Naruto: the Transparent Man Saves the Ninja World

The teacher's writing is so good, it is simply a fairy tale! It's so sweet. I read other people's comments that the later stage was very sharp, so I held my breath while watching it. I didn't expect to find it so sweet! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's well written, but feels a bit short. Sweet at the front, a little sharp at the back. Under the moonlight and breeze, the water is still. [Laughing]

Short stories have great staying power꒦ິ^꒦ິ Midsummer, fireworks, plum wine, sardines, a tunnel of cherry blossoms, a small town where the train passes, summer, I miss your smell. ——"Haijie Diary"

The writing style in the early stage is relatively immature, but the overall look and feel is quite good. In the later stage, the improvement of the writing style can be clearly seen, but it is too slow. I suggest you save it for a while and read it together. I quite like this type of line [full]

I like it very much! Big!

Why is it over? I feel so sad. There are several parts in the middle that are very fast-paced, but overall it is quite enjoyable. The description of Shisui is not considered OOC, because the original novel has very little description of him, so overall there is nothing wrong with it. It is a very interesting novel. But it's too short [crying][crying]

It's particularly beautiful, the writing is delicate, and the plot is compact, but it doesn't make people feel too fast. When I saw the ending, I regretted not letting it go, but at the same time I felt that it was just right to stop here. The character description is very three-dimensional, but it is too unreasonable to watch this. Highly recommend! ! !

Wow, this is so awesome. Wow, author, you are my God [love] [love] [love] [love]

It's so beautiful, I don't know why so few people read it, but I still recommend changing the cover.

Beautiful, worthy of praise

Woohoo, what a beautiful ending. I've had too many knives recently. Did I end up with a he?

Wuwuwuwu, most! What makes me sad is that he remained silent.

Like. The whole article makes perfect sense.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will open another book. ̋(๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑)

Good book, very fast

You're so beautiful, I love you so much [Adoration] [Admiration]

Warm little story, nice to watch

There are some flaws, but it's pretty good

Well, overall this book is very good. The writing was a bit immature in the early stages, but it has been improving since then. The pace of the whole book is too fast. The only flaw is that there are too few [crazy]

I finished reading it in one go. The teacher's writing is so good, it's a masterpiece! [Blowing kiss]

It's really, really beautiful.

Really good-looking

It's so pretty. If you like Shisui, it's great.

Like it very much. Although a bit short,

Nice! Very beautiful!

Super good-looking, it's finally the turn of those who like to watch Shisui's CP [blowing kiss]