Zero Zone: Little Shark, Starting from Being a Roommate

Ahem, um, let me make it clear that when I posted this comment, he was up to chapter 55 at this time, and I also read chapter 55. So far, it's good-looking, with a bit of suspense in the early daily life. As for the second part, it feels crazy. The author's writing is very in-depth. You have to know one thing, if the Zero Zone really appears in reality, when you experience it personally, when you still naively think that you are the protagonist, You may have been deceived out of your pants by an organization. Many novels are a bit mindless, or have a cerebellum in mind just to make readers think better and read more comfortably (except of course, some big guys, who not only write about difficult topics but also satisfy readers). I think currently, if the author doesn't think about the follow-up, or his skills are not very good, there is a high probability that the ending will be unfinished or hastily completed. I can only say that writing fan fiction like this is very uncomfortable, but that doesn't mean that all of them are like this. Overall, I still hope that this book will slowly get better [almost crying]

The original plot, although it is said to be based on Zero, is not too much. At least it is better than most of the current ones. After all, it is basically the original plot now.

Support, I like Ailian very much

I give it a 4. (I skipped a lot of content in the middle) First of all, in terms of writing style, I can't say it is particularly good, but the plot is good. The realistic zzz cannot be beautiful. I can feel that the author is trying to make the protagonist a commoner (and more ordinary people's thoughts such as utilitarianism), although the protagonist cannot be ordinary (laughs). Secondly, as far as the plot is concerned, the plot mentioned above is good, in the eyes of those who can accept it. As far as the current perception is concerned, after adding the entertainment (personally) it is not acceptable (for me personally), especially the latest two chapters (signing the contract and self-introduction). It feels like the protagonist is gradually losing himself in order to "Mane" and "let Elen live a better life" (it should be described as this). Of course, this does not mean that for the sake of "Mane" and "life", it is not good to take the entertainment path, but there are some logical flaws. For example, after you sign the contract, "can things like falling in love be allowed?" This is a big question. And in terms of the overall rhythm, it's a bit confusing. But reading novels requires some brains. Therefore, I still have a wait-and-see attitude and give priority to encouragement. I gave it 4 stars. (Still somewhat subjective)

Come on, author. Like it very much

Thank you, my friend. Your characters do things I wouldn't dare do. Whether the story is finished or unfinished, it will still continue Thank you, my friend. Да хранит тебя истина.

It's good-looking, a little brain-burning, and the ending is hard to wrap your head around. It's a little bit abusive to Elaine (unhappy), but the ending is really uncomfortable. The beginning is pretty good, but a bit off-topic. Finally, if the author wants to continue writing, write it quickly, otherwise it will be really difficult for a lifetime.

Good-looking, love to watch [admiration] The style of this book is different from other JuZero novels. The background of the novel should have been changed (I don't know for sure if I haven't played JuZZero), but it is relatively real. There are no big shortcomings, it would be nice if there were more details (The number of words is so small that it's not enough to read.

The death loop in the early stage is difficult to understand in the end but it's okay. Overall it's okay. It would be better if the protagonist is more mature and has higher emotional intelligence! Come on!

The writing is quite good,,,, but the last paragraph [thinking][vomiting] The author of the idea, when I am studying in self-study, my mind is filled with images of Ailian being kidnapped and tortured. I will fight with you [angry] [angry] @

Come on, it's so well written.

Author, please come out and update. I feel so uncomfortable now [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Hehehe [laughing evilly] It's so much fun

Except for the author's bad name, there is nothing wrong with it. The character description is very successful. I finally found a book that is not a good book.

It's good-looking. Compared with other Shark Girl fanfiction, it has a hazy feeling and even a little deeper meaning. However, the author may be too eager to write sentences that we can feel after seeing it, which may be counterproductive.

It would be better if the author is very good and updates twelve times a day (it is recommended to update four times a day, although I don't treat the author as a human being)

Very beautiful, love watching it.

Knife? How about something sweet? 99 I'll step on you with my foot.

Why is the author finished?

Apart from the words being a bit greasy, the plot is pretty good.

It's so good. I thought it was a youth campus novel at first, but later I found out it wasn't, but it also appealed to my taste.

Very nice, support

Not bad, needs development!

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Got stabbed inexplicably [cover face][cover face] Not bad, except the word count is too few! ! !ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

Looking forward to the author's new book

Nice, but too short

It's really beautiful. No lie.

Shocking, still shocking

A great novella!