霍格沃茨的太阳之神

I finished the real review xdm in one go. It is very well written. There is no meaningless repetition of the original plot. There are many subtle changes and breakthroughs in the general direction. For example, the blessing of the Egyptian sun god counts as one line, and the Lion King counts as one line. These are rare settings. It's not an invincible novel. His growth rate is so fast compared to his peers. But compared to the level of danger in the magic world, it can only be said that he lacks firepower (I have a phobia of lack of firepower). The character traits of the original characters have also been deepened, such as the evaluation of the Malfoy family as "bad but timid, so not completely bad (the original work highlights the bond between family members and the ability to adapt to the situation)", and added some plots of professors, and even Professor Binns. Although I only went to ask questions and write a note, it was the first time I met him. There are some welcome changes, such as Hermione no longer likes Lockhart, Ron is no longer a dark cricket (of course, he is still incompetent), etc., And some original flavors are retained, such as the old bat is still spraying venom and attacking Harry, but after seeing Lockhart, the teacher I like that Min will give pointers after her talent for potions (the gold content of making polyjuice potion in second grade) (first mocking and then giving pointers is consistent with the character). I also like that second grade He no longer pursues perfect scores and focuses on transformation and potions. After all, he is indeed talented and omnipotent, but somewhat incompetent. Let me talk about what everyone likes. The protagonist likes fighting. He elbowed Malfoy in front of Snape many times and once in the first grade. He faced the terrifying Garlic Man and killed him. In the second grade, he bravely braved the Forbidden Forest and fought. There are also classic quotations that have been rewritten one after another. As for the emotional description, the single heroine is in pure love, and is still in a reserved and ambiguous period. She doesn't drive, there is no whispering, but there is normal physical contact to warm up the relationship. Needless to say, He Zai looked at the magic mirror and saw the gold content of the wedding. All in all, Love Line is a book that I feel very comfortable reading. Regarding some of the added magic, I like the fireworks and butterflies very much. They are powerful, elegant, and have many uses. They can self-destruct a drone swarm, brothers. I feel like the continuous fireball has some of the same uses as the fireworks and butterflies, but I think it's not bad that the magic feature of continuous fire can be used in other magics. There are other magics that are well written, but I don't think it's good to finish it. Although it has already revealed a lot of people, it's all to attract everyone [laughs], and the plot is only in its second year, so there is still a long way to go. The author will give me a quick update!

It's beautiful. Why is the rating so low? I'm in Phuket? ? ? ? I think among so many HP fanfics, this one is the only one that I like the character of the protagonist, and the emotional scenes with Hermione are also very rich, and the plot is also very ups and downs, right? ? ?

The emotional scene with Hermione is okay, but it makes the protagonist a bit naughty. He must have been too hasty due to the influence of the comment section. The protagonist is in the third grade and is thirteen years old. Even in the original book and the movie, Harry and the others are still very immature at this time. The protagonists play together and have the faces of adults about 1.8 Meters tall. When the third grade participates in the duel competition, they will give you three moves. A classic routine. Although everyone knows that the protagonist is handsome, the adult witches next to him cannot take their eyes away as soon as he appears. Under normal circumstances, who would be obsessed with a 13-year-old boy? There is no need to deliberately describe the pale handsomeness. The main thing is to write the emotional scene with Hermione. It is the kind of childhood sweetheart love that others envy. Come on, the author is great ❤️

I like this book very much, and it does not worsen the character of individual characters in the original book. The male protagonist's character design is also okay. I also liked several high-scoring Harry Potter fanfics before, but most of them ended hastily. I hope the author of this one can stick to it. (At least it's the same as the original work. The male and female protagonists have a baby. I really want to see it.)

It's very interesting, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I have to support it. The plot is very exciting. The heroine Hermione is not a vase, and the sweetness is gradually increasing. The protagonist's growth process is sufficient and exciting. It is not invincible at the beginning, nor is it a boring novel like running around Harry and restoring the plot. It has the author's own new plot concept, which is very attractive. I finished it in two days. I look forward to more updates from the author. I strongly recommend updating three times a day [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [send heart] [send heart]

The protagonist's growth is very smooth and does not feel too abrupt. It has been strengthened since picking up the blessing of the sun. Before it was strengthened, it was far behind Hermione in various aspects and was far ahead. So this may not be a good book. It does not have the strong feedback feeling of other good books, but the improvement every time is indeed not small. It is suitable for readers who like to develop. The emotional line between the protagonist and Hermione is also quite smooth. The warmth of daily life is quite comfortable.

Saw the update, it's ok. A rare description of a pure Gryffindor. Maybe the author is stacking attributes for the protagonist, and fighting is not fun enough. The leader of the lion pride is beginning to take shape. Look forward to it. The flames and the sun stand out. It is very difficult to be a leader in Gryffindor. Outstanding strength is only a small part of it. The best quality is the most important and the most difficult to express. I hope the Sorting Hat's "Your passion is setting me on fire" is well deserved.

It's a very enjoyable story. I don't think it's too toxic, and the characters are pretty good. It doesn't deviate from the original work. After all, this book is a fanfic, and there will be some settings that belong to the author, so you don't need to take it too seriously.

This book is rated so low, I think it's one of the better ones in the Harry Potter genre. The protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, the speed of strength improvement is not slow, and the emotional line with Hermione is also well controlled. All in all, this book is worth reading. Also: The author should update it soon, these few chapters are simply not enough.

I don't know why it's only 7.5, At least 9. The writing, plot, and IQ are all top-notch. It's the best HP fan I've ever seen.

It's so beautiful. The plot created by the author is incredible. He also knows the original work very well. The main thing is the emotional line between our male and female protagonists. It's really hard to stop reading. What's even more valuable is that the author insists on updating it daily. I will keep this book forever [sending my heart] [sending my heart] I'm looking forward to the author's next performance

It's very good. It has a plot, information, logic, themes, and jokes. It's very well written. Basically, I've read all the Harry Potter fanfics. Basically, I write about how awesome the protagonist is, but I still follow the plot. I don't want to change the plot, and I don't want to write a new adventure. The protagonist's strength improvement has never been clearly written, and the group portraits are a mess. The Gemini dramatists, Luna's ethereal character, Snape and others' character arcs are even more messed up. Maybe it's because they haven't read the original work at all, and they don't understand what the readers' excitement is. The economy of the wizarding world is also well written, which is very important. Many authors write about the economy of the wizarding world. They always feel that there are bugs, and try their best to describe economic means, but they do not understand a little economic common sense, so the writing is a bit like playing house. The most important thing is that this will deviate from the theme of the wizarding world. No one wants to watch the currency war of Harry Potter fan fiction. I like the character of Hermione very much, but I hate those authors who write Hermione into a mess, that is, she is not smart, and she is not a Gryffindor, and she is raised like a flower vase? I still don't dare to write about Sesu, so why should I watch her? The theme is very important. This book is very awesome. Starting from it, it is one of the most awesome books in the fandom.

In this era of systematic writing and cheating special effects everywhere, it is really good to see a book like this that has cheats but is not exaggerated. Although it is a second creation by a fan, the characters are logically self-consistent and behave reasonably. The plot arrangement basically has no reading points. The characters in the original work match the original personality. The overall style of the article is more ancient and early-style, unlike today's online articles where the cool points are numerous and dense, making readers feel bored after reading as the reader's comfort threshold gets higher and higher. The cool points of this book are more reasonable, and the size of the cool bits are staggered, making people want to read on. I give you a five-star review, and I hope the author will continue to work hard💪💪💪

The pacing is good, mainly because the system and rebirth are everywhere in the online world. This book has cheats, but there is no system upgrade. The process is also more precise, and the talent is outstanding, but the combat power is not broken. It is a semi-invincible book. The plot about falling in love is really sweet, and the character creation is also perfect. Compared with other books that directly exchange battles from the system. I don't see anything very toxic about the power of the Internet. The protagonist is not merciful, but he will also lend a helping hand to his companions in time, such as to Neville. In the end, it seems that he used the sun scepter to cure his parents. All in all, this book is definitely a good book, and it is a treasure that cannot be missed in Harry Potter fan fiction.

The author really writes well. I was originally worried about when the two of them would confess their love for each other, but when I saw it later, I was so sweet. The battles were described very delicately, and the growth process was not abrupt. I admired the author's writing style again. Everyone has their own favorite novel style, and this novel happens to be my favorite. I hope the author can update 100 chapters a day hehe😊⌯＞◡❛⌯ಣ

It's very interesting, and the author's narrative skills are very good. As a person who has only watched slices of the movie, I can clearly understand the relationship between the characters, the causes and consequences, and it will not make people feel confused. The writing is humorous, so funny [crying with laughter] The character creation of the male protagonist is really in line with Gryffindor [laughing and crying]. The setting of Goldfinger is very wonderful, and it also has the male protagonist's own growth process, which makes people feel that it is a refreshing challenge to surpass the level, but it does not make people feel that the enjoyment is brainless. After all, most of it is achieved through the male protagonist's own efforts, which gives him a refreshing and down-to-earth feeling. Hermione feels cuter than the movie version. The heroine is not written as a pendant, but the two people complement each other. This book makes up for the regrets of many movies. Lupine's sentence: "Good evening, moon" was so touching [I almost cried]. Hmm... I don't feel very friendly to the original protagonist [grievance]

Whether it's the emotional line or the protagonist's growth line, they are all written very nicely. It is not a blind pursuit. While following the main line to advance the plot, there are also various unique settings of the book, 11 displayed. At present, it seems that defeating Voldemort is not only the ultimate goal. The single heroine, Hermione, is really sweet. The only shortcoming of this book is that after reading it, I felt that many Harry Potter fans wrote mediocre books. I will push

A very, very excellent fan work The protagonist Phil Heffith and the heroine Hermione's line of becoming stronger, as well as the emotional line between the two are parallel. There is nothing wrong with the writing style, it can be called perfect. Magic theory, alchemy knowledge, magical effects of potions, and exciting adventures. • It has everything, making up for many of the regrets of the original book. Regarding the problem of too much emotional description, I think the proportion of this book is very appropriate and the details are appropriate (at least it suits my taste) I hope to write more, but not too depressing. For example, in fifth grade, Phil and Hermione don't have much emotional content. As for the extras, please write more, just follow the "Heartbeat Engine" extras, just write more! Highly recommended! ! ! I am Tomato Changli Uchiha Jianli

It's really good to read, and it feels like reading a refreshing article about Harry Potter's world view. I feel that the rating is still relatively low. It may be that the speaking method is not suitable for Harry Potter's world view, which leads to a low rating. But if you have read Harry Potter and still like it, then this is a good read. I'm really convinced. After reading this, I've been obsessed with Harry Potter books recently. I searched around and found that most of them are from Slytherin House. There aren't many Gryffindor books at all. The rest are still cool books about brainless systems, but I really don't like reading about system books when it comes to Hogwarts books [I'm about to cry]

It's okay, pretty good. The advantage is that all the members survived without regrets, and the character of each important character is well developed. The disadvantage is that the author is not very clear about some details. Netizens commented that there are many errors in the content. The love with Hermione is very sweet, and the girls' little willfulness, little thoughts, and sweetness are not well written. Wrong, it seems a little delayed at the end, because everyone knows that they will definitely be able to defeat Voldemort in the later stage with some improved strength, so they have no intention to read further. It would be better if I could write a postscript, write about my son and daughter, and write about the story of visiting the magical world with the Grangers.

The plot is average, okay, 8.5 Points in reading, but the real-person listening to the book is pretty good, except for sometimes typos. For example, Hogwarts is pronounced as Hallwarts, but the sense of immersion is better than reading, so I recommend listening to this book. The ending is the male protagonist that many HP fanfictions have. The idea of upgrading the villain is a bit cliche, and the fact that Goldfinger is from ancient Egypt is a little weird. But what I like most about this book is that the protagonist is very Gryffindor, and the main focus is to have fun fighting. For example, setting up a security team, or competing in the Triwizard Tournament, they all run over each other head-on. Summary: Reading is 8.5, Listening to books can reach 9.0, You can check it out.

The plot design is good and the character portrayal is okay, but I feel that when the protagonist has enough strength, his approach is too positive. When faced with a problem, strength comes first, and killing is the best way to face the enemy. Moreover, it's a second creation, so you don't have to respect the original work too much. After all, you've been with the protagonist for so long, so it's normal to have some changes.

It looks good, at least Ron here is not annoying, and the heroine Hermione likes it (personal preference)

I've read a lot of HP fanfics, but not many of them have actually been read. This one has basically no surprises. It's not only original and interesting, but it also advances the original characters and plot in a reasonable way. Anyway, I thought it was really good after reading it.

The plot is very attractive. It feels different from other novels of the same type. It is not boring. Many plots not only follow the original plot but also add more elements, allowing readers who have not read Harry Potter for a long time to recall the original plot. It is very good👍

It's super good-looking. It's not a re-enactment of the original plot, but it really made me feel like I was witnessing the growth story of another little wizard. The emotional line is relatively soothing, but when I read the confession chapter, it also made me feel that it came naturally.

To be honest, it's really good-looking. It's much better than some Qi-building foundation-building games where you have to do quests to upgrade your magic to level 123 and meditate for a period of time. One of the reasons why I prefer watching Western Fantasy is that the protagonist's magic training has a training process and research results, as well as the setting of knowledge and combat power levels. If there is research and process, don't you just tell me level 1234.

Very good. The plot is well designed. The author did not want the protagonist to be invincible in all aspects from the beginning. He gave himself the talent in combat and alchemy, and gave Hermione the talent in potions. The two complement each other. Hermione in the book is no longer just a pendant. She and the protagonist support each other and face difficulties together. It is a very good design, and daily interactions also make the character image flesh and blood.

To be honest, there are very few Harry Potter fanfics that I can finish reading, but this book really suits my taste. Whether it is the detailed description of combat or the sweet love, I can't help but keep reading. I recommend everyone to read it!

Let me start by saying, as a little bookworm with 2,000 hours of reading time, I think I am qualified to evaluate it. Harry Potter is an IP that I like very much, and I have read a lot of related fan fiction. I think this article is a better one. In this book, I feel that the plot is not very dragging. Although it is a daily routine, it also has some innovative new ideas. Ancient Egyptian magic was introduced. I think this is a good innovation point by expanding the entire world view of Harry Potter. Because the world of Harry Potter itself contains ancient magic, as well as magic that differs from country to country. Of course, I have also seen some book friends who feel that the writing is not very good and do not like it. All I can say is that fan fiction actually depends on people's subjective consciousness, and it's very different. Some people can accept it and some can't. I think this is a good book on ancient magic. I have read a book on ancient British magic before. This book is Ancient Magic of Egypt.