Dragon Ball: I Have a Time Simulator

Like sunlight passing through the night Dawn quietly crosses the horizon Whose figure travels through reincarnation? The road to the future is at your feet Don't be sad, don't be afraid Looking forward to tomorrow with confidence A new storm has emerged How can we stand still? Try your best to travel through time and space I will come to you Smile in the face of danger Dreams come true will not be far away Have the courage to move forward firmly A miracle will definitely happen like sunlight passing through the night Dawn quietly crosses the horizon Whose figure travels through reincarnation? The road to the future is at your feet Don't be sad, don't be afraid Looking forward to tomorrow with confidence

I didn't want to make a long review at first. Seeing that the author worked very hard on writing and also had the idea of ​​a creation novel, based on what the author wrote, I will give you a rough outline of Dragon Ball for the author's reference. 1: Sai God and Sai Monkey merge together. Sai Shen's main goal is to become a god, which is the improvement of the spiritual and soul aspects. Sai Monkey focuses on the divine body, which is the improvement of physical sublimation. 2: God's strength level and mastery rules The strength level of the gods must be from high to low, including all kings - great priests - pencil guards - angels - Kaioshin/God of Destruction. Personally, I think it is more reasonable. The Kaioshin type masters the rules of a single god. For others, let the author of the original work add more points. Just increase the strength level so that the battle power will not explode too early. The rules mastered by Dragon Ball God are very easy to understand. The divine power of destruction and the divine power of Kaio. One destroys and the other creates. You can just make up the rest according to the original work. Three: Focus of the writing stage The first stage is more exciting. It must be the improvement of the protagonist's personal strength. Either the ability is refined or the greedy and greedy. Everything is arranged. The improvement of personal strength is the main thing and the power is supplementary. The second stage is more exciting. Judging from the author's profile, the focus should be on the Saiyan Dynasty, dominating the universe, or multiple universes. The later stage will also be convenient for your creation novels. Once the world is created, the protagonist will lead an organized army to serve. What a cool start. Strength is the main factor, and personal strength improvement is the supplement. That's about it. After finishing this book, I'll start a new one and write something else. It's too cold and I don't have enough thinking, so let's leave it like this for now. The author will look at it for reference.

It's good to see a different style from other Dragon Balls; however, the fighting plot is less and lacks some passion; the heroine did not capture the hearts of most Dragon Ball fans (personally, I think most of them like Bulma and No. 18)

It's a good Dragon Ball fanfic with multiple female protagonists, but I don't really like the group portraits, because they usually give male partners CPs. Although this is a harem with a male protagonist, the author probably didn't know that there was a trick about giving away girls, so I don't really like group portraits, especially the CPs that are different from the original work [face covering]. But these are minor problems. It's not easy for the author to insist on writing. Come on

Go to Earth to get space capsule technology, make a wish for a spiritual time house, establish a skill cultivation inheritance, what kind of fusion technique, go to other planets to obtain technical resources, go to Yade Planet to learn skills

The stars twinkle, the moonlight is like water, A fairy dances gracefully, The wings flutter, light and agile, The moonlight is shining, and the feathers are flowing. The pure white skirt is looming, Flowers in hair, soft and charming, Holding a bouquet in hand, dancing gracefully, The moonlight is my companion, and the fairies dance. Dancing across the stars, crossing the sea of clouds, Fairies dance, dance miracles, The moonlight pours down and fills the earth, Fairy dances, dances life.

No one is watching If you use love to generate electricity, will it be like the previous book, and the battery will run out again [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] A hundred-word book review to complete the task. Well, just write something. Number of heroines: 3~() It should be emphasized here that the red-haired Super Four (pure mortal energy, godless energy) is not the black-haired Super Four·Boundary Breakthrough (relying on the breath of God to transform into Super Four), the two are different. Red-haired Super Four·Boundary Breakthrough (transformed by relying on the energy of God). I haven't seen the fan's AF Super 5 yet, so I don't know if I should add it, let alone Super 6 or 7. Well, the number of words is enough, that's it, hehe

It's still readable, with a lot of poisonous points, but the author's attitude can be given four stars.

It is a novel that can be read. Although there are some minor problems, there is no perfect novel in the world. It is worth reading.

It looks good, the rhythm and everything are online [laughs] Come on