less than 200,000 words. It's also the first book I've updated. By the way, how many words does the author add every day? It feels like sometimes one or two chapters, sometimes three or four. It's almost 500,000 words, but there's still no progress in my relationship, and I haven't lost weight yet and I'm still fat🐷. Has the author forgotten why readers are attracted to this novel? It was just because of the protagonist's fat nerd image in the beginning. In addition, the fat house in the picture in this book makes readers think wildly. Is there such a corrupt system? As a result, the author not only marginalized the system, but also allowed the protagonist to maintain this image. However, I have to say that the author did write the image of the protagonist Fat Man very vividly. But isn't everyone just looking at it to make them feel happy? The fat house image is a bonus, but after writing the novel for so long, this image is definitely a deduction. An example is the three-year contract between Xiao Yan and Nalan Yanran. After three years, Xiao Yan still lost. Do you think readers will agree? However, the author's writing style is indeed pretty good. Even now, the writing style is still fluent, and the characters of the girls are not too bad. Many authors in this kind of comprehensive comic can't grasp the character design and it is easy for them to break the character. But do you really not recommend the author's romance plot? I can understand that the author wants to write millions of words, so the emotional line is slower, but generally speaking, at 500,000 words, I don't say it's overpowering in terms of emotions, but at least one or two people will make some progress. But the only protagonist who can be said to have made some progress is Yukino. At least now Yukino cares more about the protagonist and is jealous of the protagonist and Haruno. But no matter how you look at it, Yukino is taking the main palace route. If it is a harem story, Yukino will definitely develop it after the protagonist has one or two heroines who express his feelings and become jealous. It's just that the only one with emotional development now is Yukino. After writing so many words, the emotional line should be pushed forward no matter what. If you push the Yukino route first, it is unlikely that you will open a harem later. In fact, I suggest that the author stop writing daily life, otherwise it will be really difficult to write your emotional line later. (Although it is not confirmed that it is a harem novel, but based on the character of the protagonist and the system, there is a high probability that it is a harem novel. If it is pure love, then it is my preconception.) I don't mean much criticism, I just hope that the author can write better. This is the second well-written comprehensive comic I have read on Tomato. Although the first one was Eunuch, I really hope the author can write several million words. This is also the first novel I am following on Tomato. Generally speaking, this kind of comprehensive comic is less than 300,000 words. I don't want to read this one. I have followed it from more than 100,000 words to almost 500,000 words now. I just hope the author can work harder and write better.

Invincible, a comprehensive comic, the characters and plots are not jerky, unlike some novels that forcefully introduce many characters, and then have a special angle, avoiding the common charm trend, useless people pretending to be b-flow, the setting is also novel, it is interesting to read, don't give up

Well, it's very interesting. I rarely see daily stories anyway, and it's this kind of thing that I'm very interested in. The setting of the male protagonist is finally not the stereotype of handsome. If the male protagonist is really handsome, then I don't want to read it, because daily, and then still very If it's handsome, I've read it too many times. In fact, this one looks really good now. I'm waiting for the update anyway. And this one, even the cover of this book is quite impressive. I can basically remember it at a glance. Author, you wrote it very well. Come on.

The golden finger at the beginning was a little too self-indulgent, which made me almost give up, thinking it was some kind of world view where fighting was exciting. But later on my writing skills improved and my direction for writing daily articles was settled, which made me feel much more comfortable. Moreover, the speed of driving was very suitable and would not make people feel awkward. It doesn't matter if the updates are slow, since they are just reading books for free anyway, as long as the quality is good. I see that many people are urging people to lose weight, but I think the fat setting is quite good. To be honest, there are too many handsome boy settings, which leads to serious homogeneity. The author has the writing skills to attract girls purely by relying on the charm of the male protagonist. Anyway, come on.

A good daily comic. I found this gold in Tomato, a place full of Long Aotian crematorium. There are stories and routines. At this time, the existence of the system is also dispensable. At most, it can be regarded as the key to promote the plot. (Except when drawing a series of books) The male protagonist is so deliberate that he comes out of instinct (it's hard to doubt that it's not because of our pure and pure [thinking]), which can be regarded as fun and barely acceptable. Since the starting point of the male protagonist is a negative number, it is easy for the protagonist's changes to receive positive feedback. The male protagonist feels that the lower limit is lower than that of the White Emperor next door. After all, one is started from scratch and the other is shipped from the factory at full level. Fortunately, there are systems and books that serve as deities to speed up growth and advance the plot. Everyone likes Sese.

Nice. Hope you don't lose weight. In other words, losing weight is just for health. Don't say that losing weight will make you look handsome. There is a sense of difference from other works

The daily writing is very good, although the addition of Jashi in the middle almost made me quit, thinking that it was purely daily life and at most I would use armor to save the beauty, but the daily life afterward still has the same taste. I have to say that the online novels are still brave enough to write fat protagonists. The only thing that makes me like is the protagonist Fatty who is a fake hero. Although this book must lose weight, it loses a buying point for me. There are really few special settings. For me, an old bookworm, this kind of setting is really attractive to me when it is written like this. But it is also understandable, after all, it is too obsessed with shaping the protagonist's character and catering to public tastes.

It's quite good-looking, the plot is very interesting and humorous, and the writing is also very good, and it's not like other variety comics where the male protagonist just relies on his good looks to impress the female protagonist and then win the book at the speed of light. The male protagonist in this book is mediocre in appearance and even said that he has not succeeded in losing weight yet, so he is below average. Then the male protagonist relies on daily interaction and of course the life skills rewarded by the system to build a relationship between the two female protagonists, so the pace is slower. Although like most harem novels, you travel through time and rely on system rewards (no appearance) to continuously build relationships with the heroines, and it is not like other comprehensive comics that give the protagonist powerful abilities to write some battles and the responsibility of saving the world. The pace of this book is slow and it is all about daily life, but I personally enjoy this kind of slow-paced story. I hope to keep reading more and speed up the progress of weight loss and relationship. It's too watery, it's too watery, it's too watery, and it's getting more and more flat now. I write a thousand words a day, and it's all watery. The pace is very slow, give up, give up.

When I added it to the bookshelf, the cover still featured the male protagonist from the show Hypnosis, but I never read it. I thought it was for driving, so I was going to watch it sometime. Then one day when I was clearing my inventory, I accidentally deleted it, and then I saw it in my anime book list and clicked in again. I was still thinking about when to drive, but ended up not being able to leave. I don't know much about character design, so I'm not very sure whether there are broken characters or not. However, since there is no suppression of other characters to mess around for the sake of the protagonist, I feel that it is already a t0 of a comic book fan. The character design of the protagonist is also quite likable. Although there are various jokes in the heart, his performance is very normal, unlike other messy descriptions of so-called people with pure hearts and no suspense in their eyes. This book is normal and always ordinary people. Whoever sees a beautiful girl and doesn't think twice about looking at her, but can restrain herself, is a normal person, and only then is she flesh and blood.

Kneeling before the Buddha for thousands of years, the Buddha said you are really free. Kneel before the devil for a few days, and the devil will defecate I'll take you to the ninth level. Angel: "I am kind." Devil: "I am true." Angel: "I will give up the one I love for the sake of the people in the world." People. "Devil: "I will give up the world for the one I love very much. Everyone. "Angels" sacrifice themselves for others and last forever. "Devil:" People don't For his own sake, he will be destroyed by heaven and earth. "I don't know Lingshan Fighting Buddha, I only know Qi Tianmei" Monkey King. In the end, it was Lu Bu who poked the sky, and in one step, he became possessed and left Zhang Liang after ten thousand years. After putting down the book, I still don't understand that in my children's hearts, Bodhidharma has finally become a Buddha and there is nothing in this life. There is no love for me. I am Zhaojun in the end. The frost has fallen, and I miss you without a trace. The sorrow is always a success. The emperor is wearing armor, he is also a Shura and a demon. In the end, Wukong abandons the demon and forgets Zi. Xia became a Buddha. She knelt before the Buddha for three thousand years, but she never felt pity for me and abandoned the Buddha. The only reason to become a demon is to live a life of freedom and happiness. It doesn't matter if you are a Buddha or a demon. All in one moment, Sanqing only needs clay body, but Buddha wants gold. Cross. In troubled times, Buddhism does not ask questions, but the old Taoist carries a sword to save the common people. Buddhism in its prosperous age Facing the incense, the Taoist gate retreats into the mountains and forests. I have knelt before the Buddha for thousands of years, and the Buddha But he said I was really free. I knelt for a second before being possessed by the devil, and the devil led me to kill Jiuzhong Days. Dear author, you are so good-looking and temperamental, Such a fish and a duck, the beauty of the country, the white teeth and red lips, the frown and make-up, Like water hibiscus, graceful and colorful, national beauty and heavenly fragrance, petite and exquisite, exquisite A beautiful lady, with picturesque eyebrows, clear eyebrows and beautiful eyes, as beautiful as a crown jade, with a beautiful face The appearance of the moon, the charming face, the bright teeth, the charm, the beauty of the city, The beautiful eyebrows are as beautiful as flowers and jade, and the eyes are as sharp as water. They stand tall and graceful, with a fairy posture Can you give me more information about Xiaojiabiyu and Xiaojiabiyu?

It's well written and quite interesting, but I haven't eaten a single bite of it in more than 400 chapters [smile], although it's only been less than a month since the plot began with more than 400 chapters. It's so vegetarian, when will it be open to porn and when will it be changed back?

The personality of each character does not deviate from the original work. It feels like they are in the same anime. In short, it is beautiful! ! ! Love watching! ! ! And the author please update me quickly [crying][crying] Beautiful! But water, water, water, water, water

I have read about 470 chapters. Overall, it is a good book, and the details are handled and described well. The fact that it is not too dependent on the system is also a good review. However, I really can't stand the situation of not adding charm points all the time, so that around chapter 470, when the male protagonist has clicked nine points on each of the other four attribute points (which is equivalent to 36 attribute points that can be allocated), there is still no charm value at all. Do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to watch it? Author, I have been looking forward to clicking the charm points since the beginning of the setting of attribute points. Except for the male protagonist who took the initiative to add a little at the beginning, I basically held it in for about 400 chapters. I looked forward to every chapter. Even if I click a little charm points, I feel happy, and my tone is smooth. Knowing that the subsequent 36-point allocation operation was indeed very uncomfortable, I felt aggrieved. The breath I had been holding in my heart for the 400 chapters finally disappeared, and I no longer had the motivation to continue reading. I know that the author probably still wants to adapt to the title, and at the same time, there is some foreshadowing (that is, reducing the charm to normal human body size will reach 5, and forcibly adding more points will damage the body). But! By more than 300 chapters, the male protagonist's attributes other than charm have basically reached the level of a perfect human being. In your description of the swimming pool, you also said that his figure is like that of an ancient general, with fat and muscles. So I think adding more charm at this time will not harm the body, and when the body has become fat and muscular, why does it still have to be set to have a face or a fat one? Do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to look at the facial description lying on my legs behind me? Overall, the book is indeed a good book. This is also my first time to write a book review. I hope that when the author opens a new book in the future, he can extend the timeline appropriately. More than 400 chapters that were only over a month old can be written over half a year, so that the physical changes brought about by the improvement in attribute points can be fully explained. Please be sure to keep adding points roughly evenly in the future, otherwise it will really kill me, a patient with obsessive-compulsive disorder, and it will really tell me that I have a heart attack. I hope the author will publish more books on this type of subject when he gets older, come on!

How can I put it, it's really a dull daily life (it's just too dull, don't even think about Kaguya, the protagonist can't reach it, after all, there is silver), young people are really motivated, I have a mature idea about recruiting girls, what do you think of Sayuri? I think it's T0 level among passers-by. To be honest, this Sayuri kind of really pokes me xp

Can you speed up the weight loss and reward efficiency? When can I recommend one? Although I also like this kind of warm and slow pace, it would be better to speed it up a little.

I want to see blood flowing into a river, and in the end Yukino holds the protagonist's head and floats away in a boat

It's good to read, right? Even though you've already written more than 200 chapters, I don't feel like anything has happened. You can read ten chapters at a time. Of course, it's really good to write like this, so what I mean is that if you can update it 5 times a day, I can give this book a status as a god.

I noticed this book very early, and was dissuaded once by the cover (￣⊥￣), and once by the title -_-||. I searched a lot of comics and found that there were not many that I could read, so I opened this book. [I almost cried] I finally found a comic novel that doesn't have an anime character with a crazy occ name. It's not easy.

It's pretty good. None of the characters have OOC. I thought it would be a romance novel like the one in the manga, but I didn't expect it to be different. It's a daily fresh variety of comics. I can clearly feel that the protagonist is changing himself, and there is a system but not relying on the system. If the congenital conditions are not good, then you have to work hard. I have a good impression of this. The protagonist has not lost weight, but his own ability and personality have made Yukino's favor increase. I can't even think about losing weight~ I hope to see it soon, author, come on!

Wow, it's super pretty! The characters are really lovable (except for the female brat, I still don't like this kind of character very much), and they are inexplicably ignited. The Fat Man's Counterattack! Also, are you making parent-child rice bowls or something? [Laughs crookedly] I can't get naked anymore after seeing Chapter 702. Can anyone who has finished reading tell me whether I will succeed in losing weight or whether I will eat more [face covering] From what I can read, this book is just a well-polished daily account. However, you can't just keep your daily articles just daily. No matter how plain the article is, it must have explosive points and a climax, especially for such a long novel. Otherwise, no matter how well-polished the account is, it will just be a daily account! I used to be able to read two chapters a day, but after a while, I lost the courage to read through so many running accounts [face covering]