After My Death, I Became the Yandere Heroine's Beloved White Moonlight

I can only say that it is a common problem in novels. The male protagonist has been tortured very miserably in his previous life, and even got stomach cancer. He was originally reborn and did not intend to have anything to do with the former heroine. However, the former heroine shed tears, became pitiful, and returned to the heroine's company. I was so shocked. I was shocked. I originally thought that Ye Wanqing had no role, and Pei Zhiyao was behind him. Alas, the previous one was fine, so I can only say come on.

If you are being kept, don't talk about independent personality, well, unless you are Cao Dahua.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a man was lying weakly on the bed, his face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. A hoarse voice murmured: "Update soon."

The author is a little anxious, probably because he wants to promote the plot, but the character design is a little bit different. Pei is not very poisonous, and Sakura is not very poisonous, which is acceptable, but Ye is very different. As soon as he said to break off the relationship, he opened a room behind him. The first part was good, but the second part changed. In fact, it can be seen that Ye is going to be taken away, but you can write more plots about Ye, such as confessing in person, writing about who the male protagonist has offended, and then the female protagonist helping the male protagonist, and then writing about Ye's efforts, etc. Don't write about having a relationship when you have just confirmed the relationship with Pei, but delay it later, that's almost it. 🤔

Later, the male protagonist's plot collapsed, and I want to ask a child with problems in his native family who lacks love, will he still have an affair with the girl who hurt him and herself after accepting a girl who loves him wholeheartedly? The child should love that girl just like that girl, think about repaying her love, and want to give that girl the same love or even more love. This kind of child who has been loving but not being loved for a long time should care about equal love, and be more grateful, dependent, and dedicated to people who can accept them wholeheartedly. Like the male protagonist who just accepted the girl, not only did he not recognize the girl as his girlfriend, but he also got together with the woman who persecuted him in the previous life. Tsk tsk tsk, the character collapsed. The previous writing is still very good, especially the logic of the male protagonist's growth environment and state of mind is quite strict. Some descriptions of the character's charm are not recommended to be mentioned directly. For example, Zhang Sanchang is so handsome. Using an indirect and subtle way will make it look less rigid. Some of the descriptions of girls look a little bit... The feeling of being stuck, and the collapse of the character are really unacceptable. For people with family problems, breaking up with their old family is a huge thing. It requires a lot of determination. You shouldn't get along with the woman who persecuted you so easily. This is very disappointing to the male protagonist who wants to draw a clear line.

The character development of the male protagonist is a bit nauseating 🤦 [OK] I have begun to feel that I deserved it in my previous life 🤮 🤮

A little bit poisonous

To put it bluntly, the protagonist is too miserable. Before the rebirth, this was a mainstream sadistic novel, and a lot of space was spent on what happened before the rebirth. This is the first time I have read this kind of novel. This is really poisonous. If someone likes this kind of crematorium, they will probably like it very much. It is quite professional to play with the psychological gap. In your last life, you were people's favorite pet dog, but in this life you have become a wild dog, which is not interesting.

A very Akaashi novel, the second one has a bad point, I didn't read the rest

A big one.