I Really Thought This Was a Game

It's not bad, but the plot jumps a little too fast, and some words are a bit unfamiliar to read, which makes me unable to understand. It gives me a complicated and profound integration, plus foreshadowing, which makes me confused. I hope the author will work hard and work harder [Send heart], I really like Little Octopus, can you write more about Little Octopus [shy][shy]

I have only read 11 chapters so far. The content is relatively novel, the writing is okay, and the subject matter is what I like. But there are a few problems. Of course, I am just a suggestion. After all, it is free. It is purely a suggestion. The author is free to refer to it or not. The biggest problem is the timeline and the character's perspective. It's a bit stiff when jumping to other timelines, and because the author jumps to the timeline quite a lot, from the perspective of the character, he is mentioned several times, and sometimes it is not clear who he refers to, so it feels a bit confusing. Then there are the characters' abilities. Some of them are relatively abstract and conceptual. In human terms, I can't quite understand them. I just want to introduce the abilities. Then there is no problem. I think the subject matter is very good, and the protagonist is also the kind of person who is relatively popular. I don't mean to provide writing guidance. I just give suggestions. I hope the author can accept them, but it doesn't matter if I don't accept them.

Very familiar, really familiar, this style of writing, this writing style, this fragmented narrative... Is the author writing OC...? ! When I write OCs, I like to use a lot of rhetoric and stream of consciousness... From the perspective of reading novels, maybe it's because I also like to write like this, and the author actually uses some sentences to connect the two. The chronological order is actually quite easy to understand, but it's really a bit messy. And this narrative, if the author is an OC, so I can understand a little bit about each character, but sometimes the protagonist's role is too little... And sometimes the plot seems too bland. There are too many rhetorics and streams of consciousness in the whole text, which is very difficult to read. Readers cannot read more than a hundred chapters and think deeply about the artistic conception and meaning of each sentence. However, if they don't think about it, they will not have a good reading experience. The ratio of grand sentences and vernacular text is a bit out of balance... The writing is impeccable, and the dialogue and interaction between the characters are also very flexible. There is no rigid sense of interaction in order to promote the plot, as is usual in most Tomato novels. The description of the words and deeds of the characters is very natural, and the writing style is also quite good. The world view and setting are very good! ! This is really a five-star review! The designs of buildings, characters, and skills are very fantasy! It makes people feel as if they have entered that world. The description of the monsters is very gruesome... And the description of the indescribable is very good. I feel that the author should have read the Cthulhu Mythos... The description is really good. And the setting of the protagonist, the little octopus, is really cute! The little octopus acts as a moderator. Every time my brain is about to be clogged with these gorgeous descriptions, the little octopus will save me with complaints and cuteness... And it's very cool when the protagonist is in a high position! Overall, it is (in my personal opinion) a refreshing novel with a very mythical feel, good writing, and smart characters. At the same time, it has the refreshing feel of a nurturing style and the cuteness of a pet as the main character is a little octopus.

Is Wen Xu the male protagonist or is Little Octopus the male protagonist? The question is, how many people here still remember that the little octopus was called Gu Qiu. Oh

What's going on ah ah ah ah ah / trembling It's such a strange feeling. I obviously can't understand some parts, but I just don't know why. There is always a strange force that attracts me to continue reading. Then I unknowingly read the latest chapter in one go. Oh my God, help me. I love it! ! ! ! ! (Screaming) Not enough——! ! ! ! ! ! (Twisting) (Screaming) (Dark Creeping) (Hands propeller waving) (Heaven)

The writing is very interesting and the subject matter is very interesting. If it is well written, this book will do well in the future. But The perspective changes too fast and the content cannot be linked. To put it simply, it feels like I missed it (multiple perspectives are not written like this...) It was okay at first, and the sense of mystery came up immediately. It is very high-level and very bluffing. However, after the contract with Dawn, this writing method started to get messy after being used too much, giving people a feeling that the sanity value is too low, the readers can no longer understand the language, and the whole person feels crazy. ... Looking at it this way, it's quite cool hahaha Most of the problems raised by book reviews are--I can't understand it. In addition to boasting, the questions raised here are so unified... It can be imagined There are filters in the previous chapters. When I saw this way of writing, I just thought - wow! It's amazing. I feel like it's so well written. The further I read, the more I start to get impatient. Apart from the fact that writing like this is really mysterious, it's very tiring for readers who want to understand what the story is about. I hope there are fewer such methods. They have all praised me, so I won't say more. In short The little octopus is very cute. I hope the author can work hard and have a bright future.

Come on author, it's a very nice book. There is an ambiguous plot between the protagonist and his male family members, which can be used for cp. [Stare] [Stare] [Stare] (after all, there is no cp)

The setting is quite interesting, and the writing is also interesting, but just like the Riddler, it seems that no one has the sense to have a mouth, so the reading is confusing, and I don't understand it anyway...

To be honest, the main plot has always been in the clouds. I probably feel that there is something that people want to pursue and avoid. The little octopus is cute, and some of the tricks in the plot have become daily tools. The classmates and teachers are also very interesting. They all have special skills and are highly receptive, which is quite funny.

It's a novel theme, I like it very much. The various emotions and movements of the little octopus are cute, but the true identity is scary and ignorant. The contrast makes me feel like (the opponent) is squatting here, the author of Wisdom Teeth 😋

To be honest, this book has a pretty awesome idea... It describes the cuteness from another aspect... The old god of Cthulhu... Little🐙

It's really beautiful. I was attracted by the setting at first glance. The protagonist thought he was playing a game. This game is connected to a real world. In his eyes, those people are NPCs. In the eyes of those people, it is a small black octopus. It's really beautiful! ! ! [Love][love][love]

Ok, ok, it's quite good to watch, but it's a bit more stream-of-consciousness. Some people may find the plot a bit vague when watching it. (But the protagonist is a black octopus dumpling, which is really cute! [Adoration] [Sending Heart] [Blowing Kiss]~\(≧▽≦)/~ La La La)

I think it's pretty good-looking, but the back part is a bit confusing and I can't understand it. The sentences or the plot in it are all very good. But I don't deserve it. When I saw the back part, I couldn't understand it. It felt like the jump was too big. I even wondered if there was something I didn't read, otherwise I couldn't understand it. But this book is indeed quite good. I give you five stars.

Forgot to comment, the little octopus owner who loves "snap" is super cute, and Wen Xu loves him so much. The article is biased towards Cthulhu, and Wen Xujin's copy has the feel of a fairy tale, which is both beautiful and dark. Every action is accompanied by danger, and every choice may not be the right one. Only by making choices can you find the real answer. You shouldn't be too arrogant, because Wen Xu demonstrated it and reported the answer in advance, which almost ended his life. Wen Xu has been tossing back and forth in death, while the little octopus shuttles back and forth in the timeline, picking up family members one after another. When he returns to reality, he is too dark to use them. He tormented Wen Xu, the only available dependent at the moment, and ordered him to buy delicious food for him. Although it is Cthulhu, it is surprisingly warm.

The world view setting is great! The characters are also good! The protagonist, the little octopus, is also very cute! In fact, the plot arrangement is okay, and the decryption part looks quite interesting (full of common sense), and it really feels like playing a game. But there are too many foreshadowings in this article [facepalm] and there are a lot of blank spaces and descriptions of the Riddler. This style of writing is a bit difficult to read, and there are many things that are unclear. Readers can guess based on clues. It is really uncomfortable to read if the author does not write clearly. There is an awkward feeling that the curiosity is not satisfied😭 The [Learned] character setting given to the protagonist Octopus by full stars is particularly good. Cthulhu knowledge continues to increase by 1, and the upper limit of SAN value continues to be lowered.

Cute little octopus with no cp, weird contamination, and the most important thing is that someone actually took me to play with the genre. Damn it, I can't even find a few books on the genre. Some of them just write the characters in them and go through the motions. Some are just wearing the skin of the genre and there is no trace of the genre in it [crying] Come on, write this book, which is to my liking [Adoration]

I have only read Chapter 5, but this book really attracted me and touched my heart. I feel that this is his second time in this world, which is a bit like the second chapter, and he may have forgotten the memory of the first time ("). He should be in 3 He came from the M era 0 years ago, and he should be very famous. After all, the principal saw his human form and said he was like an old friend. Overall, there are a lot of foreshadowings, and the octopus form is really cute\(//∇//)\, author, come on (ง ˙o˙)ว

I really like the rhythm of the book. Although the memory flows through the cerebral cortex, it does not prevent me from feeling that the subject matter is novel and not procrastinating, and the writing style is very interesting.

The plot is super exciting. Wen Xu was a bit abusive in the early stage, but was saved by the adorable little octopus in the later stage. The little octopus is really cute inside and out! ! ! ! The plot is a bit annoying. If you jump to read it, you may not understand it later.

Personally, I think the author drew on some of the setting templates of "Dragon" to write character relationships and world settings, but this time the protagonist in the book is not "Lu Mingfei", but "Lu Mingze", which satisfied my fan fiction fantasy. After all, who doesn't like mysterious and powerful little devils? It has received good reviews and the writing is also good. After all, there are too few books like this. After Jiangnan is no longer updated, I will always have regrets about "Dragon Clan".

It looks good. The author uses... Well, the fragmented description method, which is not bad. The little octopus is very cute, but some details are not handled very well, especially about the timeline. But overall the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

This book left me stunned for a moment. But the little octopus is really cute [face covering]

How to say it? The plot is exciting and the writing is well-conceived (´∀｀*) But I just didn't understand it.

It's okay. The plot is relatively novel and some of the logical connections are a bit stiff, but it's not harmful. It's just that there are too few chapters at the moment. I hope the author will update more.

It's really good to watch, I like it. Although there are some parts that I can't understand, I don't know why, but I just keep reading it. There is a feeling that the content is removed from my mind with a wave of my sleeves (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧* (୨୧• ᴗ •͈)◞︎ᶫᵒᵛᵉ ♡

I really like the little octopus, but I feel that there are very few scenes with the little octopus... Some of the world views set up feel particularly novel, but there are only more than 60 chapters, which feels a bit lacking..._(:з∠)_

Very cute octopus. There are a lot of detailed foreshadowings in the article. The characters have distinct characteristics and the writing is not new. I hope this article will become popular without being unfinished.

It's pretty good to watch, but some people who watched it were disappointed, and some of them didn't quite understand it.

The author greatly begs you to continue writing and not to stop updating. It will be fine if you update slower, baby, we are waiting for you. This article is absolutely amazing.