[Multiple heroines + decisive and ruthless + fast-paced]
Fated reader, you've finally arrived.
Our meeting is fate, not coincidence,
but an inevitability written into both our lives.
So could you read my book before you go?
(If you spot any typos or awkward sentences, please tag me.)
Fang Che was originally a reader who loved novels. Then he unexpectedly transmigrated, and the story began...
Su Muxue said, “Fang Che, you've pursued me for so long, and I've never accepted you. If you really love me, stop pestering me from now on.”
Fang Che replied, “A forcibly picked melon may not be sweet, but it sure quenches your thirst.”
“Besides, you seem to have misunderstood me. If you want to break off the engagement, return everything you received when we got engaged.”
Su Muxue hesitated, and Ye Fan stepped forward.
“How much was the bride price? I'll pay it back!”
“What? Can't afford it? Still trying to show off? You're nothing but a clown.”
Ye Fan: “Hmph! Thirty years... Don't look down on a poor young man! I'll repay every bit of the bride price within three months!”
There can't be more. I hope the previous plot is changed. It's too hard to accept. Isn't it awkward to watch someone take someone's body and then take another's body? The main character is a bit brainless, and you are definitely writing a villain, not unlike a pig's foot at all.
Come on, author, you need a breaking point now, you can learn from Dragon Clan