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There is enough sugar (the details in the early stage are sweet, and there are also some twists and turns), he, no knife (the only plot kill, there is foreshadowing in the early stage, I personally feel that it is not a knife, the male protagonist who enters the divine world dies once, and reunites after six chapters), the plot is invincible, there are no highlights and no twists and turns, and the emotional development is delicate and smooth. Let's talk about the emotional line first. The emotional description is quite delicate. The male and female protagonists have different positions due to their identities (the identities are not made explicit), so the two people consider different things and behave differently during the development of their relationship. There is no plot like fighting to the death to support the boss once their identities are exposed. The candy in the early stage is not very obvious, mainly reflected in some details of the way the two get along and the changes over time. You have to find the candies yourself. When the male protagonist met the female protagonist at the beginning, he wanted to run away. After escaping once, he found that the difference in strength between him and the female protagonist was too big to escape. He showed a feeling of pampering and arrogance in front of the female protagonist, and would reach out to the female protagonist (after all, his life is in the hands of the female protagonist, it doesn't matter what he does). With a mentality of doing whatever you want); in the following decades of getting along with each other, I gradually developed feelings for the heroine, and did not want to run away, but I became more timid about my identity as a player, worried that my behavior would reveal my identity as a player (although the heroine had already I already knew about it and often teased him in this regard for fun), I was afraid that the exposure of the player's identity would ruin the relationship, and I was afraid that the heroine would kill him because he was a player; after a while, I felt relieved, and felt the beauty of this relationship, and felt that even if the heroine wanted to kill him It doesn't matter, of course, subconsciously, he still doesn't want the heroine to be the one who specializes in killing the player; later, when the hero discovers that the heroine already knows that he is the player, he just stops acting. The two of them deal with this matter with a layer of window paper, and no one breaks it, and they continue to post it. The heroine's thoughts when meeting the hero at the beginning should be two-fold. On the one hand, she wants to repair the whole skill, and on the other hand, she finds the hero interesting and teases him for fun. The female protagonist gradually got used to having such a person by her side while getting along with the male protagonist. When the male protagonist was refining elixirs in seclusion, she found that she had become accustomed to the male protagonist's presence, and found that she had developed feelings for the male protagonist. The female protagonist realizes that the male protagonist's identity is unusual after she develops feelings for him, or she may directly discover the male protagonist's identity as a player. However, at this time, the relationship continues to ferment over time, and the female protagonist can no longer do without the male protagonist, so she will let the male protagonist do what he wants to do, and will use the male protagonist's concealment of the player's identity to tease him. In terms of plot (training), it develops along the system tasks, invincible flow. The male protagonist hugs the female protagonist's thigh almost the whole time (in front of the Supreme Sky Mirror, but there is no battle in the Supreme Sky Mirror). The male protagonist is invincible in the same situation (blood lock), and the female protagonist is directly invincible. The main character hides behind the female protagonist when encountering an enemy and shouts "Madam, look at him." There are five maps in total, the Mortal Realm, the Immortal Realm, the Heavenly Realm, the Divine Realm, and the Supreme Heavenly Mirror, which rise all the way up with the development of cultivation and plot. There are not many villains, just the few players in the early stage (with different positions) and a few enemies from the past life in the God Realm, which purely serve the development of the plot. It stands to reason that the mastermind behind the invasion of the world by the players is the boss of the God Realm stage, but the mastermind behind the scenes is the male protagonist, so there is no boss. After all, the female protagonist can't really kill the male protagonist, she can't bear it, she loves him so much. I hope that if the author has time, he can write daily extras, drive a car, go to other divine realms to see the scenery, abuse food and so on. (↑Contains spoilers↑) "The Love Daily Life of Brother Bo Bing and Sister Lezi" The male protagonist of Thin Ice: "Madam, tell me, my husband has been walking on thin ice all my life, can I still make it to the other side?" "Madam, can you be gentle when you do it." Then Mistress Le... Touched her face gently, Le.

It's really good, take your time, and the plot also goes slowly. When you enter the perspective of the male protagonist, you will find that you are really walking on thin ice. There is nothing difficult for the male protagonist in the first place. The first encounter in the heroine's yard when escaping from the heroine's yard actually didn't feel that dangerous. Later, when I went to the auction, the scene where the player Dragon Girl was auctioned and then killed directly seemed to make sense. Although I don't know why, I always feel that I need to complete the task unconditionally, but when you enter it, you have no other way to improve your strength and hide yourself. It's easy to be discovered when you're alone. Conan's physique usually kills a player when he goes out. The way the male and female protagonists get along is also well written. It's a little cautious and tentative through the male protagonist's perspective. It feels a little less than love. Later, it's okay. It feels like an old married couple, but I still feel that there is a big gap between the couple. Maybe it's the male protagonist's insecurity that causes him to be on guard against everything. The other thing is that he looks good in daily life and doesn't dance. I like it [Like] ,,,,,, Why can't I find the book for review?,,

I finally started a new book, the previous one was very well written, keep up the good work!

It's good to read and I want to read it. The author will update it soon. He writes 2,000 words a day just to kill the beggar [angry]

I quite like this novel, although the male protagonist is a bit of a mess. The two of them met in the previous life but missed it. The male protagonist has always been walking on thin ice, but it's quite fun in front of the female protagonist who has a God's perspective, pulling each other, like a cat and mouse in the world of immortality. What I like the most is that when a man and a woman fall in love, love comes naturally, and they do it as soon as they fall in love. It's not like other bullshit novels, where you love it so much but you have to restrain it and you have to wait until the end to get into bed. There are quite a lot of scenes of the two making love in the front. I am an LSP and I like to watch them. I guess I am always locked in a dark room and click on them all the time. Personally speaking, the novels I have read recently are great and the plot is very attractive. I highly recommend it! ! ! ! ! After reading this book, I plan to read another book written by the author. In addition, I have to say that I read it in one breath from the early morning of November 10, 2024, at around 7 o'clock in the morning. I slept for a few hours and played a few games in the afternoon. Then it continued until around 8 o'clock in the morning on the 11th. I had to catch up with the update again, so I went to bed first!

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

I've read it three times, and the more I watch it, the more I like it. The relationship between the male and female protagonists comes naturally after preparation, without any contradiction, it is too sweet [shy][shy] The only flaw is that the process is relatively dull, but it is really rare to experience happiness in the dullness [blowing kiss] When will the new book be released [anger][anger][anger]

It feels like a female sex change, but the writing is good, but I don't feel the urgency of the protagonist's main plot. It just completes the task and upgrades. And now that I have read Chapter 70, I feel like I am about to reach the full level, but the relationship between the two has just started to improve. I hope they can control the progress in the future.

It's a very interesting story, at least in my personal opinion! Although the ending is a bit rushed and the pace is a bit too fast, it is still very good. The relationship and sweet love with the heroine in it are really interesting [laughing], and it feels very real. You won't get tired of it even after watching it, which is rare in my opinion! Because generally, after seeing the male and female protagonists together in romance novels, they will feel a little bored and no longer want to read them, but not this one, and I wish I could write more. I give it four stars⭐, and adding one more star⭐ is a matter of personal interest. I also think the rating of this book is a bit low, it should be around 9.1 Or 9.2.

I usually don't read system articles because I don't like to rely on system cheats to be invincible, but this is not the case. This daily novel is quite nice to read, maybe it is warm and warm, it should be warm. Although people's hearts are filled with excitement after reading it, the emperor's evil thoughts and righteousness are all pure love in the emperor's writings. Especially in the later stage, the various piay between the couple was simply my dream life. A little sweet

It's good [like], but the map opens too fast and the level rises too fast. It's like a condensed version. The author's last book has 500,000 words. It seems that there are only two or three maps left in this book so far. It is 80% similar to the previous book. The content is quite good. The male and female protagonists are loving, and the female protagonist is strong and doting on her husband. There are no poisonous points to try at the moment.

Good review! Although this review only has two words, it has rigorous grammar, neat wording, ingenious structure, and catchy language. It can be seen that the words are concise and comprehensive. In addition, it ends with an exclamation mark. It is really the finishing touch, wonderful writing, profound artistic conception, and echoes the sublimated theme of the previous article.

It's really good to read, but I don't know why the rating is low. Fortunately, I wasn't fooled by Tomato, but I only came in because the author's introduction was well written. It's really good to read! Highly recommended, it's just a bit short. The author will update it quickly. Damn it, why can't I wait until it's finished before reading this book? The most painful thing in the world is waiting for updates

It's okay. I thought the subject matter was quite attractive at the beginning, but in the end I didn't follow the subject matter all the way. The relationship with the heroine didn't feel that sweet. If it were more daily life, the relationship between the hero and heroine would actually be better if it had some twists and turns. My feeling was that it was bland from beginning to end. If there were some differences, it would be more unforgettable. And I think this framework can be written to a million words. The more detailed it is, the better. And then it is more than enough to complete some extra chapters with a million words. I can only say keep going.

The main line is clear. It is not delicate in daily life, but it also has unique characteristics (simple and implicit beauty). The most important thing is that it is logically rigorous and not too boring. On the whole, there is no visual barrier. If you want to talk about specific shortcomings, it would be to pay attention to the "subject, predicate, object, definite adverbial complement" in the sentences in the writing! ! ! (The sentences are a bit grammatical, and for people who have received education from the Nine Wushu Education Bureau, they are still a bit uncomfortable to read).

I have read novels written by Ruanfanwen before, but they are more intrigue and plot-based. This novel feels more relaxed and harmonious throughout. One point in particular is that the heroine knows the identity of the hero and does not expose it, which makes people feel more comfortable. There is no love-hate intertwining or twisting feeling in ordinary romance novels. It is a manifestation of high emotional intelligence that sees through but does not reveal.

It's pretty good to watch, but what can I say about the male protagonist's personality at the beginning? He's too calm, and it just doesn't match the heroine's attitude towards him. Although it's necessary for the plot, I can understand it, but it's a bit uncomfortable, and I feel worthless for the heroine, but it's not too toxic, and things get better later on. Other than that, I personally feel pretty good. Some people in the comment section said it didn't look good, so they just listed the bad points, which is inexplicable.

Just like the other one, think of it as a romance novel. It's a romance novel. Anyway, just look at the sweet love between the male and female protagonists. Don't get too hung up on it. At least for me personally, as long as I don't feel aggrieved, I can basically read it.

There are some flaws, but overall the flaws are outweighed. Although there is no grand world view or confusing plot design, the long and steady description of daily life and dog food are very good. Before going to bed after a tiring day, read two newly updated chapters by the author, and unload the tiredness of the day to sleep. I think this is the meaning of reading, and the reason why a daily article can relax you. Recommended to take a look.

How can I put it this way? I accidentally read the latest chapter. It is a casual novel with a very novel theme. It is very comfortable to read and does not make you feel uncomfortable. The writing style is also good. Overall, it is a good book.

It's been a long time since I've finished reading a book. What can I say about this book? It's really sweet and makes people feel warm after reading it, but it got a little boring in the middle. Anyway, it's really sweet, and it's also a Liu Huangshu [laughter]

This novel is so amazing! I was hooked as soon as I opened it, the plot was full of ups and downs, and there was no irritation in the whole process. The characters are described in detail and vividly on the page. The author has a profound writing skills and a burst of imagination. The story is both deep and interesting, completely immersive. It is a masterpiece and highly recommended!

It's a very interesting book. The female protagonist is really nice to the male protagonist. It's great to see that the female protagonist likes to cling to the male protagonist. However, the strength of the male protagonist was unclear in the early stages.

It's a rare book that allowed me to read his updates directly. I think the characterization is very well written, especially the daily life of the protagonist and the heroine, which is warm and funny, especially the two pets, and the world view is written in great detail🤏.

Overall, it looks relaxed, casual, daily, with no ups and downs, no intrigues (except for the male and female protagonists), no vendettas, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers, etc. The emotional line is quite natural, and the love goes on for a long time. The male protagonist's early personality is a little bit unpleasant, but I have been fighting drugs for many years.

Hahaha, I think the writing is quite good. The focus is on the interaction between the male and female protagonists. From the long-term love in the early stage to the small fun in the later stage, they are all good highlights. The other parts are not outstanding in comparison.

A good book, absolutely a good book, but it's a pity that it has been gathering dust in Tomato.

Why is this book rated so low? I think it's quite good. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are well written. They've been in love for a long time. They're both smooth and have their own interests. Hehehe [laughs]

The plot is fast in the later stage, but the daily life of Su Changqing, who is cautious and fearful, and Xie Wanqing, who is a doting husband and occasionally naughty, is really comfortable. The goddess, the ruler of the world, dotes on the weak (actually not) player husband, a light but sweet young couple (actually, it is not as good-looking as before when Su Changqing regains his full strength, but the ending will be great after Su Changqing regains his full strength).

The author still did not disappoint me. The subject matter is relatively new, and the relationship is pretty smooth. I just feel that it is unnecessary for the male protagonist to be the first one to ascend to the divine world [Chigua]