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Large cup (above, 9.1) The advantage is that the plot is smooth, the logic is smooth, and there are no obvious poisonous points. The disadvantage is that the audience is concentrated on my Goblin brothers, the group portraits are weak, and there is no grand world that other world novels are best suited to show. Overall, it is a good book worth reading on this track, and it is recommended reading. Ps: Being rated in the big cup means that although it is not exciting enough, it is already a relatively good anthropomorphic work.

The plot is interesting, the male protagonist is likeable, there are many female protagonists, and each female protagonist has her own characteristics and shining points, and the system has a low sense of presence. I now order you to immediately update Chapter 99 a day to reveal the plot of the Saint. Don't force me to beg you.

It's really good. There are no uncomfortable points overall. It uses most of the story to describe the world and daily life. By the 400th picture, it's all about retired brave men returning to their old jobs and saving the world. There are a lot of daily life and character portrayals interspersed in it. By the last 1 00 pictures, it's a pure love story. Even I, a goblin, can read it warmly. By the way, this book is a harem plot, but it does depict the plot of each heroine. Tsk, I won't go into details, the patriarch called me to eat [laughs] Attachment: Finished reading :)

Evaluation after reading Chapter 270 The best grain and grass (small boutique) The material is a Western fantasy retreat-style novel with a lot of exciting points. The timing of the opening chapter is just right. The characters are formulaic but lovable. The plot is just right (the second entry into the palace said so). The world view and combat power system are reasonable. The pseudo-invincibility of the protagonist is also written just right. There are no obvious poisonous points. However, the description of the supporting characters and various conflicts is a bit sketchy. It seems deliberate, and the sense of existence such as abilities and equipment is slightly vague. Although the daughter's emotional deterioration is typical, the basic change of mind should not be perfunctory. The length that should be expanded should be written. The overall look and feel is a good one, with no obvious disadvantages. You can add a bookshelf. After all, it is hard to say when you can't add a bookshelf [laughter] Subjective rating four stars Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

It's a pretty good daily novel. There's a lot of fun in the book, there are a lot of jokes, and the author also has a sense of lightning protection. And what I think is the poisonous point is that the male protagonist is too easy-going, and he behaves as if he can step on anyone. Another depressing point is that a group of people in the book want to maintain the development direction of the original destiny, but the original destiny is that the heroine and the original hero come together, giving people the impression that they are a destined couple. There is also this paragraph: "Charlotte naturally handled this love letter very properly. The little girl is not the love-starved girl who was deceived by the male protagonist's good intentions in the original work. Want to conquer Charlotte? That is really a spring and autumn dream." It seems really depressing [crying]

The plot is rich and interesting, the characters are fleshed out, the story is compact, and the routines are old but still watchable. The only flaw is that the protagonist is a pure slave to his adopted daughter, at least before he sees through the relationship between men and women. Now, he just dotes on her without caring about the consequences in society. It's still the same saying that there is nothing wrong with pampering, but there is something sinful about pampering.

After watching it off and on for a long time, I finally finished it. But it's not because the work itself is bad, it's because it's so interesting that you can't put it down and read it too quickly. It has a very good worldview. Although it is a classic model of Western fantasy, it has an unexpectedly unique charm at a time when anti-routines are prevalent. Each character setting has its own advantages, and the image is also very impressive. The emotional line about Messiah and Lorraine is presented with a sense of story through the fragmentation of memories and travel notes. The only regret was that the prequel was not written, and the setting of the game world was not properly handled at the beginning, which caused Charlotte to always feel that something was missing. All in all, it is a good article. Although it has regrets, it is more joyful. There is no need to criticize too much, it is enough to bring a moment of joy.

It's a very nice book. Although the routines are very classic, the author's ingenious ideas are absolutely novel and not boring. This book is like a dessert, you can enjoy eating it. There are many jokes in the book, or too much, which may make people visually tired (I won't). Now all the conditions for a novel are met. I look forward to the next development.

After watching it, it's okay, not bad. The writing style is slightly lacking, and I feel that many aspects could be written better and more rounded. Except for the main line, the author has written many classic traditional Western fantasy stories. I like this very much, but the writing is just very stiff. The plot is semi-traditional. This is the first time I have seen this subject matter, but it is still a royal story with no difference. In the end, the family reunites and makes dumplings [face covering] It is quite good. Although it is cliché, I love watching it [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Come on, I hope the next one will be better [punch out]

It's actually very good when you take it apart, but it's too uncomfortable to watch it all at once. It feels like I'm deliberately focusing my attention on Charlotte, but it may also be my own problem [face covering]

The writing style is not particularly outstanding, but it is adequate. There are some humorous touches from time to time. The overall writing is not brilliant, but it is plain and simple with some fun. It is not an outstanding or wonderful work, but it is better because it has some parts worth appreciating, some parts of the plot worth appreciating, and a sense of comfort that is dull but steadily moving towards a happy ending. It may not be a book for everyone, but there are no obvious logical holes in the overall writing. Although the author is not very strong in writing, in terms of arranging the plot, fortunately, he wrote some somewhat typical and unpleasant things in one second, and explained them clearly in all aspects in the next second. Overall, there were basically no logically confusing parts. In this regard, it has actually crossed a high threshold, and it still has the value of recommendation. The general style of this book is more daily, not plot-driven, so it still depends on personal interests. An advantage that is not considered an advantage is that the story in this book does not have so much bitterness and hatred, so it has a happy ending with basically no regrets. Personally, I prefer this.

The plot is smooth, the foreshadowing is interesting, the system is not heavy, it is better to say it is a game panel, it feels like pushing the main line, the male protagonist's madness is also moderate, interesting but not ignorant of the overall situation. The saint of the main line can be said to be very successful, not a single detail is missed, giving full sense of expectation, the sense of being in the palace is full, hope not to live up to it, and there is also a little daughter criticized in the comment section, isn't this quite childish? Have you watched too many dramas? What's wrong with such a classic image? Quite interesting.

Overall, it's really good. The protagonist and heroine are really invincible. Overall, it has a very everyday and warm tone, very comfortable. The writing is sophisticated and has a western fantasy feel. There are a lot of daily routines in the early stage, but in the middle stage, I tend to solve things, and there are less daily routines. After solving a volume, it is basically just daily routines (other books should be called extras). As for the title, it's not a single girl anyway, but it's not a stallion either. The daily life with the adopted girl is mainly in the early stage. In the middle stage, there is basically no emotional line. In the later stage, it is mainly about the protagonist's old love debt and the daily life of the biggest heroine. Overall, it's pretty good. The title is a little deceptive (meaning that the Demon King is not the biggest villain, that is, there is still a main plot to defeat the BOSS), but the problem is not big. The emotional description is good, and the writing is also very good. It should be around nine points.

It's a good daily novel. The Western fantasy theme has a bit of a light novel style. It's good for book lovers who like daily life. It's a big improvement compared to the author's previous book. The appearance of supporting characters is just right, the pace is a little slow but the main plot is still compact, and the protagonist's character is also good, without any surprises. Overall it's worth seeing

Although I read that the first few comments are mostly negative, overall there are no flaws in the plot, and the language is relatively smooth. It is a good book worth reading. I hope the author will not be affected and continue to write at his own pace. It is very interesting. Come on.

It's a very good book. It's a rare good book that I can read on Tomato. I read it for nearly an hour and am very much looking forward to the follow-up. My only request is that the male protagonist should not start a romantic relationship with Charlotte first. This is the only unacceptable thing. Please, because it seems too dirty. Firstly, At present, it seems that the male protagonist is raising Xia as his daughter, and the change is too fast. Secondly, Xia is too young. Girls of this age do not understand what love is at all, and it is easy to interpret affection and dependence as love. If the male protagonist accepts it naturally, it will be very unfavorable. I didn't expect that it would end as soon as I started reading it. Although there are still many things I want to read that I haven't seen yet, and although there are some minor problems, there is no doubt that this book can be regarded as a masterpiece on Tomato. Whether it is the profile of the protagonists, the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, or the stories of some supporting characters, they are all well written and quite good. The type should be more group portrait. Although the group portrait is not complete, it shows some charm of other characters. Personally, I think the score can be 9.2. [Laugh]

The language is witty and the details of life are interesting. So far, the story line is pretty good and has a lot of foreshadowing. Can you change the name of the heroine? Messiah is God in the Jewish people's mouth. It's really hard to see this

Good guy, your score is too low for writing so well. Come on! The plot is compact and reasonable, and the writing is humorous and non-fiction, giving people a sense of a combination of daily fiction and adventure writing.

Nice! I hope there will be more emotional drama when writing about daily life, especially Lorraine's own inner drama. There are also those who read the more sad chapters separately to depict the characters, which are a bit frustrating. They feel that Lorraine's mentality is a bit old now. I hope that Charlotte can really get into his heart and "train" him later.

Shennong Yuebaishu: The perfect supplement The last time I saw such a comfortable Western fantasy novel was the last time () The pace is not sluggish, and the emotions are not entangled. I have already read the novel, and even did the Shura field scene. I can only say that there may be a slight tendency to write letters (crossed out) The only minor flaw is with the eldest daughter and the second daughter. The eldest daughter is really pitiful. As a result, the protagonist was still doing Tai Chi there after being criticized. The look and feel of those chapters is really hard to comment on. However, the author probably received the feedback later and weakened the second daughter, completed the narrative of the eldest daughter, and the group portraits in the whole book were also fuller (Charlotte is still in school) All in all, this is a pretty good book. I look forward to the new book!

It's not bad, it deserves a five-star 🌟. It's rare to see a relatively pure Western fantasy novel nowadays. The writing is quite smooth, and the combat power does not collapse throughout the whole process. Although it is a semi-invincible novel, the overall feeling is not too abrupt. The happy ending at the end is very comfortable, but it is for the harem, so those who are interested in the female protagonist can leave first. The full text is relatively relaxed and daily-oriented, but it also has passion and a certain degree of joys and sorrows. It is not completely family-friendly, but also more realistic. It can be said to be a good book in Tomato. I hope the author will work hard!

Very nice! Super super pretty! Overall: It's a Western fantasy novel with an everyday feel and a warm tone mixed with appropriate rants and jokes. The male protagonist has the attributes of an everyday childish but very reliable adult [laughs][laughs]. He loves teasing and making pranks to play with children. It's very attractive! [Like] [Like] The personalities and attributes of the heroines and supporting characters are also very unique. It can be said that they are happy (probably?) Moreover, the environmental description and plot development of many scenes are very good. I have nothing to say [like] [like] It has a sense of graphics and animation. I definitely like it [love] There's nothing wrong with handling emotions, it's very natural and smooth, eh...? Slightly sweet style Again, overall: It's a good western fantasy novel, I like it 😍! (Personal opinion, if you have different opinions, I hope you can look at it rationally and read more of the original text yourself. Don't just say something when you see it. The answer will be on the next page) Many people say that the protagonist gets along with several children, the elders are not like their elders, these children are annoying, the protagonist has a low status, and he still has this attitude even though he is adopted [laughs awkwardly] [vomits] [vomits]. 666, Old man, what's wrong with you, the protagonist's behavior of teasing children? No children have ever played with you, right? [Spit] [Spit] [Spit], what else are you going to do, kid? 😦! You have to talk about revenge, gratitude, and being dependent on others every day, right? [Spit][Spit] People who have never played with children are really pathetic😦😦😦😦Chinese-style families have oppressed you, right? You must have been serious when you were a child, right [vomit] You must have been very law-abiding in your childhood [vomit][vomit] You must have never played with the adults in your family, right [vomit][vomit]

Emmm, I can't understand it, but I think the plot should be exciting. People who like reading comics and anime will probably like it very much, because I can't understand the related second-generation novels.

It's very beautiful. I'll add a bookshelf first. The saint will quickly restore my mood.

While I was reading it, I was thinking about how to write a review, but after reading it I didn't know where to start. So I think you can see: "The Compromising Demigod", "The Cold Elf" and "The Straightforward Dragon Man" "Three Adopted Daughters" and "The Naughty Succubus and the Crooked Count" "What does it mean that everyone in the team is a boss?" "What do you mean by not pretending to be a demon?" "What do you mean they all like me" "What does it mean to give me some thin noodles for those who can't beat me? Let's talk to my demigod plug-in for those who can beat me." "What is the Strongest Alchemist in History" … PS: The order may be a bit messy, but it doesn't matter. The author writes well and it is a good book.

Chapter 320 (after the dragon festival), subjective score 9.4, Objective score 9.3, Not bad, but boring later It should be a harem, partially cultivated, somewhat humorous, and mainly for daily life. Overall, it has no special advantages or obvious disadvantages. It just feels relatively bland, and the secret realm is a bit watery; the system can basically be left alone, and there is no external pressure; He's a bit of a succubus, but the male protagonist doesn't feel special. Why does he grow up to the point where it affects the plot?

A standard western fantasy with good writing and worth watching. It's much better than those novels that take many detours and involve various past lives and conspiracy theories. I hope it will continue to work. Reading online articles is more of a pastime. Too complicated can make people feel bored.

It's really needless to say beautiful. ಥ_ಥSure enough, a truly good book does not distinguish between male and female readers. It is the pinnacle of Western fantasy. (Can the author change this cover after it becomes popular? My first impression was that it was fan fiction)

Let me state in advance that I am writing this review after reading the entire book. First of all, the author writes this book very well. The plot is not procrastinating, the characters are well-rounded, and the plot advances in an orderly manner. Some problems that are prone to occur in novels of the same type are also well avoided. Overall, it's a novel worth reading. But at the same time, the fly in the ointment is that it's a little short. Moreover, I spent a lot of time describing the relationship between the daughter and the Holy Maiden and the protagonist in the early stage, and it turned into a stallion in the end. This is something I did not expect, and since I have a little difficulty adapting to a stallion, I gave it four stars. All in all, this book is actually quite good. The stallion is just a minor issue and is totally worth watching.

Common Japanese manga-style novels are based on a Western fantasy background, with attributes such as daily life, comedy, and passion. If you watch a lot of anime, you can easily create storyboards. There are also shortcomings, it is too anime, some of the qualities that a novel should have are weak, and some animations have a lot of dross.