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It is a book that suits my taste. It is suitable for people with high drug tolerance [face covering] (about 85 chapters). The first chapter has a slow narrative pace, with a lot of filling in the world view and foreshadowing. The second chapter speeds up the pace accordingly. It promotes the plot while avoiding a lot of easily repetitive academy plots. It is detailed and appropriate (I was very surprised when I realized such a decisive narrative method at the time). In the second chapter, you can clearly feel the changes in the characters, making some of the main characters instantly more three-dimensional (it feels like your own children have grown up), and the viewing experience is much more comfortable than in the first chapter. Generally speaking, when reading this novel, it feels like watching their story vertically from the long river of time from the perspective of a bystander. The plain narrative makes people feel comfortable, and the occasional passion makes people feel happy~ It can be said to be a rare and good book. I'm really looking forward to the next story, best wishes, author. [Laughing]

This is the only book that I feel I can't finish [face covering] Each chapter has more than 10,000 words, and I still have more than 200 chapters that I haven't read yet. OK! Top! [Cover face] The characterizations are particularly delicate, vivid and charming, especially Yu'er! [Love] I especially want to see the scene where Yu'er meets other people after Mido's rule of passive silence is removed. It's interesting to think about it! [Laughing evilly] I want to ask... Are there any knives in the later stages? [Laughing awkwardly] Will there be a happy ending for Lain and the others? [Crying] So far, we have seen that Ellie brought Lain, Yu'er and others to the Luosheng Empire and went south to the sea. There are more than 200 chapters left. I will work hard and continue reading! [Laugh]

Nice. I'm writing a story well. It feels like reading some stories in paper books when I was a child. I think the part separated from the weir is great. The protagonist is like a bystander? As he said. Just a passerby in my life. Watch first. Come on author Jessica's part. God is with you. But he said he couldn't stop it. It feels weird. In the end, byd succeeded. Just speaking from personal preference. I can't accept Jessica's ending.

The writing is very nice. Keep up the good work. [Love] Some of Rhine's actions were too indulgent. The same goes for Cuculin. He deceived Princess Zhou and almost had a bad incident happen. The protagonist didn't react at all? Brother, the protagonist is physically cold, not mentally cold.

After reading it, I can just say a few words. The novel has a good feel to it, but the plot in the early stages has a lot of poisonous points. If you want to perfect Rhine's character, there is no need to sacrifice the character that looks good to readers (I'm talking about Xiao Linyu). Even Jessica can accept it, but the plot between Xiao Linyu and Lai Yin is really poisonous (for me) There is also too little plot in the later college plot of Youcha (the real protagonist). Although the plot of Rhine is okay, the amount of interaction between Rhine and Youcha is obviously much less. I don't know if the author wants to change Rian's character in this part of the plot (well, Rhine's transformation is still worthy of praise. It is not that abrupt but it feels like damn it is still damnable) If you can resist the early poisonous points and survive until the end, overall this novel is highly recommended.

It's a very good otherworld novel. The overall pace is slow, so all aspects are well-shaped, and there will be more sense of life. It may also be that the books I read are generally longer, but I like this kind of slow pace. The characters have their own distinct positions, especially the various aspects of the character formation and growth of Rhine and Kukum. The original "evil boy" and "eldest lady" gradually become a qualified and responsible person. Rhine was indeed evil at first, but from his "education" to Xiu En, we can understand the special environment in which he grew up, as well as some indulgence and isolation. Well, he will still be very poor later. Although Youcha and Dorn have big goals, and the world as a whole is quite miserable, Youcha has indeed gradually changed the surroundings, and the various daily thoughts and people are still quite enjoyable. This is a group portrait article full of life, education and changes. I have read the latest version in two weeks. I like it very much. I can't get enough. Come on, the author [crazy]

It's a very good book, but a few poisonous points are too poisonous. It's not that the plot is unreasonable, but it doesn't fit the readers' perception. And I'm not the only one who thinks it. Everyone in the comment section basically agrees with me [laughing]. Apart from these few poisonous points, this book is still very good. A score of 9 or above is enough to prove that this book is still very good. I hope the author can work hard.

Logical group portraits, different characters have different characteristics, unlike some novels that cater to the protagonist's personality. Characters determine their character because of their experiences, act because of their character, and act because of their actions to promote the plot. Daily life is the finishing touch, giving flesh and blood to the characters. The characters' thoughts and personalities are seen from the behavioral plot, rather than abrupt narration. I think this can be done with re0 and Game of Thrones. The timeline has complete historical legends, a clear worldview, no combat or economic collapse, and diverse influences from forces. It will not be as outrageous as the forces in some popular works. No one knows about the forces before they come out, and everyone knows about them once they come out. There is no God's perspective on the characters, and different characters have different opinions. Unlike some articles, everyone knows it once the narration says it. The plot has overt and hidden lines, and the character lines of different characters. The characters will collapse and become stronger due to the changes they experience. There are no nameless characters with experience in the article. Characters who had conflicts in the early stage also socialize and are good friends with some of the main characters. In reality, there is no clear supporting role and everyone is the protagonist. For example, the bread store manager will appear a second time and be described again. The bread store manager has a nephew who is a believer of the Guanghuang (or Guangming) cult, and then enters the cult from that believer. Then the saint behind the cult is an ordinary person at the beginning, and has a close connection with the protagonist group. Then the old nun of the Guangming (still Brilliant) Cult met the priest and influenced the priest. The priest later traveled around the world and influenced many people... Like complex relationships in real life. For example, who is my best friend, but he made a friend when he went out to play and influenced his new friend's life to become better, but I didn't know his new friend. Then his new friend's cousin was my classmate, and then I became a passerby with a name, but my best friend would change others because of me. Such a plot. A true group portrait. It has the same flavor as Jobless Reincarnation, but has more characters, more main plots, and is full of hidden plots. At the same time, the foreshadowing is long-term and the timeline is good. As time advances, the story situations of a bunch of characters in the world are changing, affecting the protagonist's adventure. The article will not suddenly pop up a new powerful figure in order to advance the plot, and the plot will advance in a traceable manner. Anyway, the author Megumin is cute

The world view is great, and the characterization is even better. The first part is dark in style, while the second part is more relaxed and cheerful. It is recommended to watch the second part directly (those with poor receptivity should not be brave and watch the first part). The first part is currently being read.

It's a very interesting boy-girl fantasy story. The boy-girl part is very good. Most boy-girl stories are limited by various reasons and don't explain. This one is very good. I don't care at all. Others are normal.

After reading the latest chapter, I finally dared to post a book review ps: This is the first time I have read a 2 million word book non-stop on Tomato Let me talk about the whole thing first, it is wonderful, really wonderful. The main line is very clear, and the small daily details mixed in are also very warm. It is a very good group portrait article. Next, let's talk about the shortcomings. The nearly 600,000 words at the beginning are really poisonous, although it's fun to watch Tea Kill Rhine. The plot does not have the sense of depression that the author may want to create, but only anger. The conversation with Mido and Youcha's occasional cuteness seem to be the only mediators. I simply can't imagine that the students at the Magic Academy in the capital of the Rashomon Empire would be so bad. It's similar to the local talents of a school in the capital of a country (analogous to the noble children in the Rashou Empire) doing things that can only be done in professional schools. I couldn't believe it when I saw Lin Yu being bullied. The sole heir of one country was almost raped in another country. All I feel is anger and hopelessness for the next generation of this country. Of course, it was really hopeless in the end. If you survive until the chapter where Rhine begins to change, then you can witness the transformation of a bad playboy, the change of a spoiled slave girl, you can witness a slave who has lost his human rights find his own hope in life, and you can see the inheritance of a country. The performance of a person acting alone, you can see the actions of a black cat who is looked down upon by everyone to resist fate, and you can see the powerlessness of a god who is almost omniscient but not omnipotent... This is the wonderful thing about this book. Everyone, even passers-by, is well portrayed, and there are many knives, so I won't go into details. At the end of the first volume, 1.95 Million words of foreshadowing led to the final explosion. Rhine also faded away from his past and ushered in a new chapter. Looking forward to Huihui's new story~

I personally think this is a good-looking book and the update frequency of 10,000 words per day is really touching. I like the protagonist Yu'er has tea very much but Rhine is really annoying. I understand that the author is trying to write Rhine in a dark tone, but some of Rhine's plots in the book are really uncomfortable (personally I feel that this will dissuade some people). I feel that Rhine is already dark enough. I hope the author writes less plots like this and more about Yu'er. After all, Yu'er is really cute. I like it very much [send heart][send heart][send heart][like]

There is nothing good to say about the book. It has the foundation to be animated (hopefully). There is nothing strange about a worldview that is self-justifying. The main line is advancing steadily. The characters are distinct, and after dozens of chapters or even a long main line, people can immediately remember who these characters are. Although the plot is slow but the content is substantial. The ability to write about the dark history of the protagonist in such a way that the reader resonates with "this guy is really angry with both humans and gods" is also really a great writing skill. Each chapter is ten thousand words long. It takes a patient person to watch it. And if you keep reading, you will find a treasure book. ————25.7.10 Leave claws. Urgent update, not enough. I can do anything!

Interesting novel, interesting author. The word count of more than 100 w is enough to accompany you for a while. The introduction at the beginning may make you mistakenly think that it is about men and women, but in fact it is not the case. Read on patiently, and you will probably understand it after 10 chapters. The daily dialogue between the male protagonist and the goddess makes the story unfold more fully without seeming boring. The male protagonist looks cold on the surface, but in fact he is often complained about by the goddess. There is a touch of gentleness in her dealings with others, she is cold and has a hidden soft fragrance, which perfectly interprets the identity of a maid. For more details, please appreciate it yourself. I will add more comments later, but this is my initial impression. There is no doubt that it is a novel worth reading. Hmm, this is a slow-burn novel! I have delayed planning to do another follow-up review for a long time, and I am definitely not too lazy or anything (hehe. To get back to the subject, many people may give up because of the early Rhine plot, maybe this is a disguised screening. Only through a bumpy road full of thorns can I appreciate this hard-won beauty, or maybe this is my wishful thinking. The following involves plot discussion, please watch with caution: Rhine is still maturing. The Demon King Squad (the main force of the labyrinth) has begun to appear on the world stage. I don't know what kind of plot will unfold after Rhine finds his big brother. The plots related to angels, other worlds, and gods are all foreshadowed. I'm even more looking forward to the adventure in the other world. The plot of developing a mobile game and attracting countless demons to compete for rankings is quite annoying to me. There are more horse-drawn carriages and other naughty mini-games to come! Mother Rhine and the mystery of black magic, let's have some more plots related to Mido! Of course I prefer the interaction between tea and Mido. Also, I'd like to remind you to update Megumi~

If you can't stand it, you can jump to chapter 80 without much impact. It's a bit like a Western fantasy, but closer to the original. The writing is getting better and better, and the characters are becoming more and more three-dimensional. It is not recommended to jump from 10 to 20 chapters. Among the first 80 chapters, the mission chapter is a good buffer. It is recommended to read it appropriately after 40 to 80 chapters. The writing is indeed getting better and better, the logic is clear, but there is a sense of dissonance. Personally, I feel that the initial preparation is slow. I have just read the 100th chapter. The characters are very profound and have been repeatedly strengthened. The foreshadowing is not bad. I feel that the plot is suitable for readers who like behind the scenes and contrasting characters. Long articles require patience. I don't quite understand the logic of the story

Not too much, just good-looking👀, light (the plot is a bit exciting, but it's more about life, so it's light), and the characters' personalities are very three-dimensional. It can be said that this is the best Western fantasy book I have ever read, and it has improved my aesthetics a lot. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ The plot is a bit slow to pick up, but overall, the plot has more and better foreshadowing, the world view is more complete, and this article is somewhat like a group portrait article, so the slow start is normal. Y(^_^)Y The author's writing style is quite in line with my taste (humorous, concrete and vivid, and good at characterization), and the settings of characters and items are also very interesting and creative. The author will explain clearly and unambiguously during the introduction. Don't mention it, the author is also very interesting (*´I`*) This book is still worth reading. No one is perfect (the character's personality is quite unique), but there will be big differences later on. I hope you can bear with me ˃ʍ˂

Generally speaking, it is a very high-quality long fantasy group portrait novel by Tomato. The poisonous points in the early stage and the advantages in the later stage are very obvious (similar to the comprehensive comic of Xiling Empire and the following content) The main problems of this book are basically that the first volume (40~80) may be to introduce a large number of characters and background supplements, and it was written too early (referring to 2021), resulting in many problems in the plot (toxic points that usually appeared in novels five years ago). The writing style is relatively immature, and the characters are not very full. If you can't stand the poisonous points, you can skip chapters 40 to 80 to avoid missing too many characters. The content of the second volume makes the world view more expanded, and I feel that the author's writing style has been significantly improved, and the growth of the characters is also very obvious (from the beginning, I almost entered some plots of the moderator to a serious adventure story), with a more complex image, and then our protagonist Yu'er Youcha also participated in the world more deeply from the perspective of a bystander and guide at the beginning, and the plot did not appear to be too artificial. There are only brain-dead characters (content in the first volume). The "villains" encountered in the adventure also have a relatively full image and ending. Youcha can basically be regarded as an invincible style (the incompetent husband in the first volume is a bit heavy). The background of the novel is relatively heavy but the interaction with the goddess dilutes this (Wazuma). In short, it is a good ending. The maze master and the devil will reshape the world. I look forward to the follow-up content. The fact that the content conceived by the author four or five years ago is still accepted by people now shows that the plot is relatively excellent. The content of the first volume was too intense, but the level of the second volume has improved significantly. It can be seen that the protagonist is changing the world, and the world is also affecting the protagonist. It is a very good novel, come on Magic ¯꒳¯

It's very interesting. The main character, plot and author are both interesting. I originally thought that the only shortcoming was that there are too few, but I found out that one chapter has 10,000 words (

I have read Chapter 24 so far. I basically read it in one go. I haven't read it for a long time... It's such an interesting article for me. I feel that the lightness in light novels is completely reflected. When I read the article, I have a lazy and fluffy feeling... It's like the afternoon sunshine in spring, the fluffy quilt, the southern sun just finished drying. Fang Xia Tian's shady alley (very suitable for taking a nap). Only two authors have written about this feeling. The first one is the shakuma fireflies at a certain point, and the second one is you. As for the plot, some people think it is too slow. Well, I don't think there is a rush. After all, the author said there are 10 million words, so take your time. A very excellent work! Thank you for writing it! Don't cut it! It's still good-looking, a little bit toxic, but it doesn't affect it, just keep watching it

Just like the author said before, Rhine's evil deeds are fully described, which is really uncomfortable to watch. This is not because the writing is bad. On the contrary, it is because the bad characters are written so well that people with normal values ​​feel uncomfortable. But fortunately, the protagonist is Yucha, a strong, sassy and beautiful male and female servant. She has established a stable position. She has a clear positioning of herself, which makes people want to continue to get to know her (yes, it is "her"🤤). The plot line is very clear, and you can catch the key points at once. And it's really interesting to see Rhine wanting to attack Youcha but being afraid of her strength, so she has no choice but to fantasize in her mind. (I'm going to mention *** World Travels here. That book made my head grow bigger.) I don't know how much more this book can be, but I'm just looking at the plot in the early stages, so it should be at least 5 million. I heard from the author that it costs tens of millions. If it really comes to that, I will unilaterally declare that Megumin is the cutest Explosion Magician😋.

Like it! The conversation between Yu'er and Mido is so interesting. Although some of the jokes are a little hard to understand (Goose's brain was eaten), the two of them are so cute, and they are so cute together! I hope the author can persevere and I will keep following up [laughs]

It's a very good book, with the subject matter and style that I dream of. The only shortcoming of reading it so far is that the author wrote a very poisonous plot in order to make people hate Rhine. Although it did succeed in making me hate Rhine very much, it was really uncomfortable to read, especially chapters 40 to 46. I endured it until I finished reading it and successfully transformed into King Akaishi. In order to deepen the reader's dislike of Rhine, these chapters completely destroyed the character. Sure enough, it was better to skip this section. However, I have become fearless after transforming into King Akaashi. This book is completely worth the few bites I took. I am really looking forward to the turning point after chapter 80. The early stage was so depressing that I was addicted to watching it. I can't even imagine how good it will be after chapter 80. Summary: Poisonous points but flaws do not cover up the virtues Just like putting a few long-expired cookies on a sweet cake, although it destroys the beauty of the cake, it does not affect the taste of the cake. After removing (skipping), the cake will still be delicious. If you don't want to remove it, the discomfort after eating will be covered by the delicious taste of the cake after a while.

The subject matter is rare and very novel. The character and body image of the protagonist is also very well designed, but the description of the supporting characters is really not very good. Sometimes the description of the supporting characters is very frustrating, and the fighting is a bit vague, but the author is very interesting and a new author. Please support it.

The plot is very good and I like it very much. There is no impetuous feeling like other novels. I feel that the author is dedicated to writing the story well. It is great and beautiful! ! ! ! While it is slow to warm up, the transitional plot is not boring at all. The world view is very complete, and Megumin has very good control over the direction of the plot, which is really rare in a long novel, especially in Tomato. You can see Megumin's intentions in this book. Ten thousand words a day is so powerful! Even now, 60,000 words a day is very powerful. Megumin is able to work so hard on writing novels, so she must be very fond of and proud of her own works. It is really exciting to watch a complete story unfold in your own hands and watch the experiences of the characters in the book. Reading this book "The Character of a Maid and a Maid" always feels like reading a favorite light novel, a kind of escape from reality, and a feeling of beauty in peace. This may be the joy that novels should bring to people. It is a very, very good work. I hope more people can appreciate this book. I wish Huihui her writing will get better and better, and at Huihui's request: the author is cute! Megumin is the best! [Laugh]

It's so beautiful that I became addicted to it without even realizing it. Whether it is the character creation, transformation, or plot connection, it is very good, and the content is also very good, which makes me able to watch it. Finally, the author cheers me on and updates [angry]

Take a closer look at the author. What do you like about the main plot? What we're about to read is not a story about a maid's adventures alone. We want to see the ambiguous plot of the interaction between the maid and the master, and the emotional story of the two gradually growing up through the adventure [ANG][ANG][ANG][ANG][ANG] Isn't the main line of the story the maid and master Ryan? Why marginalize Ryan. There are two stories in the front and the back, both of which highlight conversations between other unrelated people.

The personalities and characteristics of each character are so well written, and the plot is super interesting. The long-lost thirst for knowledge has awakened our sleeping souls! How can I put it, think about the first time I read a novel that I like, yes, that's right, it's the first time I read that kind of novel that I like. I couldn't stop, I couldn't stop at all. The first time was really addictive, in various ways [laughs]

It's very good~ It's just that Ryan's portrayal was so good that it made us feel a little uncomfortable watching it, but for us it was really awesome [eating melon]

It's super nice (comments from the public), but it's a pity that I have to leave. It can be seen that this is my first time writing a book [laughter][laughter][laughter] The protagonist and goddess of this book look like characters from some young fairy tale. The "growth" of the protagonist is completely invisible, replaced by the unknown psychological trauma of the past, which is not as obvious as a potted plant on the roadside. It's as if the author feels that as long as the protagonist is constantly affected by the past, readers will find him "profound." Unfortunately, this kind of "profoundness" will only make people feel bored and tired, and they may even wonder whether "growth" and "hypocrisy" are confused. There's no logic to the existence of the villains in the book, and it's a disaster to see conflict now purely for the sake of creating conflict. If you are still hesitating whether to read this book, I advise you to take a good look. Because I only watched 1/3. And the author also mentioned that it was all foreshadowing, and it felt like it was just a piece of cake. [Blowing a kiss] After all, I was just taking quotes out of context, just take it for fun. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This is a different world! A different world must have a complete and independent system, and people must be able to see that this is a strange but real world. The early personality modification looks really comfortable. The dark world is destined to be corrected just like Rhine, a dark man. Bear the guilt and destroy the world! In the name of evil! Utopia may never come to reality, but people can never stop pursuing Utopia! If he really saves the world, I hope that Rhine can enjoy his old age with guilt and relief.