You Have Only Eight Years to Live from the Start, and You’re Going All In?

While the article is refreshing, the organization of the article and the plot of the story are also pretty good. , Ok, the protagonist's plug-in can basically be regarded as unlimited wish fulfillment and creation out of thin air. In the later stage, I started to establish the character of the Virgin. The protagonist is a savior who only kills gods (equivalent to demons) and does not harm other people's lives. Even if it affects his overall situation, even if others see him killing someone, he will not kill him directly even if he spends his life to help them forget about it. It saves trouble.

It's pretty good, the quality is good. The beginning is amazing, but the first 30 pictures are not of the quality that belongs to this platform. It can be seen that the author has carefully polished the idea and created the weird atmosphere. Moreover, the protagonist's cheats in the first 30 chapters are also very interesting. But it's a pity that after chapter 30, it basically returns to the ordinary martial arts style. Of course, the quality is still good, and the writing style is relatively better than average, but it is a bit cliche, but that is understandable for the sake of update speed. There are a few minor flaws, some misremembering data, and some snack books, but they are innocuous.

You are right, but "Genshin Impact" is a new open world adventure game independently developed by miHoYo. The game takes place in a fantasy world called "Tevat", where those chosen by God will be awarded the "Eye of God" to guide the power of the elements. You will play a mysterious character named "Traveller". During the free travel, you will meet companions with different personalities and unique abilities. Together with them, you can defeat powerful enemies and find your lost relatives. It's very well written, keep up the good work [laughing evilly]

Li Baozheng committed murder and set fire, and saved lives and injured Ding Tianzun. This protagonist is really as stable as an old dog, and his cunning is boundless. Except when he is forced to start, he never fights opponents who threaten him. If he can crush him, he will let his subordinates attack first or make a cunning move. When he stands in front of you blatantly, it means that the kill line is reached, and the hand will start in seconds at 0 frames. Sometimes I can't tell who is the villain. It doesn't matter if my subordinates die or not. Only by surviving can I get a chance to go further. I always say that my cultivation talent is not good. If there is ruthlessness in this world, my talent will definitely be the top one [laughter]

Pig's feet are decisive in killing and thoughtful, which is quite good. The author's character creation is also very good, but it's just not interesting enough. Take your time. 1. The author's writing style is solid and the beginning is quite novel. Although it is a systematic article, all the achievements are achieved step by step by the protagonist. It should be said that he risked his life. 2. I have listened to the latest chapter, but the division of tiers is still a bit vague. I hope the author can explain the divisions of tiers in more detail (it is written in the article, but I can't remember it. I don't read much, I just listen to books). 3. The protagonist is really thoughtful, decisive in killing, and the character is well created. Hope it can continue. I can feel that the world view behind it is very big. Come on, author! ! ! !

Although, the content is pretty good It can be seen that the author really wants to describe the male protagonist's normal needs for female lust, and it is more important to become stronger. This trait is well described to create a tough guy character for the male protagonist. But if the protagonist's personality is really like this, then why are there so many body descriptions or similar to h-texts? Bringing it into the worldview and into this book, as long as this character stands under the gaze of the protagonist, those wild thoughts are all welcomed by the protagonist. (The narration is actually more like the author's yy) What I saw was really fragmented, and it felt like it was being forcibly shaped. Based on the above judgment, the author actually really wanted to open a harem, but he set up a character for his protagonist who did not open a harem. For example, it was all about getting stronger, and he had no choice but to do something big when he was done. As a result, the writing looked like a harem but not like a harem. He took out the appearance of a harem, such as two-way love, marriage, wives, and concubines, but he did not remove any pornographic content buried under the harem article. This is a stallion article that does not involve a harem, but is full of stallion imagination.

It's really good to watch. The protagonist kills decisively along the way, from weak to strong. The rhythm is smooth in the early and middle stages. Although the rhythm is slightly delayed after the upper realm, it is still worth watching. After entering the world, the rhythm begins to recover. At least I feel more interested. I give the author a big thumbs up. I would like to suggest that the plot of the matryoshka dolls can be slightly reduced. Even if you write a novel, you will inevitably have this problem. I also want to ask whether the weirdness and rules in Tianwaitian are planned to be detailed or is it just a setting to promote the story.

It actually looks pretty good. There are no major problems in the main plot. The major decisions are all interestingly written. The world view is not bad. However, there are many minor problems. First of all, the author doesn't remember the settings he gave me directly. He just wrote the previous ones and then forgot about them. Secondly, the protagonist's IQ is low and he can't even use the golden finger. He has to use his lifespan to burn corpses at the beginning. This stands out. It's inexplicable. How can a village not use fire? What's there to be afraid of when there's smoke? Then for more than 200 chapters, I repeatedly emphasize how awesome Changchun Kung is, but the result is that I don't break through the realm or strengthen it, and then I don't redeem the immortal skills. It takes more than 300 years to break through a Yuan Aperture that can be broken through in just a month. However, this novel is still quite fresh and interesting.

It's from Douyin Shrimp, hahahaha. It's a very good book in the early stage. The subject matter is very new and the writing is very solid. I'm a veteran. I'll give it a five-star rating. Unfortunately, it becomes cliche later on. You'd better think of a few more good themes.

Many people simply have no correct criteria for judging whether a novel is good or not. In my opinion, whether a novel is good or not depends on only three aspects: script design, worldview shaping, and the degree of innovation in techniques. This novel does well in all three aspects, that is, it is a high-scoring novel. Many novels have a lot of fancy settings, but when you look at them, they still play with numerical values ​​and deus ex machina. Although this novel also plays with numerical values, its numerical values ​​are designed to promote the plot and jump around the world without getting stuck. It is not just a super model. The specialty of this novel is that the world view is well designed and has a sufficient sense of immersion. Although the plot is also a "big main plot", it is written very delicately, and the clips that bring out the side plots and other forces in the world are very smooth, without the grinding feeling. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are definitely very high.