What? Potter Is a Girl!

New book…? It looks pretty good so far, 5 stars for encouragement. By the way, Snape... I don't think the character is broken. It's normal for boys to think about their father and girls to think about their mother. Even Harry in the original book can control Snape with his green eyes. If it's a girl, it's normal for Snape to be gentle... And after raising a child for a long time, he is still a guy like Lily. I think Snape can even change the coldness in the original book...

Even the donkeys in the production team cannot rest like this! Can't get enough! I never thought that the sexually-transformed Potter and Draco could be so sweet [shy]. Indeed, the movie version of Draco is really trying to attract Potter's attention crazily. No matter what angle it is from, Slytherin's way of attracting people's attention is indeed extremely crazy! I really don't want to love you too much! ! ! [Adoration] Slytherin loves someone, and even the Patronus Beast that summons the God to protect him is in the form of that person! ! Christmas gifts are all paper cranes expressing love! The young master is not good at words, but the gifts speak for him! Ahhhhh! ! But it's still a bit sudden if you don't look carefully, but overall it's very good! It has greatly made up for a lot of regrets [crying] Please update soon! Can't get enough [asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates][asking for explosive updates]

Please, don't do this to Malfoy, please. The young master is already miserable. Please

Not much to watch, a bit ooc but acceptable It seemed like Harry and Snape were not familiar with each other earlier. They had obviously lived together since childhood, and they always felt polite to each other. Also, the author took the original work too seriously. The gender-transformed Harley is definitely different from the original work. For example, when Ron complained about Hermione, as a girl, Harley should be more empathic with Hermione. The overall feeling is that the author cares too much about the original work. I feel that Harley is no different from Harry. Since it is a derivative work, I think we can let Harley have her own life trajectory within the larger framework of the original work. After all, due to the butterfly effect, Harley will definitely make some different choices in some scenes. After reading the previous part, I always feel like I have read the original work again [Thinking] This is purely my personal opinion, please forgive me if it offends! [Love]

The idea is very good, and readers want to read it, but the main plot still relies too much on the original work. It feels like a speed run, and it always gives me the feeling of reading the original work, so I only gave it four stars. If the author can add some original content later, he can add one star! [Sending hearts][Sending hearts][Making faces][Making faces] Also, please ask for more.

It's good-looking, super good-looking, it fulfills my CP dream. Don't read the comments about Harley becoming a Seeker. Some people say that if she marries the Golden Snitch, (๑ت๑) her mentality will break.

About Snape Many places in the book describe Snape's transformation. Because of Harley's existence, he is no longer alone. However, it feels that the early stage is still a bit too smooth, and it feels like a heroine halo (?) Sometimes it seems that Harry and Snape are not familiar with each other. It always feels weird to call him Professor Snape at home. Maybe the author wants to create such a character TvT About the newly added characters I don't think there is any need to be scolded. I just added a character based on the plot and the desired result (this woman thought of C. Y) At first I felt like I followed the book exactly, down to the smallest details, but then I skipped it a bit T^T

Super super super love it. Highly recommended. Before I saw this novel, I imagined it in my mind. What would the world be like if Harry Potter was for a girl? The author captured my imagination perfectly.

It's really good-looking. The content is almost the same as the actual original work. However, because Harley is a girl, a lot has changed, but it really doesn't affect it. It's very good-looking (I'm a Deha).

In the long fantasy volume of the magical world, this book builds a world full of magic and warmth for us. This book is like another pair of eyes looking out from the shoulders of giants, taking us to explore the emotions and possibilities hidden in the gaps of the story. The fanfic digs deep into the fate of each person in the story. In the original book, Harry Potter's fate is legendary and tragic. After going through many hardships, he finally defeated Voldemort and saved the wizarding world. However, the author focused on those marginalized characters, and Harry became a girl like Lily, giving her a different path. Draco Malfoy (the character is biased toward the movie version) The movie version of Draco is really madly trying to attract Potter's attention. No matter what angle it is from, Slytherin's way of attracting people's attention is indeed extremely crazy! I really don't love Slater too much!!! Lin loves a person, and even the guardian beasts that call the gods to protect him are in the form of that person (Draco and Snape). The Christmas gifts are all paper cranes expressing love. The young master is not good at words, but the gifts speak for himself. It is the Deha party that makes up for a lot of regrets. I also saw his deep love and protection for Harley. This re-examination of fate allows us to feel the complex and profound emotional intertwining behind each character. At the same time, the author weaves beautiful moments for us. Dumbledore, the wise headmaster, in the original book is always busy with school affairs and the conspiracy against Voldemort. But here, he has his own leisure time. He might be in the gardens of Hogwarts, drinking fragrant magic wine with his old friends and talking about the adventures of his youth. Or maybe he will be with "good friends" under the afternoon sun... These beautiful times allow us to see those slightly tall and distant images in the original work become vivid and friendly. This book is like a magical journey, taking us back into the familiar and strange magical world. It allows us to see the emotions, regrets and beauty that have been overlooked. It makes us understand that even a story that has been formed has infinite possibilities waiting for us to discover. In this imaginative world, the author uses his own characters to make us laugh and grieve together with those characters in the magical world, and feel the unique charm of the magical world.

Overall good, Snake. The only problem is that I don't know why the author must merge two completely different combat power systems together. Is it necessary to write about Chinese wizards? (Just write it down and integrate it into the immortal cultivation system) This caused a particularly difficult thing to do - the collapse of combat power. The most classic one is the book Mysterious Affairs War, which is completely inhuman inside and out. This brings up another problem - the sense of fate is gone. HP's sense of fate actually gradually increases, especially in the last part. If you read this book you will find out. Why was Harley the one to deal with Voldemort in the end? Obviously all of Voldemort's Horcruxes, including those on Harry. It's long gone. Why did Harley fight in the end? GGAD, Snape, and that Ling Tiansheng were all present. There will be a kind of letting it go. Of course, there are also better things written about Chinese wizards. For example, the Triwizard Tournament.

It's very interesting. I really like the characters of Harry and Snape. Can the author write more about Deha? They are so delicious.

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The book is beautiful! ! ! But there is a character who is ooc (my parents are well at home!!!)

The teacher's writing is super beautiful! But there are still some shortcomings. The module proportion of Eastern elements is actually relatively large, and the transition of the love line is also very stiff. And Deha should be the main CP, but the length feels even less than the deputy CP (Xu Heka). I hope the author can make progress slowly!

Although OOC, this is what I want to read, the author! [Adoration]

There's no big problem, I just think it's okay but the content is still pretty good.

Super good-looking, Harry had a happy childhood, CP Malfoy, Very goodദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧

Harry Potter, Drake, and Malfoy are CPs.

Although it's a little ooc, it's still pretty good

It's pretty good, but it doesn't feel like it's changed much. It's just a name change or something like that. There's no body language or physical description.

Does the author Harley have a cp?

Great writing style

My wife is so pretty! ! ! !

It's perfect. I like it so much.

Don't you mean time travel? Where is the time travel?

Personally, I feel that the war is more focused on portraying secondary characters, but Harley (Harry) has less of a role. (The author's writing style is really good)

Great, I have never seen such a good article! ! !

I found many versions of this version on the Internet, and this one suits me best. It's so beautiful.