The Strongest Banished Immortal Was Defeated by White Lotus

The setting of the female protagonist is quite novel. At first, she calculated that the male protagonist would help her. It was very interesting, a bit like a black lotus. Later, the delicate and enjoyable writing was too much, and she occasionally felt a little uncomfortable. The setting of the male protagonist was very good. So far, the overall plot is pretty good, and the fight between the male and female protagonists is also very interesting. Watching the two of them get along really makes me laugh. It feels a bit archaic during the Cold War, but it's still acceptable. However, I feel that a lot of things have been deleted, and many places are incoherent, which somewhat affects the viewing experience (reading the comments, it is said that a lot of large-scale content was deleted?). Another thing is that there are too many descriptions of the heroine's psychology, and each time it is a long paragraph. When reading a novel, I feel like I am being preached. They keep giving me opinions, which makes me tired. At the same time, it seems that the heroine is very tangled and twisted. Maybe it is because I want to write about the heroine's thoughts. She is trying to find a balance between the concepts of modern society and the values ​​of the world of immortality, but she does not grasp it very well. The character is not established yet and it seems that she is hypocritical, but it is understandable. The most uncomfortable thing is that she is not good or bad, and her thoughts are always wavering.

Good-looking, good-looking, Book friends, I feel that the author's writing becomes more and more evident in a point of view: the heroine is not just independent, but needs to rely on herself. She wants everything around her not to be owned by me but to be used by me. We can be independent but we must also be good at using the people or things around us. Think about it, there are too many short videos or other information around us. The channels are all conveying that big women should be independent and do what they want, but what is more important for us must be good at using people or things around us to achieve our own needs. Are the big men around us just to be alone? Of course not, they are men who are more calculating and will use everything around them to satisfy their own interests, so of course we must use our strengths and avoid weaknesses I think the author's writing is super good, I like it, and each short story is well shaped. It just made me cry. The part where Ruoruo left the male protagonist in the middle was very well written. We are not dodder flowers. We Ruoruo may be a petty spirit when we usually get along with the male protagonist, but When there is no male protagonist, there will be times when our Ruoruo can stand alone. She is a very independent girl. Her independent thinking when facing those things enriches Ruoruo's writing. It is not flat at all. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhish usaaaaar. Please update soon, the author is great

She is really, really good-looking. The heroine is like a white lotus flower (not in a derogatory sense) and is really kind-hearted. She is not just pretending. Almost all of the heroine's thoughts are used on the male protagonist! ! Anyway, it is very beautiful. The author will update qwq soon.

It's super good-looking at the moment, like a combination of articles about cultivating immortals and articles about super-beautiful green tea thighs. It feels super good~! Write more meat, it depends on the actual meat [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Sink in vain and eat hard! ! ! I chased for a long time. I also gave up for a long time in the middle. I couldn't put it down and came back to watch it again. Because I'm not willing to give in! ! ! Bai's first half is very good, not a virgin, independent, deeply favored but not deep. In the middle part, Bai suddenly had an incomprehensible view. The author wrote a lot of her inner thoughts. I understand that the author wanted to express Bai's inner thoughts, but it was very contradictory. Well, people are full of contradictions... Now I feel like I have to eat it without any hardship! ! The two little ones are suffering so much. Torture for purpose. Of course this is your novel, you can write it however you like! But the reader's life is not life? If you are unhappy with the readers' complaints, you can lock up the book and write it yourself for your own appreciation! (-"-Anger) Can it be sweet?? Ang?? What is so bitter and cruel?! Ang??????? A little sorry. It's strange, I felt miserable after watching the whole show. The world view of this book is quite large. It's not easy to write it either. I am not good at writing, so to put it simply, this book is a sugar-coated glass romance novel. To put it in detail, at first it was sweet and sweet, and then the little abuser started to cut and cut with sweet and sweet, and then tortured the male protagonist, all kinds of knives, all kinds of things. It was about to be reunited, and suddenly it stopped abruptly, and the female protagonist "gave up" (of course she came back to life later, and the female protagonist seemed to "die" three times. The male protagonist had the sequelae of PTSD in the end.) The last one is he. There is lightheartedness and comedy. There is broth. There is sweetness. More depression, entanglement and anxiety! ! ! (To put it rudely: The whole text is full of nonsense!!! It's sugar-coated!!!) [Crying] Finally, the author writes very well. Four stars because my eyes were swollen from crying. [Smile]

It's really beautiful! I hope Shura Field will come soon! But I don't want the heroine to take the initiative to hook up with others, just because others like the heroine and the hero is jealous. (Personally, I feel that the character of the heroine is a bit too weak, and she has to cry and rely on the hero for everything. It was very sweet at first, but if there are too many plots, the ending is a bit bad, and it can be reduced a little.) Overall, it looks good, and I look forward to the update! Looking back, you will fall in love with the heroine. She is a resolute and kind-hearted person, but she is also cunning and uses tricks to achieve her own goals. This kind of person is very smart. And she also really loves the male protagonist. Although there are some tricks in the process of getting it, she really gives her love. She is willing to give up some boring time in order to let the male protagonist stand at the top.

It's really white lotus. In fact, people don't hate kind people, but they are afraid that kind people will pity even bad people. Although the heroine is kind, she doesn't have to be kind in everything. Although pity must be pitiful for people who have done bad things, the heroine pities him, but she doesn't think that the bad things he did can be eliminated. I think this looks very appropriate. The heroine does not use the hero's things to help others. Such a hero is really good, and such a heroine is also really good, which is very satisfying.

The emotional line progresses very quickly, the soft little master ✘The reserved little uncle is so cute. She lures him step by step to fall, but he still falls after seeing the trick. He can tolerate all her bad things, because he has other intentions for her, and he wants her. She is really good-looking. I hope that the subsequent emotional lines will always be sweet, but sometimes there may be missing words.

Looks good! ! I watched it last night and it immediately tied the knot. I saw that at 2:30 in the morning, the heroine was not a dodder flower! ! ! Although she was very weak and incompetent in the early stage and needed the help of the male protagonist, after she cleansed her spiritual roots, she no longer relied on the male protagonist. Mainly, she didn't have the strength to rely on herself! Why don't you hug me if you have thighs? She also knows that she cannot let the male protagonist indulge in love and delay his cultivation. The male protagonist wants to save the world, and the female protagonist asks the male protagonist to put the world before her! She is really nice! ! !

It's really, really good [I'm about to cry]. From the beginning, the heroine is calculating and attached (of course she's a little tempted) to being patient and strong [loving] [loving] [crying] Immortal wood spirit root, dark willows and bright flowers [almost crying] [crying] It's really not easy for baby Ruoruo, and everything she gets is worth it The author's character creation is really good, he is a multi-faceted and three-dimensional person, and the plot is not laggy at all! Really, after getting through the previous point, our heroine will arrive even though she is late! Ruoruo is a proud but strong delicate baby. Although she has plans, why can't she be kind? She helps others by herself, and there is also an explanation in the article about the need to help others to upgrade outside the space. So can some people not be so angry? This is not the Holy Mother, but a small kindness that a normal modern girl would have. [Love] I like it so much, thank the author for writing such a good meal [Crying] [Almost crying] Come on, ball ball, code word wow, an emo girl was saved [Love] [Love]

Awesome, the heroine is super sober, the heroine is conscious, knows that everything depends on herself, and does not mess with men, but the hero is so doting, the article is so sweet, reading the article with the heroine who is sober, does not delay my sweet mealòᆺó Being grateful, not complaining, and not falling into delusion, this is who you are. Now that he has fulfilled his promise and can enter Kunlun himself, that's it. Stop his unrealistic fantasies and stop the dangerous idea of ​​completely relying on one man for everything. If you continue to be obsessed with it and covet people and things that you cannot control, you will fall into obsession and become delusional. Once delusion occurs, it will be controlled by desire and it will be destroyed.

If this book is true, just go for it. It's good to watch. Maybe the heroine's early operations will make you a little confused or even disgusted? But if you look at it from her point of view, you will feel that really, this is the reaction of a normal person who has passed through the book. In the early stage, she had a bad hand, and she came through it step by step. You can also clearly feel the changes in the heroine's heart. At first, she didn't care about everyone here, so she always grew up stubbornly centered on herself. But then she stayed for a long time, accepted the world step by step, and loved those who love herself. This book is about a growing heroine. Anyway, I feel it is really well written!

It's so beautiful. I really like this kind of heroine. She's so cute. The sexual tension between the male and female protagonists is full. The male protagonist is like a walking hormone. This book is so sweet. I hope that if you open another book, you will write more like this. If you can write, you can write more. It's not enough.

I really like this tone, I just like the love-brained male protagonist, it's so cool! I just wish it wasn't the end when we met, it was so well written [Adoration][Admiration][Like][Like]

It's a very interesting novel about immortality. The characters in it have diverse personalities. Maybe some people in the comment area will say that the heroine is too pretentious, soft-hearted, and not decisive enough in her actions. But I think she is just enjoying life. The article also keeps mentioning that the heroine does not understand the hard work. In addition, the people around her are hundreds of years old. For them, cultivation is more important than having fun. The heroine is just young, which is normal. If you are soft-hearted, because she had a heart disease in the past, she attached great importance to life. In addition, she has modern ideas, which is difficult to accept and difficult to change. Because immortal cultivators are long-lived beings, one or two years is nothing to them. The heroine has a very rich personality, and she practices very hard when she needs to practice hard. In order to practice the Bigu Pill well, she can practice more than 10,000 pills, just to find a suitable method to practice the ninth-grade egg pattern. It's just that her luxurious life is somewhat over-described in the article, but I think it's okay. Enjoy it if you can, why not have to endure hardship. The male protagonist is also very doting on him. In the beginning, the female protagonist sacrificed her life several times to plot the male protagonist's heart in order to survive. After confirming her relationship, she became petty, but the female protagonist also reciprocated his feelings well. In her heart, the male protagonist is the most important. I feel that these two are like sweet little bitter gourds. They seem to be a sweet couple, but in fact their fate is very uncertain. However, they both firmly choose each other. There is no problem in their relationship. They are just the protagonists. They are both in trouble. What's more, if they are cultivating immortals, they will be happy after all the hardships. I gave it a thumbs up. I only found out after reading the comment section that I had been in the dark room before, so the plot was a bit cut out, but it doesn't matter (actually it's quite important, it's all the essence [I almost cried] [I almost cried]). The plot doesn't affect the viewing, at most it's just the greasy and crooked boudoir, so it's not a big problem.

It looks great. I like it so much. The heroine is so cute and kind-hearted. I don't think she is a saint. Growing up in a peaceful era, I think the heroine should help as much as she can. Although the heroine is relatively simple now, I believe she will become more powerful step by step. And I really like the character of the heroine. After knowing that he likes the heroine, he will admit it and is willing to find all kinds of fairy herbs for the heroine. So far, I personally like this novel very much. It is simply the love letter of my dreams [Adoration] [Adoration]. I hope the author can continue to write more. Those who criticize the author, please don't read. Those people are all nonsense [Punch out]

It's been a long time since I've encountered such a good-looking article. I read chapter after chapter and couldn't stop! The settings of the male and female protagonists are both very good. The female protagonist is not a virgin, and the male protagonist is also doting on his wife. Wow, I love watching this~ The author will update it soon!

Super pretty! It's completely to my liking, and I can't find anything bad about it, including some. Well, you said a lot of psychological descriptions are like preaching. This is more to my liking. A lot of psychological descriptions for a growth-oriented protagonist will only allow me to understand Meibao more fully. [Besides, I don't think there are many. She has her own opinion, has a tough character, and knows how to use her own advantages. I feel that this is better than many people in reality, okay? If you have an advantage and don't use it, you are a fool ᗜ֊ᗜ Come on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PS: I feel that the heroine is not what you call silly and sweet. In modern times, she was raised by her parents because of her frailty. I admit that the heroine is a little squeamish. That's because someone loves her and protects her. But after time travel, she is trying to grow independently. After being cheated once, she will reflect on it. My sister knows how to use all means to obtain benefits. [If it were you, you would do the same thing.] Will you make some so-called critical and sarcastic remarks in your turn? Ps: People who obtain dual doctorate degrees through their own efforts are called silly and sweet by you [laughing][laughing][laughing] There are people who love my sister, love her, tolerate her, protect her, and do everything for her good. I think this is normal. I like this novel very much, but when I looked at the comment section, there were a lot of people pointing fingers [? ? ? ? ? ? Squeamish ≠ Silly and sweet. A group of brainless people make remarks wantonly. Meibao's efforts are invisible, criticism is to be issued [like] [like] [like] I don't understand what you are trying to do [laughing] [laughing] Thousands of people, thousands of tastes, I can't bear to change my books. I don't know what to do with the sarcasm here [laughing][laughing] [The comments mentioned here refer to some of the vicious comments in the comment area in a certain sentence]

I really like this Cultivation to Immortality novel. I have never seen such a good-looking Cultivation to Immortality novel. Fortunately, I saw this while reading a novel tonight. Otherwise, I would have regretted missing this Cultivation to Immortality novel. It is really beautiful. I like the plot very much. The female protagonist is also very cute and the male protagonist is also a very loyal dog. Good looking, good looking, come on

After reading this book, I feel that I have almost lost interest in reading other books. The relationship between Ruoruo and Zi Heng is really sweet. I especially like watching Ruoruo's unreasonable troubles and then Zi Heng helplessly doting on Ruoruo (I secretly praise the author's driving scene, which is really touching. I like it so much)

The plot of this book is quite good. I am interested in reading it. The rating is low. Both the male and female protagonists like it. Anyway, I only read the short stories and rarely read the novels. I can keep reading this novel, which proves that it is really good.

It's so good to watch, and the plot is getting more and more interesting. It started with a sweet romance guide, and now the heroine is a modern person with good cognition, and she is in a completely different environment, and she is struggling with the inner demons caused by hesitation. I have been following this book for a long time. It is the only one that I am waiting to update every day. I understand that the heroine is actually very charming, both divine and human. She is so well portrayed.

It's been a long time since I read a long novel, and it took me a long time to finish it. Every time I opened it, I couldn't bear to quit. When I saw the ending, I was a little unresponsive, but I felt that the story we saw should end here, and Ruoruo and Ziheng would continue to live happily in their world. The author did not explain everyone's ending, but I think the direction of the characters in the story belongs to them. We know that everything is developing in a good direction. It would be fine if every character in the story lives in their own little happiness. All in all, this is a very good novel. It really made me cry and laugh at the same time [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][laugh and cry][laugh and cry][laugh and cry][laugh and cry]

I think it's very beautiful. Some people may think that the heroine is too pretentious in front of the hero, a bit white lotus or something, but anyone who has watched it carefully knows that the heroine just chose the path that suits her, and did not harm the interests or lives of others. It is reasonable for the heroine to cry easily. People like me who have incontinence of tears cry easily. Before the time travel, apart from worrying about her illness, the heroine was living a pretty good life. But she would definitely not be able to adapt to the world of immortality where the weak eat the strong. I thought about it, it would be the same if it were me, so there are some places where the heroine is not soft-hearted.

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is very good. The male and female protagonists are also very affectionate and very sweet, but I really want to say, can the female protagonist stop crying all the time? It's so annoying. I feel like she's crying in every chapter. She cries whenever she thinks about it. When she sees the male protagonist crying, she's crying again when she follows her brothers and sisters. When something happens, I feel like crying again. I really...

Super good-looking, you won't lose money if you invest in it! I just hope that I don't abuse the male and female protagonist too much. Every time the female protagonist and the male protagonist get hurt for me. I was so careful because you were injured so badly. I just like reading sweet articles. Your mood will also get better

It's really good-looking. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. I can't bear to part with it after watching it. The tender little vixen and the big ice cube will keep the sweetness together! May you walk hand in hand on the road to immortality, stay with each other every year, and for the rest of your life, you will always have only each other in your eyes, and be happy forever [blowing kiss] Noon on March 18, 2026

It's pretty good to watch. The male protagonist is either a cold-blooded type or I found out that the author is really stupid about his names. The female supporting characters are all ABB. The male protagonist's name is Zi Heng. It always reminds me of the autistic kid Heng on Douyin [crying with laughter]

Good-looking [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] Tastes to me. Big boost for the author! ! ! Shen Ziheng is really amazing, the little fairy man ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ! ! It really pokes me [shy]🌹

It's really beautiful. The heroine is so cute and the scenes with the male protagonist are so beautiful.