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If you're new here, just read Chapter 16 of Explosive Thunder. If you can accept it, read it. I don't understand that there can be an abusive master in Tomato. I'm actually looking forward to it before Chapter 16. I can only say that the author should work hard.

Save time: Before Chapter 37, I was a sadist, just skip it.

Not bad, more to my liking. But I still want to point out some problems. The first is that the protagonist is too weak. In other words, the protagonist always provokes some people over his own power, resulting in being beaten violently all the time, which is somewhat uncomfortable to watch. The second is that the emotional lines are very messy. The protagonist really just likes each one when he sees it, and likes it when he says he likes it. It is as simple as going to the toilet. A harem story must have some emotional foundation. The character design of the protagonist is average, neither positive nor negative, nor negative (generally speaking, the bottom line is very low and flexible). Of course, the above are just some personal opinions, please tolerate any mistakes. Finally, urge for more updates [laughs][please update]

Although I don't understand the author's logical explanation of the system, I still find it amazing. The protagonist does not have a perfect personality and invincible fighting power, but he looks more real. He will definitely look good when he grows up [Blowing Kiss] Looking forward to it. Jpg

Your writing style and opening technique seem familiar to me, but this kind of writing style is not very popular on Tomato. They all like to read cool articles, but keep it up, it's pretty good.

I think it's good and the plot is okay (maybe it's just for me). Everyone has their own tastes, so don't leave negative reviews to give others some encouragement. Just read a book if you don't like it, so just change it to the next one [Sending Hearts]

I'm going to write a great article. It's a novel routine and good writing style. I have a chance to get 9 points. No, I feel a little uncomfortable and need to be divided into installments

No, you tricked your brother into killing him [smiles]

It looks okay, but there are too few chapters. I can look forward to the future. Not bad, the character of the protagonist is also acceptable. The supporting characters are not reduced to that level and are pretty good anyway. After reading the book for many years, I think it is still very good and I can keep reading.

Not bad, I hope the male protagonist is not a eunuch, and I hope he is not an abusive protagonist

The writing is very good, it's a little frustrating at the beginning, but it becomes more interesting later on, and it has an ear-piercing taste.

Not much to say, I will definitely open a small account.

I feel that the reason for this low rating is because the first 40 chapters are too abusive and not satisfying, but the writing in the later chapters is okay. Later, he started to abuse the master again. If you can accept it, watch it. If you can't accept the abuse, give up as soon as possible.

It's good-looking, others criticized the early stage, but I think the author's protagonist needs a chance to change, and being humiliated and deeply aware of the cruelty of the world of immortality is an important node, but some parts later are still a bit poisonous. Ask the author, how many heroines are there in this book?

Why is it only rated 5.9? Such a nice thing to say [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

My ultimate succubus is so good

It's very exciting. The author will add more updates soon @ Zhaojizhou Please

It's pretty good. It's been a long time since I've seen the protagonist suffer setbacks. This kind of plot is rare in Tomato, which is full of cool articles. It depends on whether the author can grasp it with his writing skills. The future is promising.

Awesome, text, like, push [blowing kiss]

My mood was really ups and downs while reading this novel. I just found the first few pictures interesting and funny, but then I felt too frustrated as I continued reading. Although I knew it was because the first incident was the high-end game, I still felt a little uncomfortable. Fortunately, I got better later on. It was really hard for me to persist in reading it. Overall, it was pretty good, but the high-end game part would definitely dissuade a lot of people.

I have read Chapters 16 to 40, I hope there will be less of this.

Beautiful, better than 90% of Tomato novels

Good looking, good looking, love watching👀👀👀👀

It's okay, 6 points is not nearly as good as 7 or 8 points. If you write more later, the points will be lowered.

The plot is pretty good, quite humorous, I hope it won't end badly.

Hhhh, it's been a long time since I read a novel about cultivating immortals. The writing is spot-on, the plot is a bit enjoyable (there are some frustrating moments, but I'm not completely invincible), and the emotional tone is pretty good too. It's good to read ^ω^

Very nice, I hope it won't be a eunuch

Traditional fairy tales, battles between heaven and earth, life, are you ready?

The personalities of the good-looking characters are well developed.

There are a lot of flaws in the first 40 chapters, but the author's descriptions in about 40 pictures made me feel what it is to be a destiny person. Walking in the center of the world stage, all struggles take place at the center, and the struggle begins, which has become the most eye-catching focus in this drama. Chapter 43 is a happy ending. You receive the immortal's mount and travel with the immortal. There is also a section written by the author that is very good.