Honghuang: Senior Brother Xuanmen, Timely Rain Comes to Honghuang!

The content is good. The most important thing is that there is no disharmony of Sanqing, and there is no too dark element of Daozu. The protagonist is slightly masochistic and has a talent for comedy. If this book is not unfinished, it should have a place in the Tomatoes series

There can be a lot of foreshadowing. Later in the Qin Dynasty, you can let the three corpses of the protagonist go to expand the plot. Then you can also let the protagonist's clone play Zhuge Liang in the Han Dynasty. I think you should also have thought about it. Is the protagonist's name the same as the skin of King of Glory? Zhuge Liang, and then for foreshadowing, I think you have the divine rebellion of the sea of ​​blood in the first few chapters, and then there are the three ancestors of the dragon, phoenix and unicorn in the west, and then there is the plot foreshadowing when Sanqing Lake is the separation of the three clearings.

Almost all the characters are positive, except for the demon court and the Western monk. But there is a poisonous point. When the wife in the previous life bought the household registration and entered it, I felt like why should I give you all my merits without knowing it and also have to repay the loan. However, the author has a very good attitude. If there are typos or other comments, they will be corrected soon.

It looks good. If nothing else, at least there are no conspiracy theories, the logic is self-consistent, and there is fun. It is already excellent. I can give it a 9.7 Points. The 0.3 Points difference is because it feels less "bonded". Of course, it may also be that I didn't see it.

A classic story about an innate being who transforms into a disciple, but unlike other books where people have to be plotted and have to endure for a while, the protagonist of this book should be at the top level from the beginning to the end, and no one dares to bully them at will. This book is more casual and there are not many specific fights, which is very good

This adapted novel is set against the backdrop of Journey to the West, with **Taiqing Shui Yunhe** as the protagonist, telling the story of his journey of becoming a disciple of Taiqing Laozi and enlightening to the Great Dao. The author cleverly combines "Journey to the West" with the setting of "The Great Desolation", and reconstructs the mythological system from the perspective of the Taiqing lineage - plots such as the sermon at the Purple Mansion in Xuandu, the secret technique of the Nine-turn Golden Pill, and the dispute over the fate of people and religions not only retain the classical charm, but also give new meanings. The protagonist Shui Yunhe is the heel of the Crane tribe to achieve enlightenment. His "quiet and inactive but hidden edge" character forms an interesting reflection with Laozi's teachings of "governing by doing nothing". The original scenes such as discussing Taoism on Jin'ao Island and transforming Hu into a Buddha are even more ingenious. The writing style is as elegant as a crane spreading its wings, and its application of the "Tao Te Ching" can be seen. However, some of the combat power systems slightly conflict with the original genealogy of immortals. Overall, this is an excellent work that takes into account both the "refreshing feeling of cultivating immortals" and the "Xuanmen artistic conception", and is suitable for readers who like textual research on Liuhonghuang literature. **Highlights**: 1. The scarce subject matter of the People's Religion lineage fills the gaps in the story of Laozi's direct disciples 2. Combine the elegant characteristics of the Crane people with Taoist ideas, and create a recognizable character 3. Creative adaptation of allusions such as "Purple Qi Comes from the East" and "One Qi Transforms Three Purities"

The general trend is irreversible, and all the reasons are clearly explained.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. Unlike other prehistoric novels, it's either a conspiracy or a conspiracy. In short, in the end, the protagonist has few good people. This one is different. I see that there is not so much violence now. I don't know what will happen next. Come on.

This book is quite good, with humor interspersed throughout it, which is quite interesting. Moreover, everyone's personality is quite good (except for the West), the organizations are all harmonious (except for the West), and there are no very disgusting schemes (except for the West).

The writing is quite good, and the character of the protagonist is in line with what the main character should be. The author should have played Kabu's Journey to the West, Taixu Shuiyunhe, which was my initial experience at the time.

It's quite interesting to watch so far. Maybe I'm getting older and like to watch some family-friendly plots and content. So far in the book, the three religions are in harmony. Although Nuwa is a homebody, she has a plan. Hongjun does not use the way of heaven to suppress the earth. The two ways of human beings rise. The Tiehanhan witch clan also has a happy ending. The setting of the twelve ancestral witches serving as the king of hell and Po Meng in the ten palaces is indeed quite interesting. Then the first problem is that the author wrote the two emperors of earth and man backwards. After the emperor was Shennong, and Shennong was the emperor of earth instead of the emperor of people. Moreover, the achievements of the three ancestors of the human race, the Mianyi clan and the Arichao clan, were one of making clothes to protect the body from the cold, and the other of inventing houses to get rid of cave dwellings. The achievements of these three ancestors were long before the emergence of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, and were not the achievements of the emperor and his teachers. It's not that you can't create something twice, but you have to at least respect the record on the record.

It's not the kind of person who either plots or kills. It's a bit like Senior Brother. It's lighthearted and funny. It's good and I love watching it.

It looks good. The brotherhood between Sanqing is very good. I don't want it to be like others. It's just a conspiracy all the time.

Haokan, although some people think Wang Shu is poisonous, but I think it's not a big deal to have a female protagonist in the story.

So far, the writing is good and there are no bad points. Don't make it unfinished. Also, the more updates you have, the more updates you'll get. It's not enough [laughing]

Didn't Hongjun accept disciples only after he talked about it for the third time?

A soul from another world travels to the ancient world, experiences ups and downs in the ancient world, and builds his own career. He gains love, friendship, family affection, etc. His life is complete! [Laugh]

It's more casual and interesting, different from most conspiracy theories, it's very relaxing

I personally like the plot. The three Qings live in harmony. Anyway, I like this genre very much.

I chased it all the way to the end. It's a very interesting prehistoric novel without any poisonous points. I highly recommend it. There is no antagonism between the two religions, and Buddhism has become a clown. The setting is very good. I look forward to the new work. It will be finished on November 18, 2025🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

It's good to watch. Is the heroine Xi and Chang Xi?

In the first battle between Tao and demons, Ancestor Hongjun and the yin and yang space of Qiankun represented the righteous side and defeated the evil Demon Ancestor Luohou. Later, four people wanted to seize the power of the ancient world and died. Ancestor Hongjun understood the Tao and then preached in Zixiao Palace. The six futons represent the chance of sanctification of six people.

Thank you for your hard work. The author pays great attention to rest [smile][smile][smile]

I finished reading it in one go, and my impressions are somewhat different from those written by others, which is still good. It's just too little. Please update quickly. Author

It's nice to look at. There's nothing poisonous about it at the moment. You can come and take a look.

@Valentinewithoutflowers Is the author a single heroine or multiple heroines [exploration]

Not bad, all the merit will be returned to the protagonist later on

Generally speaking, it's not bad, but Wang Shu really went a bit too far. Without the protagonist's knowledge, he wiped out all the protagonist's merits and made him owe a large amount of debt. Even though they have no relationship at the moment, the protagonist is not angry at all. It's so kind [Like] [Like]

The book is very good. I haven't seen such a harmonious prehistoric article in a long time. The article is written in a relaxed and pleasant atmosphere. I hope the author will not stop updating and abandoning the article [smile]

Good-looking, good-looking, the author's character formation and plot control are very good, and the identity of the protagonist is also very reasonable.