The Reborn Junior Sister Qing Leng Only Wants to Cultivate Immortality

Emmm, I thought about it and gave it 5 stars. I haven't finished it but I can't watch it anymore. The plot and setting are indeed attractive, and the supporting characters are also great, with full-featured images. But I would like to make some suggestions to the author (friendly, no offensive intention) First of all, let me state that I am an old bookworm and have enough experience. Please trust my judgment and listen to my speech. The writing is indeed beautiful, but to be honest, it is like a composition written in elementary school, but with a little extra length. In fact, I have never seen anyone writing novels spend a lot of ink on scenery and clothing. It is meaningless. Please focus on writing the plot. Secondly, the plot, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, progresses too quickly. I fell in love out of nowhere, and became lifelong friends out of nowhere. Although I haven't finished reading it, I can still give some examples. For example, the CP plot of Kong Sang Wan Wan and many female characters (not specific, but I have a deep memory of Kong Sang Wan Wan's name) progressed too fast, and I was already blushing without progress. Even the supporting characters cannot be written in such a sloppy way. It's also like the cp between the heroine's cousin and her friend. To be honest, I really can't understand those chapters. They're like a running account, and there are no hydrological words like "more intimate". I want to write a sub cp seriously, and treat my characters well. The supporting characters will also be a group of lively people, and they will be the protagonists from another perspective. The emotions generated between them must have a source and a basis, not come out of nowhere. Not only is the supporting role not done well, but the male protagonist's love is also very perfunctory. Please write the plot in detail. There is also the issue of punctuation. Many characters do not even have " " in their words. You have to guess based on the context whether this text is the content of the speech and who said it. The author should be aware of this problem, right? Regarding my suggestions, I hope that the author will not blindly follow them or look down upon them, and have no malicious intentions. Thank you!

It's a very nice novel. I couldn't stop reading it. I came here to comment first. The lonely little junior sister smells like the flower of the high mountains and the gentle senior brother is as gentle as jade. Enjoy it.

It's so interesting, hahahaha. The heroine was reborn in another continent and devoted herself to cultivation. The hero liked his junior sister and followed her all the time, but the junior sister was too aloof. Hahaha.

This kind of fantasy romance novel is the best to read. You can cultivate immortality and fall in love at the same time without delaying your upgrade. The sect competition is very interesting. Every plot connection is very coherent and not abrupt. It is very interesting to read (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The content is rich, the plot is compact, and the characters are vivid, interesting, and three-dimensional. I hope the author can update it soon.

It's really good to read. This is the best rebirth novel I've read recently. The writing is very good and the characters are full-bodied. The coolness of the junior sister and the gentleness of the senior brother are vividly displayed on the page. Come on! ! ! [Love][love][love]

The language is accurate, clear and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. It's very interesting to read, with five-star reviews. The protagonist has personality and the plot is also very good and heart-warming. The author's writing style is also good. The plot is not protracted and the article has a clear context.

This novel is so beautiful. The content in one sentence is novel and detailed, and very fluent. The author has great imagination and good writing style. The content is particularly attractive. The author has updated it a lot and I fell in love with it very quickly.

It's really good to read. It's the top 1 rebirth story in my heart. The younger junior sister asked with all her heart but was not in the mood for love. This made the senior brother very embarrassed. It's really interesting. Update soon [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss]

The plots are often designed to be very compact and exciting. Through ingenious conception and arrangement, the author cleverly interweaves various elements and clues to form ups and downs and fascinating storylines.

The author's writing is good, the plot is rich and vivid, and the details and characters are vivid and worthy of further study. The story lines of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are also well developed and exciting. It's vivid and flesh-and-blood, and I look forward to the author's updates.

Don't miss this fairy novel [Love][Love][Love] if you pass by. It's quite good. I recommend it. The heroine is ecstatic about her career! ! !

After the heroine Ye Yunjin blew up the golden elixir, she traveled to the Xuanming Continent (haha, many novels are set in the Xuanming Continent. Is this a branch of the fantasy world? [Laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry]) After being reborn, she changed her surname, worshiped the sect, and made friends. The growth along the way was wonderful. It's really beautiful [like][like][like]

The author's writing style is also very good. The plot is very exciting and deeply rooted in people's hearts, and the content of the article is compact and not laggy! The story line is also clear! Good-looking and good-looking [admiration] [admiration]

The author depicts various complex and profound emotional entanglements through delicate brushwork. Whether it is sweet love, deep friendship, or selfless family affection, they are all vividly portrayed, making readers deeply resonate and move during the reading process.

This book is really amazing, the setting of the young junior sister Qing Leng and the senior brother Wen Run, and the young junior sister is also reborn! The author's writing style is also very good, and the plot is not too slow. It's really good to watch!

The character of the junior sister is quite good, and I like her personality too. She and her senior brother really get along very well. The author's writing is good, and the plot is not laggy. It's really good to watch! !

The junior sister and the gentle elder brother are really easy to get along with. The author's writing is really good. It's very comfortable to read. The writing is also very good. I like it. And I like this setting of cultivating immortals very much.

It's quite good to watch, the plot is quite interesting [Like][Like][Like]

The plot is compact, I really like the heroine setting [Like][Like][Like]

This rebirth story is really good, and the author is really good at writing. I really love the plot of the male and female protagonists in it! The content of the article is also well described and the logic is clear! [Send heart][Send heart]

The setting of this book is perfect, and I also like this setting very much, the drama between Qing Leng and the senior brother, and the author's writing style is good and the characters are written very delicately.

Very interesting, very exciting story

The author's writing is very good. Niche text. With encouragement

This romance novel is so good, and I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist is cold and cold, while the male protagonist is as gentle as jade. The plot in it is also very exciting, I love it!

It's very interesting. I really like the character of the little junior sister, and I think the setting is pretty good. I've read this novel, and it's a very good one. It's worth reading!

This book is really good to read, the setting is good, the characters are good, the author's writing style is also very good, the plot is not procrastinating, it is really a very good book, excellent writing! Nice! !