At the Beginning, He Gave His Wife as a Gift and Made a Fortune Selling Popsicles.

Doing things, fishing for three days and drying nets for two days, no character

But it's not bad, but it needs to be more streamlined. If necessary, some branches should be abandoned. Don't be too divergent. A simple storyline and neat structural content are bound to add a lot of vitality and vitality. The daily routine should not become the norm and jump. The normal story rhythm should be kept up. There should be no extraneous branches or extraneous techniques. It just needs to be a situation where one arrow is shot and does not need to be recycled. There is no need to pay so much attention to one key point. Two or three branch lines are enough.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

Damn it, why do I have this new one to read and hoard it so much [I'm about to cry] Let's see how to deal with this incident first, give it 3 stars

The protagonist's acting style is okay, the writing style is good and not a noob, and it's pleasing to the eye.

The rating is a bit low. It's really well written. There are just too few, not enough to watch.

It feels like I'm eating dog food every day [Thinking]

It's very life-like, and the main characters are well portrayed.

I like this kind of short-sighted family, it looks soothing

If you look at it carefully, it's okay.

It's okay, I can watch it

Very good, very real

Not too angry, pretty good

Not bad, so far

The writing is pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. After seeing the latest chapter, I wonder if the author is going to rush to the end.

The author is great, your writing is beautiful, I support you, I will add a chapter, thank you, come on, write, write, write

What happened to the label? Why did she become a multi-heroine? When I watched it, it was about a single female protagonist.

Nice! So beautiful

Yes, come on, come on, come on

Very good looking

Very good, keep up the good work

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey

Nine-cent ice cream sold for one dollar and two cents around 1981. So pretty

Has the tomb been out yet? I'm going to sleep.

I hope it's better written

The article is simple and tight. Those who want to see the slow development route can come here [laughing][laughing]

It's pretty good. It's not as awesome as some novels that I gave five stars to after being reborn.

It's real and beautiful, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's better than Mo Yan's writing. There's nothing wrong with it. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.