Zero Zone: Become the Target of Players' Madness Every Day

I feel that the author's writing is still very good, but I still have a small suggestion. I still hope that when writing the new Ellido plot and the real-life plot content, the author should mainly focus on the content. In the game, the proportion of the plot content that is repeated in the real world should be smaller. A casual summary is enough. When writing in reality, the main focus should be on player comments, otherwise it will be quite uncomfortable to tell the truth. In addition, if possible, you can still shorten the intervals between the original plots and add some daily thoughts of your own, so that it will look more comfortable. It's just my personal opinion. If you argue, you're right. After all, not everyone likes this. Just a suggestion, it would be better if the author thinks it should be adopted.

Could the author write less plot? It's boring to complete a task like this for me. From my point of view, you can complete the task by yourself in the original plot. You may want to use the plot to write the behavior of the male protagonist to express his character, but now it is a bit repetitive for me. I am not a fast reader, but I can read one chapter of yours in about 1 minute. You originally planned to write about external interactions, but the current situation is that the inside of the game is too rigid and not exciting enough, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is too little. The appearance rate in the world is too low and there are not many jokes. I hope you can write more original daily routines. External live broadcasts can follow the lens of Zhe and Ling. In this way, the daily dog food will be available, and the main tasks will not be left behind. The protagonist can find a way to appear in the camera inadvertently. In this way, the effect of the live broadcast room will be better, and the explosive points will be there. In addition, it will be a big attraction to let people in the live broadcast room speculate about the relationship between the male and female protagonists at the beginning. Come on! Great author! I'm optimistic about you! [Sending Hearts]

It's been a long time since I've felt so comfortable, there's no inexplicable and forced comedy, there's no abnormality in the sudden closeness of the relationship, there's no news about the brother except for the younger sister. Anyway, there's been no surprises so far (tens of millions of people have thousands of opinions, but he hasn't stepped on any of my surprises). Please keep it up. As long as there are no big problems, I can catch up to the end! [Sending Hearts]

It's rare for someone to write about polar bears, come on

So now I still don't know who the heroine is. Is it Ai Lian? @ Orange flavor lazy cat

It's pretty good-looking. Who is the heroine?

It's pretty good. I added a self-created character and I feel good about it.

Hurry up, the child doesn't want to wait for even a second [smile][smile][smile] Really give more, the children are not enough to watch [crying][crying][crying]

Personal feeling is very good

Well, the original plot is quite good. In fact, game content from another world can be interspersed in the main text. Otherwise, there will be some overlapping plots that will make readers feel cumbersome.

The content is vivid and the description is detailed. I like it very much [Cool]

If you like it, I will read it again. Come on, author, you write very well.

It looks good. I love reading it. Come on, the author.

I'm sorry, I don't dare to say anything for fear of saying anything later, but it's really well written.

Very nice and worth paying attention to

Very good, thank you to the author

Come on, come on, come on!

A very nice book.

Add more self-created plots

Feeling pretty good about myself.

The author's writing is okay, keep up the good work, but then it's too little.

It's beautiful, but it's a pity it's discontinued [currently in development]

Yes, but there is no need to write every plot twice

The author will disappear from time to time

It's great, the characters are well integrated and the plot is not overly modified [blowing kiss]