I Really Thought This Was a Game

It's not bad, but the plot jumps a little too fast, and some words are a bit unfamiliar to read, which makes me unable to understand. It gives me a complicated and profound integration, plus foreshadowing, which makes me confused. I hope the author will work hard and work harder 💕, I really like Little Octopus, can you write more about Little Octopus 😳😳

I have only read 11 chapters so far. The content is relatively novel, the writing is okay, and the subject matter is what I like. But there are a few problems. Of course, I am just a suggestion. After all, it is free. It is purely a suggestion. The author is free to refer to it or not. The biggest problem is the timeline and the character's perspective. It's a bit stiff when jumping to other timelines, and because the author jumps to the timeline quite a lot, from the perspective of the character, he is mentioned several times, and sometimes it is not clear who he refers to, so it feels a bit confusing. Then there are the characters' abilities. Some of them are relatively abstract and conceptual. In human terms, I can't quite understand them. I just want to introduce the abilities. Then there is no problem. I think the subject matter is very good, and the protagonist is also the kind of person who is relatively popular. I don't mean to provide writing guidance. I just give suggestions. I hope the author can accept them, but it doesn't matter if I don't accept them.

Very familiar, really familiar, this style of writing, this writing style, this fragmented narrative... Is the author writing OC...? ! When I write OCs, I like to use a lot of rhetoric and stream of consciousness... From the perspective of reading novels, maybe it's because I also like to write like this, and the author actually uses some sentences to connect the two. The chronological order is actually quite easy to understand, but it's really a bit messy. And this narrative, if the author is an OC, so I can understand a little bit about each character, but sometimes the protagonist's role is too little... And sometimes the plot seems too bland. There are too many rhetorics and streams of consciousness in the whole text, which is very difficult to read. Readers cannot read more than a hundred chapters and think deeply about the artistic conception and meaning of each sentence. However, if they don't think about it, they will not have a good reading experience. The ratio of grand sentences and vernacular text is a bit out of balance... The writing is impeccable, and the dialogue and interaction between the characters are also very flexible. There is no rigid sense of interaction in order to promote the plot, as is usual in most Tomato novels. The description of the words and deeds of the characters is very natural, and the writing style is also quite good. The world view and setting are very good! ! This is really a five-star review! The designs of buildings, characters, and skills are very fantasy! It makes people feel as if they have entered that world. The description of the monsters is very gruesome... And the description of the indescribable is very good. I feel that the author should have read the Cthulhu Mythos... The description is really good. And the setting of the protagonist, the little octopus, is really cute! The little octopus acts as a moderator. Every time my brain is about to be clogged with these gorgeous descriptions, the little octopus will save me with complaints and cuteness... And it's very cool when the protagonist is in a high position! Overall, it is (in my personal opinion) a refreshing novel with a very mythical feel, good writing, and smart characters. At the same time, it has the refreshing feel of a nurturing style and the cuteness of a pet as the main character is a little octopus.

Is Wen Xu the male protagonist or is Little Octopus the male protagonist? The question is, how many people here still remember that the little octopus was called Gu Qiu. Oh

The writing is very interesting and the subject matter is very interesting. If it is well written, this book will do well in the future. But The perspective changes too fast and the content cannot be linked. To put it simply, it feels like I missed it (multiple perspectives are not written like this...) It was okay at first, and the sense of mystery came up immediately. It is very high-level and very bluffing. However, after the contract with Dawn, this writing method started to get messy after being used too much, giving people a feeling that the sanity value is too low, the readers can no longer understand the language, and the whole person feels crazy. ... Looking at it this way, it's quite cool hahaha Most of the problems raised by book reviews are--I can't understand it. In addition to boasting, the questions raised here are so unified... It can be imagined There are filters in the previous chapters. When I saw this way of writing, I just thought - wow! It's amazing. I feel like it's so well written. The further I read, the more I start to get impatient. Apart from the fact that writing like this is really mysterious, it's very tiring for readers who want to understand what the story is about. I hope there are fewer such methods. They have all praised me, so I won't say more. In short The little octopus is very cute. I hope the author can work hard and have a bright future.

What's going on ah ah ah ah ah / trembling It's such a strange feeling. I obviously can't understand some parts, but I just don't know why. There is always a strange force that attracts me to continue reading. Then I unknowingly read the latest chapter in one go. Oh my God, help me. I love it! ! ! ! ! (Screaming) Not enough——! ! ! ! ! ! (Twisting) (Screaming) (Dark Creeping) (Hands propeller waving) (Heaven)

The setting is quite interesting, and the writing is also interesting, but just like the Riddler, it seems that no one has the sense to have a mouth, so the reading is confusing, and I don't understand it anyway...

Come on author, it's a very nice book. There is an ambiguous plot between the protagonist and his male family members, which can be used for cp. [Stare] [Stare] [Stare] (after all, there is no cp)

It's a novel theme, I like it very much. The various emotions and movements of the little octopus are cute, but the true identity is scary and ignorant. The contrast makes me feel like (the opponent) is squatting here, the author of Wisdom Teeth 😋

To be honest, the main plot has always been in the clouds. I probably feel that there is something that people want to pursue and avoid. The little octopus is cute, and some of the tricks in the plot have become daily tools. The classmates and teachers are also very interesting. They all have special skills and are highly receptive, which is quite funny.