My Female Villains Are Starting to Fight

I only read the beginning and commented first to express my encouragement and support. What I feel best at the moment is the rhythm of daily life. It's quite comfortable. I don't think it's hydrology. Hydrology is hard to see. As for the setting, it is actually quite novel, but I think it is a bit difficult to control. After all, the combination of several generations of this kind of thing will test the outline and the author's ability to wrap things up. I would like to mention that Jiang Yanjiao's breakup at the beginning does not need to be written in too much detail, so that it can be changed later. I hope the author can work hard and learn from experience even if it collapses. I feel that if this subject is well written, it will be the only one in the yandere Shura field. I've almost finished chasing it, and I've finished reading the Fa incident. I looked back and thought about it, and found that there are some things that I can't explain. I would like to express my personal opinion: 1. This book is different from other yandere novels. There is a line of curing Jue, which can advance the plot. It has a better look and feel than other books that constantly disturb the Shura field every day. 2. Personally, I think the biggest problem is that the yandere aspect is not highlighted. After all, it is the xp of yandere. If it is just the boss Shura field, there will be no problem with the characterization, but it is a yandere. No matter what, it must have a yandere plot, right? [Face cover] [Face cover] Fa and Ellie knew it was Shen Xu, why couldn't they find a way to tie him up? Can he still be allowed to take officials on a trip? I don't believe their energy can't do it well. And Fa, who is more difficult to understand, is actually satisfied after spending one night together. Maybe it's the character of the character, so she is not considered a yandere, at most she is a woman who misses her deeply [face covering] [face covering] At the very least, write some details. What are you looking at in a yandere article without looking at details? It's not like Liu Bei's kind of details. You can't write about face, expression, etc. I think the scale is too big to be scary. Finally, let me add some fuel to the author [eating melon] I've almost finished watching it, but I don't know why it's getting boring the more I watch it. I think the plot is a bit abrupt. I won't say whether it makes sense or not. New characters are popping up every day, and the old yandere is more tolerable. I feel that those are not yanderes, but at most they are women who are unwilling to be lonely. They don't have any sense of yandere, they are too lazy to fight for anything, and they are ignored by the protagonist after one or two sentences. Is this a yandere? ! I think the author should look at other people's yandere... This book gave me the impression that it was a weird harem novel, so just forget about yandere [face covering] The character of yandere is too flat, she's the kind of character that I don't care if you write her to death in the next chapter.

It can be seen from the comment area that this book is a relatively good book. Even those who gave low scores took longer to read the book compared with other books. This book is one with heavy patches in the later stage. From the front part, I can see that there are many subtle patches. If you find any technical terminology that you don't understand in this book, you should read the popular science in the comment area. I think it will be helpful in understanding and analyzing the plot in the middle and later stages. The author's portrayal of the characters in the early stage is very good, often describing the character's personality, temperament, and psychology in just a few sentences. Although sometimes it feels that some descriptions are too repetitive and leave a serious stereotype impression, which is not particularly good for the later plot development, but these more stereotyped impressions can better retain readers in the early stage (I hope the author will pay attention to it) Finally, let's talk about the protagonist. I briefly summarized some of the content I read and the later understanding of the people in the book review: the protagonist is probably the kind of gentle and ruthless, with meticulous behavior (which will not make readers feel out of touch). Since this book describes the later stages of character development, it can be patched very quickly (similar to Conan). The protagonist can basically be understood as an enhanced version of Kaitou Kidd. In general, the author of this book is more thoughtful than most of Tomato's books.

The writing is very good. It describes what kind of level one is and what kind of opponent he is. Unlike other yandere novels, where the strong female protagonist and the cowardly male protagonist can figure out how they can get together and have a harem.

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In this book, you can see the heroines fighting each other passionately for the male protagonist, and the anger is directly amplified by the evil god's true form. This is the real Shura field, dip the beans in it, it's great! The protagonist is not someone who has been in love for nine lifetimes and has been a lunatic for ten lifetimes. He is also responsible, actively improving his strength, and operates steadily to achieve a perfect outcome. The protagonist also has more subjective initiative. The system only gives tasks, and the whole process is planned and completed by the protagonist. The ninth generation of cultivating the villain is the limit of the system's tasks, not the limit of the protagonist. The Tenth Generation is still cultivating new heroines

Objectively speaking, if you are the kind of person who doesn't want to watch female videos every day with romance and disgust, but also doesn't want to watch male videos every day with no logic and emotions, then you can read this Cthulhu urban fantasy rebirth system harem stallion novel in which a woman fights for a man.

I think this book is really great! The story was full of ups and downs and gripping, and it completely captivated me. I couldn't help but finish reading it in one night. I really look forward to the author publishing a new book soon!

First, give a five-star book. The details are very specific. This is good. Then, let's be honest. A little bit, but not much. As long as you can avoid inappropriate behavior in inappropriate situations and maintain a clean relationship. (It's not just about physical relationships. Touching these will not happen. After all, the heroine is not a normal person, and her thinking and reaction will definitely be much faster and she can react; I have commented on inappropriate occasions in the book, such as the swimming pool) It is not good to introduce too many skills hh, and the awareness of lightning protection needs to be improved. Contact is not only tactile, but also visual. Generally speaking, specific settings like this are placed in the opening chapter rather than in the main text. In the main text, at most, it just states what is different from the original one.

I just read it and took a brief look at it. This kind of crazy, urban type is very rare. Sometimes I want to go crazy, and I also thought about writing this kind of thing. I didn't expect that when I suddenly saw this book, it allowed me to vent my urge to go crazy. I will come back when I read more. To be honest, I finished reading it in a daze. It was crazy, but it also felt very good. It released me. I felt too little. It is unique for this kind of subject. I think the score is really low. How can I put it? Sometimes there is no outline and improvisation may be more effective.

I feel good after reading chapter sixty-six so far. I feel that the subsequent plot will be very exciting. Anyway, I think the rating is a bit low. Also, I need to change the 1.5-Meter small bed to 1.8-Meter. Otherwise, I will not be able to sleep and bring it in [Chigua]

It's a very good book. Don't worry about age. You can just think of him as a Western Cthulhu alien world. Except for the subjective initiative of Lao Xu (the male protagonist), almost everything else is good. It's just that the name is a bit hard to remember, and the increase in combat power is more terrifying. As a result, the girl who appeared first has no way to survive in front of the new person. Shui (shui) has become the most important way to comfort [laughter] Check the reading time

I have read dozens of chapters. The setting is very novel and interesting. It is worth reading. The character of the protagonist is also very normal, not childish or extreme. I just feel that it is difficult for the author to write ten villains well. There is also the issue of timeline. The ninth one is eight years ago. I hope the author can take good care of it [face covering]

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style and outline will be tested. The detailed and vivid descriptions of each character should not make people bored. The first part is very good, but I don't know if it will fall apart later. Many women mainly have degrees, especially in this kind of article. There can't be many, and there can't be only one.

It's very good, especially the most important thing is the author's knowledge reserve, which is very rich in various subjects and very realistic.

Hahahahahaha, they are all knives, knives! So sweet, hahahahahaha, I like it, hehe, hahahahahaha, what a joy, knife, I like knife

The author has a strong petty bourgeois sentiment, and it is obvious that he wrote the article out of hobby like me [Cool][Cool]

I originally read it as an ordinary harem novel, but after reading it, I found that the scale is quite large, and the unexpected impression is very good. The relationship between the branch plots and the various harems in this book is much more interesting than the main plot, and the main plot is not seriously polished. The beginning was pretty good, but the ending was a bit too rushed, but overall it was okay.

Yes, the plot is developing in a good direction. Recently, I always recommend articles about regret and not forgiving. After reading some, the plot is a headache. I want to read a simple article with a heroine and a good ending. If I change my mind, I am basically satisfied with this. The reverse strategy of the heroine is also very interesting and very interesting.

The writing is very good. The protagonist's IQ is basically online. What's rare is that the male protagonist's brother actually has brains. [Crying] I can't read enough. Quick update.

Let me comment first. What you wrote is very well organized and clear, and the plot is also very coherent. But there is one thing that cannot be said about this outline. It cannot be said to be exactly the same as a certain book. It is almost exactly the same as that of the book Nine Worlds of Reincarnation. [Smile][smile][smirk]

There is a shortage of books to read, and there are relatively few books of this type. [Eat melon] Poisoned. [Vomit]. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel.

The book is so good, why are the reviews so low? I originally thought it would be difficult, but I didn't expect it to be quite good.

The story is wonderful, the female protagonist is both yandere, I'm kidding, the male protagonist has a temperament,

This is pretty good, I hope it's not too tight. Also, let me count the heroines, kidney diggers, female tyrants, lionesses, and Kuro Amaterasu that I saw. Please add others.

Lots of laughs, very good-looking. If it doesn't look good, come and kill me.

It is rich in emotion, the characters are perfectly created, the story line is not monotonous, and there are no major flaws so far. Overall, it is a very good work.

It's okay, it suits my taste, but like many people said, I feel a little self-disciplined. The appearance and body of each life are different. Anyway, when I read it, I pretended that I didn't write this. If I notice it, I will feel uncomfortable.

The setting is quite interesting, the content is good in the early stage, but later on it becomes a bit stylized and not so brilliant. I admire the author's knowledge of luxury goods, many of whom have never heard of it. The content is quite interesting. There are just too many women, so it's a bit unclear who's behind. Come on, author! The next article will be more exciting.

It's pretty good. Some unreasonable places don't make people feel uncomfortable. I don't know why the rating is so low. The protagonist seems a little too incompetent, and his combat power is getting worse and worse.

The story is pretty good. But every time I look at the attributes, the attribute description of each article takes up half of the article. I feel that the story drags on a bit slowly.