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Both the emotion and the plot are fine, but when describing what Gong said, you can't add so many "ah"s. It's a bit too dramatic. I always feel like a kid of several years old (just a sense of age). Removing the "ah"s makes it more provocative. It's rare to come across such an appetizing piece of writing. The author of Qiuqiu should give it some serious thought [Blow a kiss]

She's the stupid, soft, pretty type that I like. The ending written by the original male protagonist of the first story is a bit illogical, and suddenly it is said that he bullies men and dominates women. In fact, the ending of Lu Chen can be changed, such as being beaten up or something. In the small world that follows, don't arrange for the protagonist to have a child. This article has a level of 9.2, No problem.

I love watching it. I want to watch it again after watching it.

Not bad, very pretty